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Reviews for This is Gonna be Fun (uncensored)

By : szaugg
  • From ANON - me again (entropy9) on October 12, 2006
    last review...I'm going to bed but I wanted to ask about this paragraph;
    Inuyasha watched Miroku’s hand slide down to Sango’s bottom and squeeze as he pulled her closer. His other hand was busy doing who knew what with the front of Sango’s kimono, but whatever it was, it was making her arousal climb steadily higher. She whimpered against him, rolling her hips against his pelvis, and Inuyasha finally turned away. He swallowed and shifted uncomfortably, covertly reaching down to adjust himself under his clothes. Damn hentai, he cursed, irritated.
    This is from Inuyasha's viewpoint, so does that mean he can sense Sango's arousal? I thought it was new moon night..maybe I read it wrong, but I just wanted to tell you just in case. great chap. can't wait fo rthe next..oh yeah you are great at updating, thanks for that! goodnight!
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  • From ANON - entropy9 on October 12, 2006
    what?! I just read the part where you said those were your first lemons an dmy jaw dropped...I swear i didn't know that when I reviewed before..I think when people write lemons they fall into the cliches and they all seem the same. maybe that's why yours was so good...it was fresh and sweet...not smutty or cheesy...i'm so amazed! good job!
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  • From ANON - entropy9 on October 12, 2006
    ch. 21...BEST LEMON EVER! I mean it...it was hot, sweet, cute, funny...perfect. I'm serious, I'm a picky reader and you are just one of my new faves! please accept my highest compliments...on to the next chapter...whew... I need a cool shower...or a man:P
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  • From ANON - SayanaTheRover on October 12, 2006
    ::screams:: Okay, you did NOT just leave such a cruel cliffhanger!!!! Please update your beautiful, exciting story as soon as possible!!! ^_^ I can hardly wait!!!
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  • From ANON - chanda on October 12, 2006
    Lked your biting theory...although it is very animalistic. And personally don't mind the teeth...just not to hard. *Blushing*

    Miroku. Damn! I love his character, he just can't seem to get enough of Sango. I thought Inuyasha would play that part. Love the twist...keep them coming. LOL.

    Kidnapped again. I wonder who took them this time? Look forward until your next chapter.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - InuYoukai on October 12, 2006
    Chapter 22.. What can I say.. That chapter had everything.. I was laughing and crying. You can just feel the love.
    Thanks
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  • From ANON - lil_merc_girl on October 11, 2006
    ai ya woman!!! first let me say, miro and sango from behind, kags and inu dacing each other.... that's a new one lol... although miro is quite the dog.. lol

    anyways... yeah, seeing inu in a fundoshi would call for extreme droolage.. although picturing miro the way sango saw him, that was some extreme droolage too!

    i gotta say though, i'm definately more interested in the miro/sango in this... well, mainly just miro. although the inu/kags is more sweet, the miro/san is way hot..

    miro is hot. THIS STORY IS HOT!! HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!

    more please!!
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  • From ANON - sesshyfan on October 11, 2006
    what... i'm confused... why couldn't she bite him again?

    btw: love the story so far!!!
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  • From ANON - AmberEyez on October 11, 2006
    A Lemon Newbie? Dayum, good job. Whodathunkit? Great story, I'm eating it up. Actually, I'd eat Miroku up given half a chance, but you're giving me lovely evil thoughts. Yayyyyyyyyyy for a great story!
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  • From ANON - twilight kiss on October 11, 2006
    i loved it that was such a wonderful story omg it was funny romantic and had an actual plot ever think about becoming an author and publishing books you would be awsome at it
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  • From ANON - PyroChi on October 11, 2006
    Ahay! The stupid comp jacked up! It cut of my enitire review! :P Oh well I was just saying it was cute, loved the dramatic irony, the way the story flows realy well, the contrast between the relationship of Sangoand Miroku and Kagome and Inuyasha. I also like how the characters are well deceloped in the way of how they act. Like sango just dosent come right out and say she loves Miroku, like I am anxious to hear!! ( Poor Houshi!) And how I was so sad when she was reluctant, but that how someone one would realy act in a situation like that. Plus, I love Miroku citrus to so that dosent hurt my liking to this story!
    ~~~~~~~
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  • From ANON - PyroChi on October 11, 2006
    This story is so cute >.
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  • From ANON - BastardOmega on October 11, 2006
    Finally you wrote lemons and 1-10 8+ keep it up.

    Peace & love BastardOmega
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 11, 2006
    nice.

    judkjao;ji i'm all hot and bothered grrr it's five am.
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  • From ANON - XxSangoxX (N,S,I.) on October 11, 2006
    ha! yes finnalllly

    hey no worries. I have miroku and sango get it on in my Inu.kag stories too.

    i mean come o n... how could you not..that chemistry is just so...t empting.

    damn i'm tired i'll go read 22 and then i'm goin to sleep. at 439 lol
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