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Reviews for Little Red Riding Hood

By : Pucedragon
  • From ANON - szaugglaughs on November 07, 2006
    okay. The writing was smooth, pace of the words was nice, although the pace of the story was unexpected. like you said, fast. I think I wouldn't have an issue with fast if...hmmm, maybe more if they didn't...explain everything to each other, if that makes sense? ya know, like we all know they are thinking these things, and we want them to eventually know that they were thinking these things, but when we explain stuff to each other, even in moments of great stress, I think the explanations usually don't explain everything, ya know?

    Of course, that could be more that my explanations aren't that informative, heh heh.

    Still, I'm curious to see where it's going if this is already happening at this point. What is going to to happen, wonder wonder. :-)

    Oh, and I like how you've been doing kikyou and Inuyasha - their resolution and their characters both. Also, I like how you've dealt with Kagome's feelings for Inuyasha. So often, they get brushed aside in the fic, and that just cheapens her character, IMO, because it makes her seem a lot less devoted or fickle than I always perceived her as.
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  • From ANON - ASHLEY on November 07, 2006
    I want MORE MORE MORE. Give it up already you big meanie. lol. Update soon and I mean like sometime today. Bye for now. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ASHLEY on November 06, 2006
    I love it!!! lol. Keep it up and update like today, you big meanie lol.
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  • From ANON - ASHLEY on November 06, 2006
    I like that pairing. I also like this story so far. The next chapter should be longer though. The name is cute too by the way lol. Great job. Keep it up and update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Rob on November 06, 2006
    I loveit! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - woohoo on November 05, 2006
    look interesting! It's not my favorite pairing either, but this seems like a nice way to get it started. I'll keep reading if you keep writing!
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on November 05, 2006
    Dis should be interesting... I wonder what is going to happen now?
    Update soon please
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