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Reviews for The First Time

By : SilenceoftheHeart
  • From ANON - Drug_Like_xxx on September 06, 2006
    ...0_o oh my god that was hawt...haha,
    it was awesome, keep it up, I want more =]
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  • From ANON - SP777 on September 06, 2006
    I'll say this much, despite whatever it was that inspired you to write this..it had a
    different type of feel to it.

    The description of the sexual encounter [it wasn't lovemaking] gave me the impression
    that you write from experience :-) OR you did your homework. Because basically what
    I've been reading so far, the sexual acts are starting to sound the same.

    You, so far, added a slight flavor to their many numerous [..and written about..]
    sexual encounters and I haven't seen something like this in a while.

    DO you think you can continue something like this?
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  • From ANON - ren on September 06, 2006
    could be mating season is begining and inuyasha hasn't had his first heat yet.

    anyho i love the story keep writing
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 06, 2006
    Not bad! It could use a beta I think, but you definitley have a good little smutlet here!
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