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Reviews for Bitten

By : theamazingshoe
  • From ANON - Anon on December 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Shaid on December 29, 2006
    interesting so far. I'm looking forward to more. The tone is really great and the plot seems good.
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  • From ANON - szaugglaughs on October 30, 2006
    well, it's definitely got me curious! oh, one possible grammar oopsie, first chapter, near the end. 'definably wrong.' Is it supposed to be that, or was it supposed to be 'definitely wrong' ? Just checkin'! Anyway, I'll be keeping an eye out for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - XxSangoxX on October 29, 2006
    you use the wrong form of threw.. it's threw not through.
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  • From kookookitty on October 29, 2006
    characterization of kagome spot on! he just saved her but she's naked so she sits him...

    great story... can't wait to read more!

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From ANON - Neo-Crystal on October 27, 2006
    WOW!.....That was awesome!!! PLEASE HURRY with the next chapter!
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  • From kookookitty on October 26, 2006
    really quite good and well written! i didn't have any of those sudden stops from mispelled, misused words or grammar. the cliff hanger was expertly executed.

    i can't wait to read more!

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From ANON - Metsuki-baba on October 26, 2006
    Very well done!! I am anxiously awaiting your next update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2006
    wow do finish
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  • From ANON - Diane on October 26, 2006
    I liked it & am looking forward to the next chapter to find out what's going on in the bathroom. As far as mistakes go I only really noticed this 1 near the end of the chapter & it's really common; Something was defiantly wrong. Defiantly should be definitely. Defiant is like I'm not gonna do it & you can't make me & definite is you're sure of something. A little simplistic but I hope it gets the point across. Hope this helps.
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  • From ANON - ecci on October 25, 2006
    i really want to know what happens! O_O please update! and as far as i can see, no mistakes..^_^
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