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Reviews for Two Worlds One Love (Complete)

By : Fairytalechic1
  • From ANON - chiba on October 04, 2006
    Awsome...plzzz update soon...^.^
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  • From ANON - Tammy Lashbrooks on October 03, 2006
    Great Update!! I just love this story!!! Can't wait for the next chapters!!
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  • From XxSangoxX on October 03, 2006
    oh yeah, and you still have some errors that you need to correct such as using You're instead of your. look at it this way to remember what form to use... if you cannot say you are then it's your if you can, and it sounds right then use you're. That's just a little easy way to remember without knowing all the rules.

    You also are still using improper tenses... example... "Haven't you been listening to what I said six years ago?" should be HADN'T you been listening to what I said six years ago."

    keep up the chappies though, i can't wait for more.

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  • From XxSangoxX on October 03, 2006
    AWWE i really hope he wises up and she stops listening to her guilty concious.

    they belong
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  • From ANON - Ariel Morin on October 01, 2006
    i loved reading up to 7 i had to read all of them before i could write a review. :P im just so happy that its still going on though i thought it would ebd at seven. which would have been a major bummer. keep writing your doing a very very very excellent job. ^_^
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  • From chanda on October 01, 2006
    I'm glad you decided to post on Aff. Welcome. I do love this story, and hope to see the rest of your story up soon. Hint, hint and hopefully a new chapter.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Tammy Lashbrooks on September 29, 2006
    I am really enjoying reading your story!! Very well written!! Can't wait for the update, hope it's soon!!!
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  • From ANON - szaugglaughs on September 29, 2006
    I like the premise behind the story a lot. Sometimes the flow of words seems better than others...maybe the parts you really enjoy the most, eh? The description of kagome when Inuyasha sees her in the lake, describing her as iridescent, was very nice and evocative. One thing that struck me was when kagome is wondering about why Inuyasha didn't turn into a demon years before if he really wanted to do so. her eventual 'oh well, just can't figure this out,' just didn't work for me. I kept thinking...would she really do that? She's not stupid, wouldn't she be working on the problem? That sort of thing.
    Anyway, look forward to the next chapter
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  • From ANON - XxSangoxX *not signed in* on September 29, 2006
    awwe please finish!!!

    I wanted to clue you in on something though.... It's not Ren it's Rin... and you have a TON of verbal and tense confusion going on in this hun... i love the idea though, i found myself wanting to hear more than you had written....

    Just thought I'd let ya know. ^_^
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  • From ANON - InuYoukai on September 28, 2006
    What a great chapter 7. Kagome just walked in at the wrong time. Inuyasha better say and do the right thing.
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  • From ANON - 6angel9 on September 25, 2006
    awesome. I love it. Its sad yet happy and oh i wanna read more update soon. Good works
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  • From ANON - mia on September 24, 2006
    i love it. update soon!
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  • From Rebeldedm on September 24, 2006
    Love your story hey for a newbie your doing pretty good don't worry your doing just fine if you ever need help with something E-mail me and I'll see how I can help you with.
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