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Reviews for Birthday card

By : tsikinoodango
  • From ANON - ASHLEY on October 19, 2006
    You need to update asap. I wanna know what happens next. I love this story and don't you dare think about stopping it again.... nearly gave me a heart attack when you posted that the first time. lol. Seriously update soon. Your a great at this writing stuff lol.
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  • From ANON - Badgrl74 on October 18, 2006
    I miss your story! I haven't read fanfiction in a month! This really is my guilty pleasure!
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  • From PhoenixWolf on October 10, 2006
    Whew! *fans face* That was some HOT stuff!

    I a soo glad that you have decided to continue with this story! Will you still be doing another "Card" story?

    I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
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  • From ANON - slm111 on October 09, 2006
    wow talk about hentai. loved it very good bravo continue on now please.

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  • From ANON - Aaliyah Starnight on October 09, 2006
    yeah you updated
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  • From ANON - angel on October 09, 2006
    ~giggles ~ that was great ... i love it and now he knows why she left .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - hi-ya on October 03, 2006
    that is so not an ending!!! wat the hell kind of ending is that?! thats just the middle, maybe close to the end, but not end!!! no offense, i know that was wat, ur 1st, maybe 2nd story here?! but that still doesn give you a reason to have such a sucky ending, that sequel better come soon, and it beter be good, better yet, just continue this story, no need to waste everyone's time looking for the new title and all, since this is in no way complete (at least not by normal standards) u should just continue it on in here, dont stop it, your killing it before it even has a chance!!! it was a great story, and i loved it, but thats not an ending, not by a long sho, if u end it there, your droping yourself from one level of authors (ones w/ great plots and good stories,) to a lower level of authors (not sure which one at the oment) point being, your just hurting yourself, cause the first book in your series, or watever, its what people judge your work on, if itrs a bad beginning story, they wont read sequals, if its good, they will, if its a good story but sucky ending, that makes readers think "is that wat kind of books the others will be like?" and that makes them think of not reading anymore of them, and noone reading=a big waste of your time writing them. plus, this helps you 2, because u seem sad your ending it, well dont, because its not done yet, ok, thats all i'll write, plz hurry with either the sequel, or the next chapter, which ever you decide to do.

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  • From PhoenixWolf on October 02, 2006
    Aha ha ha ha! Kagome tricked Inu Yasha when she was little into wearing the subduing necklace! *wipes at tears* Oh, classic.

    Now, I can't wait for the sequal to come out! Just remember to try and get more sleep between postings. Try not to post a chapter when you are too cross-eyed to look at the computer. We will wait an extra day or two for you to proof and add as you see fit.

    What about your other story, Dark Times? I haven't seen any updates there for a while. *like I'm one to talk!* I really enjoy your stories and am looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

    Until we meet again.
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  • From ANON - Aaliyah Starnight on October 01, 2006
    oh my god i loved it but where is the lemon i wanted a lemon
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  • From ANON - angel on October 01, 2006
    ~lol~ that was great and she gave in the beads when she was 5 .. and he made clames when she is 5 man inu yasha holding her to a clame since she was 5 is not nice.....i cant wait in till the sequel ... in till then later for now

    angel
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  • From PhoenixWolf on September 27, 2006
    Yay! A new chapter! And I like it! A card in the room that only the Lady of the Moon can find, clever. I can't wait to hear what Inu Yasha has to say about his appearance in Lover's Park.

    Great chapter. PLEASE update again really soon!

    Until we meet again.
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  • From ANON - angel on September 27, 2006
    awww that was sooo sweet ... i cant wait in till the next update ..... please please please update soon .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - C'Asia on September 27, 2006
    can you finish this
    story soon i would like
    to know what is happening next
    update soon please

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  • From ANON - Aaliyah Starnight on September 27, 2006
    loved it
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  • From ANON - kawaii-miko on September 27, 2006
    why leve when u 2 go back straight away
    its real good so far i like it and cant wait to read more
    UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
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