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Reviews for Just a Little Rivalry

By : BeautifulOblivion
  • From on February 05, 2007
    Good chapter. I wonder what will happen.....
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  • From madmiko on January 31, 2007
    Good chapter! I like the way they're concerned about her lack of reaction -- they should be. Isn't Inuyasha a doll to take her shopping -- without complaining?!!? (Where can I find a hanyou like that?) I like it that Kouga is staying with them now, and that Sess keeps coming over. What has he been thinking ever since the night of the incident? And I was wondering if the culprits were ever going to show back up -- is it them at the movie theatre? Are they going to cause more trouble? I'm still surprised that was all they did to her. Awesome cliffhanger for the chapter! I can't wait for your next update!! This is such a cool fic!
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on January 30, 2007
    Chapter 18 is just great, This is the calm before the storm
    I love the cliff hanger, When Inuyasha and Kagome are at the
    movies and Inuyasha smells them there. Please update soon
    I can't wait till the comfrontation.
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  • From on January 22, 2007
    Thanks for letting every body know that I'm your mate. (Grins) But good chapter though. Need to update soon.
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  • From madmiko on January 21, 2007
    Yay! A new chapter! Kagome's attitude does seem quite strange, doesn't it? But, I loved the Kagome/Sess interaction and Inuyasha being grateful to his brother for staying to help her. I was also glad Inu finally came back to be with her. Stupid macho need for revenge taking front and center stage over comforting his mate and showing her he'd protect her and still loved her. *grumble, grumble* Men! (Demons! -- whatever.) :) I can't wait for your next installment!!
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on January 20, 2007
    I'm glad you update I love this story. What's up
    with Sess is he falling in love with his brother's
    mate? What is Naraku hiding? Who is the girl Inuyasha saw
    with a bite mark? Anyway love this chapter can't wait till
    the next update. Oh, Happy Holidays (sorry it's late) :)
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  • From ANON - Priestess Mia on December 26, 2006
    Ooooo!! What is going to happen next?? I must know, so please update!! ^^
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  • From ANON - suikidoen on December 24, 2006
    OH HELLL NO!!!! NO NONONONONONO!! do me a favor and find sessh a mate now i cant take the lusting after kags no more please >.
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  • From ANON - madmiko on December 24, 2006
    Me again. Had to comment further after reading some of the other reviews. I really don't think it comes across as Sess going after his brother's girl while she's vulnerable. When I read it, it seemed like he was really just trying to comfort her. I think his "inner demon" was starting to come out because he does care for (maybe love) her, but I didn't feel like you were writing it like he was going to DO anything to her. Hey, we all know he has too much honor for that, right? I'd say, if he wants a relationship with her, my guess is that he would tell Inuyasha first. That's just my take on his character. I can't wait to see where you go with this. (And no matter what direction you take, I'll still be reading and cheering you on! This is some good writing!)
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  • From ANON - madmiko on December 24, 2006
    Yay! I was so excited to see chapters 15 and 16 up! I was a little surprised Naraku and Muso didn't do more to her -- and they left her very much alive, so they have to know they'll be hunted. Loved the Inu/Kagome interaction AND the Sess/Kagome interaction at the end. You've got me on the edge of my seat! What will happen between S/K and how will Inu feel about it? And poor Kagome will be traumatized for a while over the whole ordeal she went through. I can't wait to see what you have in store for them next!! I hope you get a chance to update SOON!! Loving it!
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  • From ANON - dj on December 24, 2006
    Great story and they should get hurt becuase rape is a horrible thing. But I don't think Kagome and Sessomaru should have anything between them becuase her and Inyuasha are happy. Besides who goes after there brothers wife after she was raped and is in a bad mental state.
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  • From on December 23, 2006
    Good chapter update soon. Course I will look out for you mate. (Starts to laugh)
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  • From ANON - Danny Girl on December 23, 2006
    Lissa, You went above and behond the call of duty. I bow down to you ;)
    I love chapter 16 it was great, What the hell is Sesshomaru doing to
    Kagome? I know he loves Kagome but damn!!! Anyways till next time
    you and your family and friends have a safe and happy holidays :)
    oh, by the way remember to desinate (sp?) a driver.
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  • From ANON - Priestess Mia on December 22, 2006
    Awww poor Kaggie!! -cries- no one should go through what she did!! Please update so i can see what Inuyasha is going to do to them!! Please?!

    Great story otherwise!! ^^ Love the plot and everything else!!
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  • From ANON - Danny Girl on December 20, 2006
    Lissa I did not read chapter 15 sorry I couldn't
    don't be mad I just don't like reading about rape
    I will read chapter 16 and the rest of your story
    ok.
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