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Reviews for Problems in Earth

By : DINKA
  • From on June 22, 2007
    its interesting so far!


    and about the silver haired savor sess is going to be a demon...later on ^^ I love plot twistes
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2006
    update soon

    i believe that the changes in the characters are enough justified....

    sesshomaru is pregnant... and inuyasha felt the necessity to protect and gave extra love to his mate!

    it is pretty rational... although, you need to write your own story! so, it will be interesting if you write a sequel of this one.. now in your own terms!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2006
    you must changed this .... it had some points, but it's as if you were narrating and you can't do that
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2006
    OOOOOOOOO......... IS GOOD.

    UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - Dee on October 14, 2006
    This is not a narrative text, itīs a badly written draft, you shouldnīt try to start by a sequel if you donīt even know how to create decent descriptions, dialogues, thoughts and follow basic grammar rules. I really donīt know how the author gave you permission to continue her work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2006
    GOOD!
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  • From ANON - Sara T. on October 13, 2006
    you may have had her permission but this isnt nearly as good as hers though its alright.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 13, 2006
    ...well, you have a good plot going, but you definitely need a beta to help you with sentence structure and grammar and so forth.
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