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Reviews for A Promise To The Betrayed

By : kimisan

From ANON - purp1ebabe on October 01, 2006
creepy... the guys is stalking her. thank god she got to kurama's safely! wooo another lemon yay!! lol keep up the good work!
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From ANON - babygirl on October 01, 2006
I loved it. It was great. But i am still sitting at the edge of my seat wanting to know who is stalking her. Well keep up the great work. Hope to see some more soon. And remember i does not matter what others say. All that matters is that you enjoy what you write. And Fuck everyone eles. Do what you love to do.
Babygirl
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From ANON - Katie on October 01, 2006
Yehey! The creepy stalker is giving me chills but Kurama-Kagome table smex made me happy! Yey for table smex! I hope Kurama protects Kagome from that creepy stalker... and I hope they have babies. I want to pet me some babies.
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From ANON - devoted kimisan fan! on October 01, 2006
awesome hot chapter. although short really hot. who keeps calling. iwant to know. oh and will kagome tell jkurama of the teacher. i think she should...like on accident.. you know really mad and ranting and the oops she said what the teacher did. again really good chapeter.
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From ANON - Ryukotsusei on October 01, 2006
Well thats one way to keep him from asking anymore questions isn't it? lol I can only wonder what Yusuke's reaction would be if he knew what they were doing on the dining room table. Then again, he's probably done the same thing with Keiko anyway lol Good chapter, update soon please *Sends naked Akabane cookies*
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From ANON - kuramalovingwife on October 01, 2006
flamers are evil and should be used for marshmellows I CANT SPELL TODAY WAHHHHH anywazz ur doin great keep up the good expense parts UPDATE SOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

plz lol
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From ANON - Chi-ame on September 30, 2006
I love ur story n think if other dont like they can go fuck themselfs. -.- It is hard work 2 write a fic, even worse 2 do a desont 1 @ dat, if they think its so bad they should write 1 2 their liking. Ur story is awsome n i wont let anything they say get 2 u, they just wish they were as good as u *winks* I see nothing w/ ur grammer, god knos mines beyound help >.< , u do very good in updating. I know life gets in da way so shit happens, u kno. But i said it once n will say it again, i love ur story. My only reqest is if u can put more yoko in it. I love dat kinky fox, its hard not 2! *grin* keep up w/ da good work! *hugs u*
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From Tay on September 30, 2006
I think this is a great story those flamers should be eaten by the Simi. (Read Sherrilyn Kenyon)
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From ANON - Deb on September 30, 2006
I just wanted to thank you for your story. It's been a long time since I've found a fanfiction I felt that I could be emotionally attached to. The ones I've been skimming through as of late don't give me the connection with the characters that you seem to give. I rarely review, but reading your A/N made me want to.
I wanted to make sure, that I'm sure you know.. many people love your story, I love your story.
>< and You better not stop!

Please, do continue the good work.
Thank you.
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From ANON - Aria on September 30, 2006
You are my hero... ;o) Keep up the great work...I enjoy all of your stories, grammer and all! :o)
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From ANON - Diane on September 30, 2006
I'm enjoying it & while the grammar & sometimes spelling is off here & there it is by no means as bad as some I've seen that got glowing reviews. Heck I usually only see maybe a half dozen possible corrections per chapter in your stuff & that's practically a miracle against some that have 2 dozen people saying how great they are when the grammar is WAY off & half the fic is junk. As far Kurama being OOC I don't really think he is, heck anything where these characters have sex is OOC since none of them do in the anime/manga of either series as far as I've seen. Ignore the flamers & continue on with whatever fic you feel like, although personally I'm hoping for a 2nd chapter of the IY/RK 1.
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From ANON - anom on September 29, 2006
This is a great story, keep up the good work!

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From ANON - Cherry Sakura on September 29, 2006
I'm sorry to hear about all your problems, just wanted to let you know that I am one of your devoted flames, I wouldn't flame your fics even if they were bad. Thank you for continuing with your work and if your busy with your own life its ok, im sure we *your fans* will wait patiently. ^^ Keep up the good work *AND THERES NOTHING WRONG WITH A FREAKY KURAMA HE IS A GUY YA KNOW lol* can't wait to read more

Chao
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From ANON - Katie on September 29, 2006
What the hell!? HOW did you bastardize Kurama's/Shuichi's character? And why does your grammar need help? Goodness! I think whoever left that review needs to get their head checked! Your grammar is in the 96th percentile of fandom, truthfully. Your spelling takes a hit or two in a chapter, but it's nothing major. Your grammar? It's commendable. Especially given the fact that you don't have a beta.

Whoever left that review must be jealous that you write such imaginative and captivating stories. By insulting your grammar and spelling, s/he must be hoping to turn you off from fandom or from writing. Bah, whatever.

I hope you update when you can... and I understand how Karren feels. I agree with her too.
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From ANON - devoted kimisan fan! on September 29, 2006
thats my correct email address so if you do go off this site please send me the link to that address
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