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Reviews for Soul Consumption

By : Seren1tyStar01
  • From lara5170 on March 17, 2012
    This kills me. This is a really good story but it just ends here and I'm dying to know what happens next. How can I find out if this story has been continued or completed on another site???? I'm dying to know what is going on with Midoriko and who the person in the mirror is that wants Kagome and everyone dead. This is such an interesting and exciting story and for it to be just left like this is extremely depressing. Please if anyone knows if this story has been posted on another site with the chapters that follow the ones on this site....please make a note or send out an alert of some kind
    .. as an enormous fan of this story I will be ever so grateful.
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  • From TheMikoShivae on November 28, 2007
    very good story!!! please continue!!!!
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  • From lunarcat12 on June 24, 2007
    i'm writing this review b/c i don't know if my other one was submitted or not. wow. interesting chapter. a lot of things going on at once. how could you just leave kagome like that though. in the last chapter she was in pain and in this one she still is. we still don't know what's happening. are the screams hurting her, warning her? i gotta know. keep writing. can't wait to see what happens next. update soon.
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  • From LyeLye on June 07, 2007
    I stopped reading at the part where she was rambling to herself about "the ways of love making" and how "this could be a wonderful dream!"
    >.< Sorry but that was the epitome of lame right there. Little word of advice, try not to have the characters babble on and on about how they have always
    dreamed about this guy screwing them. Normal girls don't really think about that when a half naked hot guy is standing in front of them.
    Normally what their thinking is "Oh crap...Erm ok im going to sneak away while his eyes are changing from blood red to amber." *Tip toes away* "Ahhhh!"
    Something like that would have been a bit more realistic lol. But yeah, I applaud you for writing something.
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  • From lunarcat12 on June 02, 2007
    i just wanted to say that i love your story and the way you write it. i thnk you should continue to do so. if you came out and told us everything the story would not be worth reading. i like piecing the clues together. can't wait for the next chapter. update soon.
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  • From EroticAnime on May 31, 2007
    I am not a weak reader, I follow story lines quite smoothly and catch on to ideas quite quickly and yet even I have found myself staring incredulously at the screen and saying to myself, "But you are creating conflict with what you have stated in previous chapters." Now since your reviewers and betas have both said on occasion that you are not being clear, perhaps you should just except that you are not being clear and get over yourself. : I understand how it is easy to overlook things when you are writing your stories. You get into the funk of things and everything you are thinking seems to be right, but sometimes your fingers do not always listen to what your mind is telling them and a glitch appears which results in unclear story lines. I myself upon rereading some of my previous chapters have sat back going, "What the hell was I thinking?" Or "That is not what I heard in my head or read with my eyes as I was typing it" and yet who else would have submitted my story for me? haha. It happens to the best of us, after all, no else truly understands us as we do. No one else can perceive what exactly it is we sometimes intend. Miscommunication happens all the time. No biggie. We are not after telepathic. :)
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  • From EroticAnime on May 29, 2007
    That was a great chapter except for the fact that in the first chapter you already said that Naraku was defeated and it was by Kagome herself. It was one of her more redeeming "I have chosen such a strong and loyal mate" qualities. Please be more specific in that it was only a battle and not the ending to Naraku.
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  • From lunarcat12 on May 29, 2007
    wow! that was intense. a lot going on in this chapter. what a cliff hanger too. can't wait to see what happens next. keep writing. update soon.
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  • From EroticAnime on May 29, 2007
    your character switching and points of view are not confusing at all, but they are redundant. Other than that this is a great story. Keep it up!
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  • From cocoke5 on May 29, 2007
    when i start to read this story i can not wait for you to up date the story and now that you have i can lever review for you and i like to story very much and can not wait for more up date soon. the story is real good .
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  • From Patty530 on May 28, 2007
    I usually stay away from Kagome and Fluffy pairings. Not my kind of thing. I got curious about your story, loved every minute of it. I didn't find it confusing at all. I think it's great. Please don't give up on it. I personally can't wait for you to continue it. Thanks for a great read.
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  • From lunarcat12 on May 18, 2007
    you updated! :) been waiting for this one for awhile. really interesting chapter. must be weird meeting yourself. poor shippo can't even come near his mother. sesshy will take him in eventually i hope. sounds like the story just entered a new level. a twist and turns revealed. can't wait to see what happens. keep writing. i love this story. update soon!
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  • From Sexgoddess2110 on March 22, 2007
    Update Women lol I must say I hooked on this fic was going to quit once it started getting ridiculously confusing but I stuck it through and found that I do like your style and I couldn't wait for more. But I do have a question how many hours, years, etc has it passed since she has been with celiene. you implied awhile with the question of if shippo will have grown and if sango would be pregnant when they just got married so yea could you answer that one for me please. Keep up the great work ! update

    Arry
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  • From angelnomiko on March 12, 2007
    wow that was great .... please update soon ... later for now

    angel
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  • From madmiko on March 10, 2007
    Well, that chapter had a LOT of information to digest. That must have taken you forever to write. I liked her little interlude with Sesshoumaru and his explanation of what her actions with Inuyasha meant to him. Yay! I'm glad he marked her again. So, what will he go back to now that he's gone again? I'm going to have to go back and re-read this story to refresh my memory. Celine's revelation to her about how Inuyasha had been holding her back was kind of sad. I really don't think he would have done it intentionally, though, -- he's not that bright. Heh heh! But the thought that Sango, Miroku, and Kaede may have done the same thing is really, truly sad. I look forward to her training being over and her return to everyone and seeing what the fallout is.
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