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Reviews for Just a Little Rivalry

By : BeautifulOblivion
  • From LIlmamma on November 20, 2017

    This is not a flame so please don't take it that way, in chapter 7 you said that Kagome sucked on I Inuyashas earlobe, but being a hanyou and having dog ears he wouldn't have earlobes.


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  • From Suniko on July 24, 2007
    WOW! You did a great job on this story. Well, actully all of your stories. Heehee. I know I don't leave long reviews. I just don't know how much I can say I really enjoy reading them. I wish I have your skills. Gime me! Past some of it over here. LOL I will talk to you later. Keep it up. Which I know you will.

    Your friend,
    Suniko
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  • From Suniko on July 24, 2007
    Hey! It's me. I just finish reading ch 24. I do have a question. So what happen to Naraku and Meso after the group put them in the van? I might have miss that point. I don't know. Anywho. Keep up the good work. You know I love your stories! Take care!

    Suniko
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  • From Suniko on July 21, 2007
    Hey it's me again. It's pretty good so far. I hope Inu and Koga kick their ass for what they did to Kagome. Well it's that time I need to get ready and get Harry Potter book. I was only gotten as far as ch 16. (I wish time would have aloud me to finish reading this story.) But I will be back! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOL Talk to you later. Take care!
    Suniko
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  • From Suniko on July 20, 2007
    I like it so far. To tell you the truth when I first started to read it I thought it wouldn't be up my allie. But more I read more I want to read. (You're very good getting me hook into it fast. LOL) I got a feeling I wont be able to finish it before midnight. The count down is on for Harry Potter. 3 more hours. I will keep reading until the time for me to go to WalMart and pick it up. I hope I finish reading this story before then. I don't know when I will be able to pick it back up. I hate start something then wasn't able to finish it. I was just taking an break from reading and wanted to give you a review on what I have read so far. Talk to you later! Take care.

    Suniko
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  • From vikikibouki on May 05, 2007
    I've read it from start to finish and I must say, it's pretty damned good! You have a very lively imagination that keeps your readers guessing. Please keep up the good work.
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  • From madmiko on April 11, 2007
    Well, that was a cute ending. Loved the chapter title. Somehow, I don't think Ginta will be much of a match for Sess, though, but I liked the way you kept the idea of rivalry among the friends going. Nice job!
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  • From on April 11, 2007
    Good ending. You should make a part 2
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  • From FireLovers on March 29, 2007
    Good chapter. I guess thats how you play football....(grinning.)
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  • From madmiko on March 28, 2007
    Hmmm. After I posted my review, I read some of the others, and I see you have a couple of fans who really don't like the idea of Sess together with Kag and Inu. I think that's a darn shame,-- especially since I felt you could have been leading up to it through a large part of the story, -- but I don't want you to feel torn over what to do just because of MY preferences. You write the ending the way YOU want it. Like I said, I've been following this story all along and loving it -- I trust you to come up with a great ending. You write it, I'll read it. I'm loving the friendships and sense of family among the characters, and you just can't go wrong with that. (Besides, maybe when I finish up my Hiei/Kag stories over on MM and Fichaven, I can try my hand at an Inu/Kag/Sess one to satisfy my own twisted wishes. Heh heh!) Have fun with it!
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  • From madmiko on March 28, 2007
    That was a great chapter! I loved the way everyone gathered to sort things out. One thing I have enjoyed all the way through this story is how realistic the friendships are. Their gatherings and the way they hang out together is just like family reunions I've been to. I liked Kikyo's explanation to Kagome about the way Kagome kind of brought her out of herself -- that was a nice touch. The football game was fun! Again -- that could have been me and my friends or cousins playing (a few years ago! LOL!). Loved the way the girls planned to take advantage of being GIRLS, and the fact that Sess just picked her up and ran for the TD anyway -- seems like something he would do. I have SO enjoyed the way you have written him and Inuyasha in this. I have a soft spot for both brothers, so I'm sure you know what I'm going to wish for! I'd love to see Kagome ask Inuyasha about Sess being alone, and for him to tell her that he has come to realize Sess is in love with her, too. Then to ask her how she'd feel about taking a second mate. For me, the ultimate ending would have them asking Sess to join them, and him accepting. BUT, if you don't feel inclined to go that way, I'm sure you'll come up with something equally good. (Personally, if he doesn't end up with Kag, too, I'd rather not see him paired up with anyone, but that would be a shame. I think you set a great stage and a nice build to Inu accepting him into their relationship because it's been so obvious that he loves her and has tried to protect her, too. So, I think it could work -- I don't see anyone in the group having a problem with it -- I think they'd all accept it and be happy for them.) This has been a great story, and I've really enjoyed the way you incorporated so many of the characters into it. Kudos, my friend!
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on March 28, 2007
    Great Chatper 24 just love it. NO,no,no...no mating with Sesshomaru with Inuyasha and Kagome. That's like sharing my
    oatmeal raisin not happening. What about Sesshomaru and Ayame (I think I spelled her name wrong, sorry) Have Koga introduce her to Sesshomaru. what do ya think? LOL. Till next time stay cool.
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  • From ANGEL2006ASHLEY on March 28, 2007
    I honestly don't like it when people pair sess with inu and kag together cuz it takes away some kind of stuff. iono if rin has been in this story before cuz i totally forgot if she isnt then make sess be with her as she is older or just keep him single and happy.
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on March 14, 2007
    Chapter 23 was great. Sorry I was late reviewing I'm just getting over
    the flu and oatmeal cookies was not helping this time. Can't wait to
    read chapter 24.
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  • From on March 13, 2007
    Good chapter.
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