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Reviews for Birthday card

By : tsikinoodango
  • From ANON - C'Asia on September 08, 2006
    plese update soon
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  • From ANON - midnighttimberwolf on September 07, 2006
    Oh my that was a cool first chapter... I loved it, I can't wait to read more, you gotta update and soon. Loved
    the plot sexy and mind blowing... Update soon
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  • From ANON - Jazzy on September 07, 2006
    PLEASE write more!!!!!! this story sounds really awesome.
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  • From PhoenixWolf on September 07, 2006
    Hello. I like the first chapter. There are a few spelling "oops's", but other than that, this is a good base to the start of your story. I can't wait to find out where else she has to go. and what is waiting for her at the end. I can't believe that I am going to say this, but, try to draw the story out. Make it interesting, imaginative and fun, but remember, you set the time as for that day, so it can't be too many things.

    I know, I sound like I am lecturing. Sorry. I just really wish to see you bring out all you can into your story. And if you don't like my suggestions, don't follow them. Or if you do like them, by all means use them if you like.

    *sigh* Lecturing again. I'm sorry, again. I'll shut up now, and let you get back to doing what you were doing.

    I can't wait for your next chapter. Could you Email me when you update? Later.
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  • From ANON - C'Asia on September 07, 2006
    hurry and update i would like to know
    what will happen
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  • From ANON - ~lovableangel~` on September 06, 2006
    awww thats sooo cute funny that today is my b-da to!!! haha but keep on goin wanna know wat happens
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  • From ANON - SesshomaruCrazy on September 06, 2006
    This is cute.. I hope you have more chapters for this story.. I enjoyed reading it.. Plz hurry and update the next chapter.. Dont leave it at a one-shot...
    Mari
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  • From ANON - Kero on September 06, 2006
    Shit, that was some messed up. But, I absolutely LOVE IT. This is so creative. I wish I have a talent like this. It really isn’t fair! Maybe I can swap brains with you or something. I adore this first chapter, you have to update soon. I need to know what happens.

    Well actually I think I know what happens. But, I still want to read this. So, please update as quick as you can. I have never said this to anyone before, because I love ‘stories’. But, I think this would make a great one-shot instead of a story. Maybe, maybe not?

    Anyways, again you have a wonderful piece of work so far. You have a creative ability that I haven’t seen in a while and it is a nice breather. So, I congratulate you on your success and hope good things come to you in the future.

    Please again, update soon. It really is killing me not knowing what is going to happen. I want TO KNOW *growls*


    Bi

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  • From ANON - Kryssala on September 06, 2006
    Plot is good, though I think something ate your punctuation.
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  • From ANON - raven28 on September 06, 2006
    i love it can't what to read more please please updet soon i wont to now how long he going to have her run
    around?

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