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Reviews for Stalking The Elusive Heart

By : kimisan
  • From rowdygirl on September 26, 2007
    damn girl, you have a brilliant, inventive imagination! i love reading your work and this is SUCH a great story. i can't wait to read the next chapter. i don't have a great deal of experience with all the different animes and i don't know which one the two male characters come from. could you enlighten me? looking forward to more fun, laughter and heat too hot for paper!
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  • From Pyrokage on July 14, 2007
    Please please send me an email when you update this. That last chapter had me laughing really hard.
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  • From ANON - MidNight on May 31, 2007
    good story please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sunao on March 10, 2007
    I love this fic !! And I love the pairing. Too bad Saitou had a wife >_
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  • From ANON - mika on February 19, 2007
    I Wish you would update this fic soon!
    It's awesome!
    Keep up the great work and update soon!
    You little Kinkster, you...
    Mika
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  • From ANON - Inuchic15 on February 15, 2007
    OMG that was so good, the last ppart of chapter 2 had me laughing my butt off! Please tell me the girls are somehow found by the men.
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  • From AnitaGrace on January 16, 2007
    Hey, this is a great story so far. I find your crossing-over of Rurouni Kenshin and Inuyasha to be very well done, unlike other stories in which I mourn for the loss of Inuyasha or Kagome spends her time all angsty. I mean, four hundred years passed, why should she be angsty? Right? Yeah. The only problem I have is that a lot of times I am unable to understand what is going on/who is thinking what because of the excessive use of pronouns as opposed to names. It's not difficult to understand when it's just one male and one female in a scene, but when it's Kagome and Misao and Kameko, I get confused. You'll say "she did this so she laughed while she frowned" and it would read easier as "Misao did this so Kagome laughed while Kameko frowned". This is, of course, a slight exaggerration, but there is a paragraph very similar to this in the beginning of the second chapter when Misao is poking her foot at the decaying corpse and Kagome is amused while Kameko is upset. It was just a little difficult to follow because they are all she's.

    But it really is a good story so far. Please consider my suggestion.
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  • From ANON - Orihime-Girl on January 14, 2007
    UPDATE, I LOVE THIS STORY! WOOT WOOT!
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  • From ANON - Xaxy on January 13, 2007
    I love it!!! Kagome sure kick ass in this fic, I hope you up date soon >.
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  • From ANON - Lady Gina Goddess Of The Wind on January 12, 2007
    Your story is amazing and Very well written as well as thought out, I am definetly enjoying it and am on my knees begging for yet another chapter of such an enjoyable story
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  • From ANON - purp1ebabe on December 26, 2006
    haha i luv it!!! update plz
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  • From ANON - MIAmax(nsi) on December 24, 2006
    Delicate my ass, indeed. I cannot wait until you upload the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Katie on December 22, 2006
    LOL! Kagome and Misao together spells trouble for Saitou and Aoshi. I should feel bad for the boys but I don't. Their escape was so funny!
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  • From ANON - *rei* on December 22, 2006
    i'm lovin it! im lovin it! im lovin it! i've been waiting for the next chapter for so long and its finally here! i can't wait for the next one! keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Kurama'sFoxyMiko on December 22, 2006
    LOL OMG! That was Hilarious! I just LOVED it^^ I hope you update soon^^ I can't wait to read more^^
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