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Reviews for Just a Little Rivalry

By : BeautifulOblivion
  • From ANON - madmiko on December 16, 2006
    Great chapter! Am so loving the interaction between Kagome and Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. As for what I'd like to see happen? Hmmmmn. I don't want Sess to mess things up for Kag and Inu, but I would love for her to get them both as mates! So, perhaps Sess should do a little pursuing, while Inu does a little stewing before something happens and the brothers bond and decide to share her. Perhaps something to do with Naraku and crew -- maybe Sess helps save/protect her. He and Inu work together to get her back. Maybe there's some kind of old custom about brothers sharing a mate? Their father may have to intervene to tell them about the possibility. I don't know!! But, I can't wait to see what you do! Loving the tension in the meantime! I hope you write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Danny Girl on December 14, 2006
    Chapter 14 is great I just love it. Sesshomaru should tell
    Kagome how he feels as a reader see what her reaction
    will be. I can't wait till the next up.
    Till next update. Have a safe and happy
    Holiday ok.
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  • From ANON - Inusgirl on December 11, 2006
    hey i just wanted to say that your story rocks @ loud!!!! and i mean everything ...i really don't have any critisism because i found everything great..soo yeah...well keep updating and i'll keep reading ....keep up the good work

    sincerely,
    one of your newest fans
    Inusgirl
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  • From ANON - madmiko on December 07, 2006
    Good chapter! I love the way you've played around with the way everyone is related to or knows everyone else. You've started having Sess explain his feelings about Kagome -- I'll be interested to see how it turns out. (I think he should love her, too. Who wouldn't? It'd be funny to see him as a second mate -- subservient to Inuyasha in those domestic matters -- ha!) Can't wait to see what Naraku and Muso are up to and how they plan to carry out their dastardly deeds. This is a fun fic in many ways!
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  • From tigerjgirl on December 05, 2006
    I just wanted to say that I absolutely love your story!

    Keep up the good work!

    :)
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  • From ANON - Danny Girl on December 05, 2006
    Thank you very much for answering my question and for the shout out, you know I love this story right?
    Now on with the review. Your story is getting better and better. I do have a questions though, and you
    don't have to answer it because I think I'm getting ahead of the story, but why is Naraku so bold as to
    go after Kagome then Kikyo? Why I ask is because in the earlier chapters everyone thought Inuyasha hurt
    kikyo. I know,I know, I see the smile on your face and the shake of your head saying keep reading, keep
    reading. I guest I'll do just that. Till next update stay safe and happy ok ;)
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  • From ANON - InuGoddess715 on December 04, 2006
    Great story. I just found it last night and woke up this morning still reading it. I finally finished, and I really liked what I've read so far. The character relationships are good and the plot sounds interesting. I will definitely be reading and reviewing from now on.
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  • From ANON - Danny Girl on December 02, 2006
    Chapter 12 is great, really love it. I like in the this story that when Inuyasha changed
    he looked more like his father and brother that was good. In this story is Rin the adoptive
    daughter of Sesshoumaru or his parents? And finally, 2 things, 1. thanks for updating quickly
    to keep this story interesting and 2. Thanks a lot for the shout out this reviewer bows to you.
    Till next update stay safe and happy ;)
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  • From ANON - Hiromi on November 30, 2006
    I really like this story so far! I was disappointed when I thought Sesshomaru wouldn't be home for the weekend but I thought he might unexpectedly show up and I was right! I luv when Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are together(Not in that way!) becuz the fights or insults always make the story more interesting.
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  • From ANON - Danny Girl on November 28, 2006
    I love this chapter it's great. This story gets better and
    better with each chapter. Can't wait till the next update.
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  • From ANON - BastardOmega on November 28, 2006
    nice chapter as allways, keep it up.

    Peace & Love BastardOmega
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  • From ANON - madmiko on November 28, 2006
    This has been fun and enjoyable to read so far! Looking forward to what happens next. I'm intrigued by Sesshoumaru's feelings for her, too. Gonna do anything with that?
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  • From ANON - young kagome on November 18, 2006
    Its good! I liked it, so plz update soon
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  • From vampyrangel on November 16, 2006
    MORE! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!!!! MORE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - young kagome on October 30, 2006
    Its very interesting! Does Sesshomaru like her somewhat? Ooooh it would be cool if he did. Even though i completely HATE dat pairing, it wuld be nice as a little liking that turns out to be all lovey dovey, then kagome sort-of likes him too, and inuyasha gets all jealous. But in the end it all ends up inu/kag! Plz update soon
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