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Reviews for A Blind Heart

By : JadedInu
  • From ANON - Virginia Perkins on February 15, 2016
    A VERY well written story, I just wish it was finished.
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  • From lara5170 on March 18, 2012
    This story is amazing & I don't what to do. I'm dying to read the rest of this but it's not here on this site and I have no idea if it's been continued or completed on another site. I will have to search every possible site I can think of & I really pray that I find it.
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  • From Reymond on October 21, 2007
    I understand that such a nice complexity in the story becomes a difficulty to the following chapters and the description of the big battle. If you have no more enthousiasm to write it, perhaps could you put a chapter to end it quickly, with only the ideas you had in your head ??? It would be appreciated...
    Thank you !

    Your french reader,

    Merely Truth
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  • From MacAnimeGirl on August 08, 2007
    Hi!!!

    I really love your story. It's quite interesting.

    The view that it takes on Kagome and Kikyo's connection is very unique. Would you email me. I would like discuss the second part of my story with. It has something to do with your own. My email will hopefully be included in this review, if not here you go (of course the email is without spaces) MacAnimeGirl (at) AOL . com

    I hope you update it soon.

    Thank you!!!
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  • From Reymond on May 30, 2007
    Such a big story, full of subtilities and actions ! Must not be easy to write, sure !!!
    Well THANK YOU to write it ! That's good, and I wonder what bigger that lately can happen ???!!!

    Coucou de la France,
    A french mother and reader,

    Merely Truth
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  • From flamingangel on February 17, 2007
    I love the story! I couldn't help but notice that there are still a couple minor errors here and there, but not so much, and they don't detract from the story. I love the imagery, especially picturing a young Sesshy chasing his tail! I can tell that this story is going to take quite awhile, and alot of writing, so I pray that you don't lose interest in writing it as I can't wait to read more!
    Ah, and as per your one question, I think that the story would go much quicker if you did stick each level of training into one or two chapters, but I don't think that it would really work with the story line, as the first level of training was divided into, what, fourish chapters? Granted, four chapters for six more levels of training would be INSANE (24 more just for training, nowhere near including the final battle with Naraku) So I wouldn't really reccomend you keeping them horribly spaced, either. I think one or two chapters per level would be enough, of course with the occational breakish chapter for indulging more into the characters.
    Gah, I hope that all made sence, this is by far the longest review I've written to date, and it's... ohshit 6am! I should sleep now!
    Keep writing, I can't wait to read more!

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  • From mrskgoodman on February 13, 2007
    First I would like to say I liked this chapter, I was wondering when Ayame and Kouga was going to mate. Now the actual mating chase was nice. I have never seen that in all my reading. I love the detail you have placed in this fic and would love to see each level in one chapter would be great.
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  • From Morningdove666 on February 10, 2007
    Would really appreciate it if terms where givin before the story.
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  • From HoshiGiniro on January 15, 2007
    OMG i cried my eyes out when they had that quarrel im not saying i enjoyed the repeats when it came to the different point of view but when it came to that lovers quarrel i sobbed twice i hope you make a new update soon i really want to see this story finished eveutally it would please me greatly you are doing a wonderful job and even tho they say you have grammar errors i havent noticed
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  • From ANON - Badgrl74 on January 12, 2007
    Wow, I have been waiting for Kagome's trial, and boy did you deliver! I enjoyed Ayame's as well. It gave much more insight to her character. As usual you have sated my thirst for the KagSess pairing. Thank you thank you thank you!
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  • From ANON - Kawaii Kilala on January 12, 2007
    Hey!! This is a great story, and I hope the rest of it will be just as good! It took me a whole two and a half days to read it! I am soooo tired now!!! LOL!:-P
    Well, I hope this Does have a happy ending and that all eight of them find peace, which you said will happen...also I am a henai sometimes, and can't wait for when Maru and Kags have a little doggie fun while in demon/true form...that would be sooo hot!
    Also, in the last chapter...'A two-sided coin'...I saw that in the last chapter you had a very funny thing happen, are you aware of Hercules? The son of Zeus, and the pink person, I forgot her name...NE ways! there is a point to this! Well, the first sentance in the paragragh, well, his dad -Zeus- says it when Hercules becomes a god by saving that girl...Megg...He says "For the measure of a hero is not what he does, but the strength of his heart." I know for a fact, because my 3 year old daughter loves that movie, and it's like totaly imprinted on my mind...so, were you aware of this? Cause that is a very good line and all, but you might want to point out that you don't own the movie...unless of course you Do, than you can do what ever you want with it, but still....that is so you dont get sued by any one...
    Again, GREAT CHAPTER! Hope you up date another chapter soon, and It's the year 2007! YAY!!
    TTYL;
    megan
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on January 11, 2007
    That chapter really showed me why life is so precious. I hope you update soon.
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  • From porygon75052 on January 11, 2007
    why make all the chapters a different pov chapter of the same event insent that a little repetative this is a great stpry i just wish it would stry 3rd person and not switch tpo different pov covering the same event it really slows down the story please send a reply
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on January 09, 2007
    wow the story is getting real good and i cn not wait for more of the story and see if they beat nuarka . good luck on the story and i will be wait for up date soon.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf (to lazy to log in) on January 07, 2007
    I am still teariing up after reading this chapter. *sniffles* I like the ending with everyone all in one bed like puppies, so cute!

    I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Until we meet again my friend.
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