Reviews for Happy HalloweenBy : Rebeldedm |
Please don't take this the wrong way, but the more I read the more confused I get. I feel like I'm reading different stories mashed together.
Ok I'm confused, in the first chapter you said that Kagome was 17, and then in a flashback I think it was about Kagome and sangos dad about to hit Kagome but hit sango instead you said that sango was 10 and Kagome 9 so I figured that they were a year apart, but in chapter 2(I just finished that one) you said Kagome is 16. Also you made sango seem nice and loving to her sister, but now she's a bitch. Could you please email me at mammawolf247365@yahoo.com and make me not confused.
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