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Reviews for Just a Little Rivalry

By : BeautifulOblivion
  • From madmiko on March 13, 2007
    That was certainly an unexpected twist! But it pretty much made Kikyou the heroine of the story. Which almost makes it sad that she didn't get Inuyasha since she was torn away from him by Naraku. (And I can't believe I'm saying something like that because I HATE the idea of Inu/Kik.) But, she was the one who suffered and overcame the horror of what was done to her and then defeated him. I DO like the idea of her getting together with Onigumo. And I love the idea of Kouga and Kagura. (I really liked Kouga in this story!) But, I guess I was just really hoping Kagome would be the one to overpower Naraku by herself. Well, now she's home -- safe and sound. I can't wait to see how you wrap this story up!
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on March 05, 2007
    OK. Fill me in why did Kagome leave when Sesshomaru did. I would of thought that Sesshomaru would of staked the place out before he left you know smell for Naraku and that kind of stuff. When and how did everyone get knocked out and when did they get put into a van. WHat will happen that Naraku has the Shikon no Tama/Sacred Jewel. What does Naraku want from Kagome and what did they do to Kikyo all those years ago..
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  • From madmiko on March 02, 2007
    Interesting turn of events. Though since she got herself and all the others kidnapped, she doesn't really seem all that powerful. She, Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru and Miroku were ALL taken out by Musou and Naraku? Those two must be REALLY strong. Side note -- Kouga needs somebody -- maybe he and Kagura can get together after Naraku is kaput. Yep, now Kagome released the jewel -- I thought that was what he was after. What will happen next? Naraku and Musou are planning to keep her for a while now, ne? Can't wait for more!
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on March 02, 2007
    OOOOOh, Chapter 22 is very good. Now we know what Naraku was up to
    and why he need Kikyo, and why he need Kagome (she is the strongest of the two )
    right Oh, by the way THANKS FOR THE QUICK UPDATE
    see what happens when you eat oatmeal raisin cookies. Anyway till
    the next update, keep baking ;P
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  • From on March 01, 2007
    Good chapter mate. I like it alot.Update soon or else.
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  • From madmiko on March 01, 2007
    Hmmm. Kagome just followed him out and got in the car with him? I can't believe he let her do that. But what I REALLY can't believe is that he was stupid enough to LEAVE THEM THERE while he went to get something to fix the door! LOL! Inuyasha is going to kick his butt. Actually, it's pretty funny that EVERYONE went after Sess and Kag. They don't know where they went, though, do they? Well, the action is heating back up! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on February 28, 2007
    Damn right Kagome needs a hero right about now don't ya think?
    Why did Kagome jump into the car? Why didn't Sesshomaru make
    her get out? Why did Sesshomaru leave her with Kagura? You know what
    I was think while reading chapter 21 by the way is very good, Which one
    is the bigger dummy Kagome or Sesshomaru. Ok that is the end of my
    ranting and raving. I'm going for coffee now. Since I like this story so much here you can
    have ONE of my oatmeal raisin cookies, BUT NO MORE. One more rant,
    Please don't let anything bad happen to Kagome. Can't wait till
    the next update. ;p

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  • From on February 28, 2007
    Good chapter. I wonder what happen to the them?
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on February 23, 2007
    I DON'T SHARE MY OATMEAL RAISIN COOKIES WITH ANYONE. THAT IS HOW IT IS IN MY
    HOUSE LOL. This was a great chapter we see what Kagura and Kanna has to through
    with Naraku, he's scary don't you think? I can't wait till the next chapter. Hey
    why does he want Kagome so much?
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  • From madmiko on February 22, 2007
    Great chapter! I really enjoy the way they all hang out together. It's like a group of real friends -- very well-written. So, Naraku's going to try to make Kgura help him get Kagome. Why does he want her again? Did he decide this AFTER the first time? Otherwise, wouldn't it have made more sense to just keep her then? Or was that part of his set-up? Kind of to give them a false sense of security? Gee, Sesshoumaru was nice to Kagura after their relationship ended. I knew he was an upright kind of guy. The question is: will Kagura do what Naraku wants, or will she warn Sesshoumaru? Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From on February 22, 2007
    Good chapter.Can't wait to read the next one. I have one question....why I didn't get a special thank you?
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  • From on February 22, 2007
    Good chapter.
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on February 13, 2007
    Nice story but why does Naraku and Muso want to hurt Kagome isn't there a law about Demons messing with anothers mate. I believe there is cuz I used to study about demons and everything when I was younger. Naraku will get a painful death so will Muso take care and update soon.
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  • From madmiko on February 11, 2007
    Nice chapter! So, Kagura and Sess had some history, but she is now actually Naraku's mate. Very interesting. Inuyasha's thoughts about his new, better relationship with his brother were nice. The Christmas decorating was fun, and funny! I really like the easy, warm atmosphere you have created for all of the friends and family. It's so nice to read a story where Kouga is a real part of things and isn't always scrapping with Inuyasha. I'm still liking the Sesshoumaru involvement a lot, too, and wondering if anything else will become of that. Is Kagome truly doing as well as she seems to be? I can't wait for more!
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on February 10, 2007
    Kudos to chapter 19, I just love it. I'm glad that
    Naraku was not behind Inuyasha and Kagome, but Kaugra and
    Kanna can't wait to hear the story behind those two (will we
    know the story?) Again Kudos on the this chapter can't wait till
    the next one. Oh, by the way tell your son to convince you to make
    oatmeal raisin ;)
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