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Reviews for Room Service

By : PhoenixWolf
  • From FoxyLilVixen on September 05, 2006
    Hehehe!!! This is gonna be good! *grins evilly* Poor Kags... Well maybe... Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see what kind of mischief these two manage to get into. Can't wait! Ja ne, Michi
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  • From EternalTwylight on September 05, 2006
    Wow, I really butchered the word "service". *coughs* Nice chappie again, and equally evil cliffhanger. -- Oh my.. Kagome how flexible you are. --
    I wonder just how blunt he'll actually be with her and his questions. You might want to explain just how he seems to know she's a miko and why the heck a priestess would be cleaning hotel rooms. And kudos for getting the next installment out so quickly.
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  • From Rebeldedm on September 05, 2006
    Longer chapters girly is the key to patients lol.... I luv it keep it up... ^__^
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  • From ANON - Cancan227 on September 05, 2006
    AAAhhh!!! MEANIE!!!

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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 05, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From EternalTwylight on September 05, 2006
    Indeed a very evil cliffie and like many others... wow I thought I was bad. *egrins* Interesting concept, I'm dying to see who's standing behind her now and how he gets around her defenses. Hmmm, title suggestions.... how about "The Continental Serve", just a hint at like special room serve *chortles* I mean she does work for the Hotel and all. *whistles innocently* Without further understanding of the full story idea that's all I can suggest for now. But maybe with the next chappie I could offer something else.
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  • From Ceridwyn on September 05, 2006
    Alrighty! I can already tell this is going to be one hell of a story. What a major cliffie too! I thought I was evil. I can't wait to see what you cook up next. BTW, I put you on my mailing list. I'm going to try to write more soon. Seeing as how some people aren't used to cliffies, you ought to make the next one even crueler than this one. Just to be reeeally evil.....~laughs like the evil person she is~

    ~Much Love~

    Faerie Demoness
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  • From ANON - karine on September 05, 2006
    WHAT ? It's this some kind of a sick joke ? HOW DARE YOU STOP A CHAPTER LIKE THAT ?!! Now..... Your story is so great ! You must really keep up the good work. Please update soon ! Just can't wait to read more of it ^^
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  • From ANON - kikiz on September 04, 2006
    its really cool i like it
    and the name of the story??
    what about "hotel shikon" jeje im not good in this -__-

    well byee


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  • From ANON - raven28 on September 04, 2006
    it grat can't what to see what happens please up dit soon
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  • From ANON - Kero on September 04, 2006
    *Growls* Now I know what it feels like to have a CLIFFY THROWN IN YOUR FACE. How irritating! It is frustrating and now I see what it does to people. Now I am going to be thinking, what the heck is going to happen? *Cries* this is not fair I want to know what happens.

    Anyway, great work. I absolutely LOVE this story. It has so much potential to be a great success. I like how you have made Sango very …profound. Like all business type and yet with an elegant type of friendliness to her. Sango is one of my favorite female characters after Kagome of course. I found you portrayed her very well.

    I have never read a story where Kagome was a cleaning lady. It was different to say in the least. Makes you think tat the author is more out of the box so to speak. *Maniacal Laugh* InuYasha is such an ass.

    If you’re going to make this a actual story and not just like a two-shot or something. Please I am begging you; I know you said Kagome was a miko. But, please have Kagome strong. I have read to MANY stories where Kagome is a helpless girl who is always getting kidnapped.

    But, before I nag you to death; this is your story. So, it is merely a suggestion, not a demand. All though it would be nice.

    You have a great talent and a hint of creativity that I see in what you write. I congratulate you on your success on creating one heck of a first chapter. Truly and utterly a fine piece of work. I can’t wait to see what else you come up with. I will wait with open arms to see what your next chapter will be about.

    Please update soon :)

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