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Reviews for A Blind Heart

By : JadedInu
  • From Ceridwyn on September 15, 2006
    This was so cool. I love how you portrayed everyone. And a spell of Longing. Hmm...what exactly was Sesshoumaru longing for that brought he and Kagome together? I really like this story, it has become one of my favorites. Everything is going so smoothly. Do me a favor though? Break up some of the paragraphs. Sometimes the words run together and it makes it hard to read. Also, I noticed a few miss quotations. Be careful. One more thing, you're doing pretty good at this, but make sure you make new paragraphs when a differnt person is speaking. Oh oh, one last thing...I love Sailor Moon!!! I wish I could see that last season! I never got to see the starlights. Damn it all. I can't wait to see what you've got next!

    ~Much Love~

    Faerie Demoness
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  • From ANON - Angie on September 14, 2006
    Wow..omg THIS is a really great fanfic... you really must cont. im dying to know what happens next....hmmm *sighs*
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  • From PhoenixWolf on September 13, 2006
    PLEASE PLEASE please update soon! I need to read more of your story!
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  • From ANON - Shanalir on September 12, 2006
    Great new chapters. I can't wait to see what you have in mind for the 'Mating Rituals.'
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  • From ANON - fire_eyez on September 12, 2006
    great story! i love how you put both pov's. it makes it more interesting since we get to see what both of them are going through. i cant wait for the next chapter!!!! Im addicted to this story now!!
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  • From PhoenixWolf on September 11, 2006
    Damn! Sesshomaru sure is talkative. But he is soo hot, who cares! I like what you are doing with this story, and I can't wait to find out where you are leading it to. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next! *anxiously sitting on edge of seat, waiting for next chapter*
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  • From ANON - Kryssala on September 11, 2006
    Thank you for not useing Koi as a term of enderment. Everytime I read it in a fic, all I see in my head is a Koi fish with Kagome's head swimming around. It almost seemed like this chapter could have had more dialog between Sess and Kagome. Yes, every chapter is getting better. You have come a long way from your first posting. Keep it up! :)
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  • From PhoenixWolf on September 10, 2006
    Now that is a cliffie! Please update soon, I really wish to know what happened. Till then, Later!
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  • From ANON - pucie on September 10, 2006
    I love this story!! Please Please Please update soon! You're so evil for leaving a trailer. . . .
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  • From ANON - swtdrm01 on September 10, 2006
    I love it. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Pucie on September 10, 2006
    AAAHHHH!!! I love it, I'm only thru half of the first chappie, but I had to review it so far anyway!! I love love loved the "Note to self" bit. . . .I do that all the time!! Ok, gonna finish what's up already, and beg you to update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Shanalir on September 10, 2006
    Realy intriguing story. I'm enjoying it a lot! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - madmiko on September 10, 2006
    Hilarious!! I love the format you've chosen to write this in. This is really good, and I can't wait to read more! Thanks for posting!
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  • From Kryssala on September 10, 2006
    Lol, I can almost see the look of confusion on his face just before he blacked out. Loved the description of her powers changing.
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  • From ANON - blackicekitten9 on September 10, 2006
    please please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    loving it!!
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