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Reviews for Cold As Ice

By : Caesar
  • From LadyShiva on November 01, 2011
    kinda irks me you took your stories down because of drama. This started out strong, and I was really sad and confused there wasn't more when it has apparently been completed. Should probably just take the whole story down or at least edit it so people like me don't become sad pandas.
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  • From brainfear on July 15, 2008
    Sweet Mama, this is hot! More please!

    ch13
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  • From NeruKudasai on December 09, 2007
    "Was this perhaps, what had so attracted the wicked Onigumo to Kikyo? But even with the fluttering’s of Onigumo’s heart, it was the demon, Naraku, that had shown more interest in the lithe human. He took a particular satisfaction in being close to her as her trained her. "

    In that last sentence don't you mean ....to her as HE trained her."? In chapter 6.


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  • From JadedGothButterfly on October 13, 2007
    OMG.I Am So In Love With Your Writing.It's Torture.I Want MORE!Hurry And UPDATE!! =]

    And You're Right.The Plot IS Amazing.Lovin' It.
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  • From DamiaEternal on July 18, 2007
    Hmmm this is the first time I've read about Naraku using tentacles during sex...Which is kinda weird cause I read a Harry Potter one with tentacles before I'd ever found one with Naraku. Nice story btw, to an earlier chapter note just ignore the idiots. I'm right there with you when you say that flames are funny. Anyone who starts being mean to another author by personally slaming them is typically a hypocrite. I honestly can't think of any questions about the story aside from "What's going to happen next?" But then that question is kind of a given. I like your work it not as...I don't know how to phrase it exactly. I find a lot of authors either rush their story, drag it out or make it very choppy. Aside from the chapters being a smidge too short for my tastes, I can't complain. (If my review makes little sense it's probably cause I'm writing on very little sleep. But I make an effort to leave a review that at least says something meaningful.) Tataa for now. ^_~
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  • From NovalisBelle on June 20, 2007
    I LOOOOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
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  • From lindajrjt on May 20, 2007
    This is a great story! Could you please email me when you update as this site does not notify of updates. The storyline is absolutely magnificent so keep up the good work and I hope to see an update soon!
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  • From wicketjax on March 10, 2007
    ooo aaaw. he's a cold bastard but kagome thawed him out. stupid jerk. he better make it up to her for the rest of her life.
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  • From ANON - Kags21 on December 26, 2006
    aww he's in love this was really good I loved everything about this chapter
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  • From ANON - KariLeanne on December 24, 2006
    I love you! I truly do! What an awesome chapter. As far as plot and characterization go, this is your best chapter yet. Pretty creative to, with the whole dream sequence. I was wondering how that would play out. I loved Kagomes reaction to how Naraku woke her up. Poking around in the head of someone you love, looking for deep, dark secrets is generally not the best way to make up after a fight, as I see Naraku has found out! Narakus regret and self-disgust was everything I could have asked for and really moves him along as a character. I'm glad that they seemed to have sort of made up at the end of the chapter, but it seems that Naraku still has a lot of explaining to do. Kagome is going to have to realize that the man she is in love with is, indeed, EVIL, and learn and learn to accept what comes with it, and realize that so long as her man truly loves her, being a prize worth fighting over is a good thing!

    Once again, this was a great chapter and I eagerly await more.
    Happy Holidays - KariLeanne
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  • From ANON - KariLeanne on November 22, 2006
    You're back! Yay! Sorry about your relationship issues, though. And moving! Gah! I hate moving. I've done it four times and fear that I shall be moving yet again. You have my sympathies. Thanks for posting the half chapter with all you have going on in your life. I loved the first part where Naraku realized that Kagome hated him for the things he said, and that he had to make up with her. And that Lemon was so hot! *Blushes* Tentacal porn is one of my secret Naraku kinks. There just isn't enough of it out there, so thanks for that. *Blushes again*

    You did a great job editing this chapter fragment. True, I read it very quickly, but it read smoothly and no errors jumped out at me. My only problem with this chapter is that the two sections seemed rather disccnnected. To go from the emotionally exhausted, wreck of a girl Kagome was in previous chapters to finding her eagerly sucking the cock of the man she believes has used and betrayed her in the worst way is both abrupt and jarring. Hot, but jarring. It seems that it would flow better if there was some sort of transition, how ever brief, to explain why she is doing what she is doing without qualms. After all, great sex is not going to solve the problem of her thinking he is using her. If anything it will make her hate herself more when they are done for having allowed him to use her again. Or maybe you are going for that kind of emotional turmoil. I don't know, but I would really like to. Consider it a complement that you have me overanalyzing the details.


    In any case, you take your time and do what you have to do in your own life. Just please don't forget that you have readers waiting with baited breath!

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  • From ANON - Sunyata on November 21, 2006
    i'm a major nar/kag freak! love the pairing so much! your story is very nice, keep up good work and update soon:)
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  • From ANON - jestergirl on November 18, 2006
    I love this story can you update soon, i don't know if you have lately, but i would really appreciate it. I love the stories with either sesshoumaru or naraku with kagome.
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  • From bluemoonvixen on November 08, 2006
    Ack, the well! x.x Well, good call, that was probably the worst thing Inu Yasha could do to get back at her. Can't wait for more updates. ^.^
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  • From ANON - KariLeanne on November 08, 2006
    Another amazing chapter - beautiful and sad. Naraku and Kagome have a lot of issues to work out, don't they? InuYasha has sure made a nuisance of himself, destroying the well like that. I must say, though, that I am glad that is all he did. For a moment there you had me worried that he was going to hurt her family!

    Keep up the good work!
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