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Reviews for a ghostly love

By : selenapendragon
  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2007
    Very nice please update
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 21, 2006
    Very nice so far. Keep it up
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  • From ANON - Someone on October 08, 2006
    Hurry up and finish this chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Tammy Lashbrooks on October 05, 2006
    Very good beginning to your story!! Will be reading it as you update!!
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  • From XxSangoxX on October 04, 2006
    Tokaia, are you accusing me of those things? I did not say those things out of malice so you know; it was simply as a reader. Before you start critisizing someone who you've never even read... you should really think. If I have misspellings and such in my stories I would like to know where. So I can correct them. please ... enlighten me.

    btw this story isn't bad, but you might think about using more spacing in between your dialogue. ^_^

    keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Someone on October 03, 2006
    You have a very good story in the making here. Keep it up
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  • From ANON - Tokaia on October 02, 2006
    The other person who reviewed should be warned. When you write something correcting the misspellings of others and tell them to use spellcheck, you should take your own advice. If you don't, you look like a fool.
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  • From XxSangoxX on October 01, 2006
    a LOT of misspellings.....

    Here are a few corrections...

    Intense.
    Making.
    Student.
    Examining.
    Rather.
    Adjacent
    Staring...
    excellant
    Beautiful
    Beauty
    Secret...
    Writing.
    Began..
    Evanescence. . .

    there are a lot more, so i should probably suggest that you spell check, you also have a lot of contractions missing as well as words that are in fact NOT words, embarassingly is not a word, but there are synonyms that you can use to replace it. I think I could like the idea in this story had I seen more of a plot formed, I hope that you will make your next chapter long enough to get a REAL idea of where you might be going with this. You also forget the usage of commas, they are a WONDERFUL tool...
    You seem to add ING to the ends of words that have e's without removing the e... Like i said, you really need to spell check this. Try writing it out in your microsoft word program and running the spell check feature to make it more inticing to the reader and believe me, you will be happier with the out come. ^_^


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