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Reviews for Twilight Shadows

By : Dart
  • From XxSangoxX on October 01, 2006
    I hate leaving flames, so i am going to do my best to refrain from making this a flame. First, NEVER say that it's your first fan fiction until you at least get to the end of the first chapter... DEFINITLEY do not ever put it in your summary. Your chapters are really too short and don't captivate enough to make me want to come back when this is updated and aside from your lack of plot and character form, you have a TON of misspellings.

    My only reccomendation would be to get a beta to help you on this a little more, if you are serious about writing fan fictions in your spare time ... to enthrall readers into your mind and what you WANT to happen, then you should heed my advice and reallllly work on your stories more (indefintely more) before posting.

    ^_^
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