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Reviews for Soul Consumption

By : Seren1tyStar01
  • From Pucedragon on February 16, 2007
    Well, I like your story. I haven't found it to be confusing in the least. And I like the way you have your chapters set up, one in one character's POV, and the next in the other's POV. Besides which, it is your story, so you should write it the way you want. If others have a problem reading/understanding it, then this story just is not for them. Kudos on a job well done, and I am looking forward to the next chapters.
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  • From Morningdove666 on February 13, 2007
    Why do we have to know every point of view about the same situation? It would be clearer if you had everyone's point of view mixed into the situation as it happens. It doesn't make since to rewrite the same event 3 different times giving them there own Chapter. I would like to know what happens after an event instead of having to wait to chapter.
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  • From fubuki on February 12, 2007
    wow!
    talk about a deep one, I honestly can't wait for the next chapter
    I have enjoyed what I have read so dar, so keep up the good work

    Fubuki
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  • From ANON - natts on January 14, 2007
    All I can say is wow that is one of the bestI have ever read.I love that you speak from both points of view. I 'm stil sweating from the heat. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - Seloa on December 28, 2006
    ... DAAAAAAAAAH!!.... crap... I was all excited and now i have to wait for he next chapter... Oh well, get some sleep!!
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  • From ANON - Destiny3692 on December 25, 2006
    i don't appriciate this just leaveing a cliffy like that but its a good story just make the person behind her kikyo haha or whatever just please update.xd

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  • From ANON - Kawaii Kilala on December 23, 2006
    This is great, I can't wait for you ot up-date! So please UP-DATE SOON!
    Thanks! Maybe...if you update soon anyways....
    And you should make it a hideous and ungly beast, like very ugly and stuff, and afterwards, you should have Kagome and her birdy friend survive and them teleport away from Sesshomaru, and stuff...yeah that would so rock, then she could find out that her 'mom' isn't really her mom, and that shes really a mix breed like from that one story...a miko demon I think thats what she was...
    NE ways! UP_DATE SOON!
    (srry if i was rambling...lol)
    TTYL; (maybe...)
    megan
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  • From ANON - lunarcat12 on December 23, 2006
    intense chapter. loved it. i was a little confused for awhile but i think i know whats going on now. cant wait to see who the foe is that makes kagome know true fear. dieing to know how the whole story goes and cant wait for the next chapter. update soon.
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  • From ANON - Metis on December 22, 2006
    Alright, she had a reason. Still needs to mature though.
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  • From ANON - Metis on December 22, 2006
    Nice twist with InuYasha. And my, isn't she hasty. Young, stupid, and impulsive. Can't she allow him a moment of doubt? He has been alone for a long time.
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  • From ANON - Metis on December 22, 2006
    Ah, nice. I love your use of the Inu language and how it helps to communicate. It seems that Sess has matured and grown some more.
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  • From ANON - Metis on December 22, 2006
    Ah, nice. I love your use of the Inu language and how it helps to communicate. It seems that Sess has matured and grown some more.
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  • From ANON - Metis on December 22, 2006
    At last I come back to this story. I am happy you decided to continue it, and also thrilled that she can understand him. As far as I know, no other story has granted her that gift after bonding. What a great idea! She'll need it when dealing with her pups (hopefully full Inu, pretty pretty PLEASE!). As for POV, I've always preferred third person, but if not I'll take his over hers most times. Great story!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 07, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - articfire69 on November 25, 2006
    great story update soon,please?????

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