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Reviews for A Blind Heart

By : JadedInu
  • From ANON - Magdalen Millicent on September 10, 2006
    MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Spazz on September 09, 2006
    WOW!! This is really good!! So yeah I couldn't stop reading it till that last chap. Could you please hurry and post another one soon. PLEASE!!
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  • From Kryssala on September 09, 2006
    nice job on this one. every chapter is getting better and better. I'm still amazed you put out so much material in such a short time. It happens though. Sometimes the stories take on a life of their own.
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  • From PhoenixWolf on September 08, 2006
    Damn! What a chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens nex. So, what happens next? *hee,hee* Update again soon, please. I really want to find out what happens.
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  • From ANON - Faerie Demoness on September 08, 2006
    This is awesome. You are doing great. One thing, I know it's hard to write a whole heck of a lot, but do yourself a favor. Set a goal. Say, try writing five pages worth without doubling back on your story. (i.e. the switching back and forth between Kagome's and Sesshoumaru's point of view) Then if you feel you can do it, write six, then seven as more things come to you. For instance, I always try to make sure I write at least seven to eight pages. If I go past that, then yipee! It'll make you feel good in the end to know that you have given your readers something to look forward to. Also, you don't have to write it all in one sitting, take your time, although some of us are sitting on our hands waiting for the next chapter to come out...I hope this helps and it doesn't offend in any way. Continue writing, you have a lot of potential.

    ~Much Love~

    Faerie Demoness
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  • From ANON - Kryssala on September 08, 2006
    I like the idea of a spell, very interesting. A note on slowing things down. Remember the characters have five senses. while you don't have to use all 5 at the same time, one or two can help you set a mood or setting. The descriptions of the way her Miko powers washed over him was good and same with the color of the trail they followed. find more places to add in stuff like that. If you haven't read it yet and like vampire stories, try the Anita Blake series by Laurell K Hamilton. It is all writen from Anita's pov. It might give you some suggestions on how to slow down things down a bit.
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  • From ANON - midnighttimberwolf on September 07, 2006
    Wow! I loved it... The story is a good one, I love it. I can't wait to find out what is causing everyone to act so different. The way you're writting is cool... It's better to get an understand than not to see what is going on. I like it UPDATE SOON...
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  • From PhoenixWolf on September 07, 2006
    Ooooo.... I can't wait for the next chapter! This is a hell of a story.
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  • From ANON - Faerie Demoness on September 07, 2006
    This was much much better. ~claps hands~ Yea! I like it. Keep up the good work.
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  • From LdyMoon on September 07, 2006
    So far this story sounds interesting. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Shanalir on September 07, 2006
    OK, now I'm hooked. You've completely captivated my interest, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - sexkitten89 on September 07, 2006
    cool cts cant wait till these more;D
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  • From ANON - Faerie Demoness on September 07, 2006
    I hope he has a good reason for asking her right off the bat to be his potential mate. Its moving a little too quickly. Inuyasha think he's gonna take her away from his brother? And how did he find them so quickly? Where's the rest of the group? Are they following behind? Sesshoumaru seems a little out of character to me, but hey, its your story, do as you please. The plot is pretty good though. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

    ~Much Love~

    Faerie Demoness
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  • From ANON - Kryssala on September 07, 2006
    *claps hands* yes!! much better! The flow was so much smoother and it didn't seem rushed.
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  • From ANON - infinite silence on September 07, 2006
    Hey I really am enjoying this story I do hope that you continue it. It is very well planned as far as i can see it. well i had better go it is kinda late.

    Infinite silence
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