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Reviews for This is Gonna be Fun (uncensored)

By : szaugg
  • From ANON - sunshyne on October 29, 2006
    I am so glad I found this story. I kept looking at inu/kag pairing and this story wasn't there any more. I love it, please more!
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  • From ANON - ADEA NERI on October 29, 2006
    OMG HOW COULD YOU JUST LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT THAT WAS CRUEL. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - KeikoDogDemon on October 27, 2006
    Love it...but when are you gonna update????
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  • From StoryJunkie on October 25, 2006
    @2: love the banter betwn Sango and the monk...so true, so true...
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  • From StoryJunkie on October 25, 2006
    well, that was a good beginning, although why Inuyasha didn't go for everyone...? The beads give Kagome control over him, but if he were to go ape-shit toward someone else if he wanted, she wouldn't be able to stop it now, eh? I gues its romantic that he goes for her first, but I'd of thought he'd of mangled Shippo a little first....heh heh. just my opinion, but wow, I don't think that you are an author that needs advice!
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  • From ANON - Autumn the reviewer on October 25, 2006
    oh my fucking god, this is just too damn hilarious.. i love it, keep writing you have some real talent.
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  • From ANON - QueenOfTheCute on October 24, 2006
    Boy-howdy, do you know how to write one awesome fanfic! =D I've enjoyed every little bit of this fic, seriously. Your mix of humor and sexiness is spot-on, which often leads to some really touching moments that totally catch the reader off-guard (in a good way). And (though it may be blasphemous to say) I just can't get over how much I like your interpretations of the characters more than canon.

    I mean, you've made me believe that these characters can COMMUNICATE with each other while retaining their own interesting personalities, quirks, and issues. I've never seen Inuyasha and Kagome be so functionally dysfunctional. It's just a delight to read. And Miroku! Whoo, I'm developing a fangirl crush all over again! He's so sexy and witty at the same time. Last, but perhaps not least, I've gotta give you props for actually giving Shippou an appropriate part is a story that is, well, a lot of smut. =) His bits are just hilarious and totally in character.

    So, there you have it. Characters: likeable. Plot: interesting. Humor: gut-busting. Smut: delicious. =D I'd better stop gushing now, or it might go to your head. ;) Unless that gets me more fics from you, in which case, nevermind!
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  • From ANON - WTW on October 23, 2006
    Ohhh! No fair, lol. I wanted Sango to punish her husband some more, and surprise him by "going down on him" as Kagome had suggested. LOL
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  • From Kuronohime on October 23, 2006
    Okey, hate to be such a whiner all the time, but.. No, I actually like it.
    I REALLY feel like this is more like a Sango/Miroku fic. Because they are having most of the action. Or it's just me who feels like that?

    The bottom line is, that this fic would probably be better off at the general category instead of Inuyasha/Kagome category. I truly enjoy reading your stuff, and worship and adore you, but Sango is soooooooooo boring as a character that I don't really fancy reading anything remotely related to her. That's why I skip all the Miroku/Sango action and.. whoops, nothing else is left. I suggest you either move this fic to a more suitable category or like.. I dunno, kill Sango and Miroku.
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  • From ANON - Sentinel28A on October 23, 2006
    Poor Miroku...I have to sympathize with the guy, but on the other hand, he did deserve it. Good job of building the reader up and then dropping them like a rock. Should be interesting to see how this turns out.

    When it comes to the honorifics, Miroku doesn't refer to Sango as "Lady Sango" in the English IY translation(which would probably be translated from "Sango-sama"); Kagome, however, does. Though Sango is of peasant stock and technically wouldn't rate a "sama" from him, Miroku might use the honorific to be polite or score points, even if he doesn't do so in the manga. It would be impolite for him merely to call her Sango, without at least a "san" as that implies a familiarity he doesn't have (in your story, it would be fine because they're married). Inuyasha gets away with it because he's unmannerly as hell. While Miroku could get away with calling her "Sango-chan" before they were married (it's been only recently that male students have adopted the honorific "kun" to address female classmates; they usually got only a "chan"), he probably wouldn't because it's insulting. And we know what happens to monks who insult Sango.

    Just my two yen...

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  • From XxSangoxX on October 23, 2006


    very sexy.

    ^_^

    Inu should kiss her toes... that's so cute.


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  • From ANON - SayanaTheRover on October 22, 2006
    You are officially my hero!!!! You always update so quickly, and more to the fact--they're GOOD updates ^_^ Please, never give up on your craft!!!I love it!!!!
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  • From ANON - Angelica Pierce (NSI) on October 22, 2006
    Great wording, your error/typo count is low, and you have obviously thought the direction of this fic through. I have actually found myself laughing aloud a number of times throughout the chapters and that is saying something! I am a bit disappointed that Kikyou was simply hacked up and sucked into a mirror... I'd have really enjoyed seeing a bit of angst when Kikyou found out about the marriage, and maybe have seen Inuyasha scrambling to placate both women and failing miserably. Or rather both 'woman and clay pot'. ^_~ But you have certainly accomplished your stated goal of writing a sexy comedic romance. When I get around to figuring out how to add more fics to my 'recommendations' page, expect to see this one on the list.

    And while your premise isn't exactly unheard of (i.e. the rosary breaks), you did take the idea in surprising directions. HILARIOUS directions, I might add. That being said, I can't help but feel like the plot has some untapped potential. For instance, when Inuyasha thinks that Kagome is scared of him as a result of the beads being broken, I think you could have milked it. Serious, romantic, or funny, any way, the scenario could have been taken further. Not that what you did was BAD, I was just hoping for more...

    I do hope that you continue to write fics and also that some of them revolve around Inu/Kag and Mir/San, like this one. What can I say? I'm a sucker for those couples. Please keep up the excellent work!
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  • From ANON - AmberEyez on October 22, 2006
    You're KILLING me... Large and naked Miroku, my ass! (uh, wellllllll... )
    ARGH!~ more, please?
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  • From ANON - ldymoonluvsinuyasha (nsi) on October 22, 2006
    That was a funny chapter. I'd be horny as all get out too if I was being treated like that as well. My fav line was Shippo's side remark "If you give me yoru next helping of Kagome's snacks, I'll tell you what they said later." I was like that is very Shippo. Look forward to reading what Miroku does and if Sango has her taste of her husband.
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