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Reviews for Migraine

By : AmyMcClair
  • From ANON - Inusgirl on December 11, 2006
    i just wanted to say "GREAT JOB" on your story it was interesting though, it was short but cute
    to the point i just wanted to tell-- on a part of the story almost at the end when the're in the kitchen well kagome tells inuyasha to "sit" down and he does but he's suppose to fall remember she said the word soooo...he's suppose to fall....i know u might forgot to see that part right there.... just telling you so other people wont keep on telling even though some might have already but neways...good job and keep on writing can wait for another one
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  • From ANON - marissa on November 26, 2006
    WRITE MORE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!
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  • From ANON - TapTheMemoryBank on November 22, 2006
    Very cute. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2006
    you need to add more to this because you ended it rather abruptly... AND .. you used a cop out ending.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2006
    This is not an R-rated story. Go post it on Fanfiction.net or something, but it does not belong on AFF where an R-rating or higher is required.

    You just piss people off when you post kid stuff on an adult site. It's like false advertising when you say it is an R-rated story but it is only PG at the most.

    Other people have been kicked off AFF for posting kiddy shit here and I hope you are too.
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  • From ANON - Rakana on November 20, 2006
    dude? where's the adult part??
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  • From vampyrangel on November 16, 2006
    Ooooohhhh poor Kagome.
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  • From ANON - Little Jack 2 on November 14, 2006
    Great story so far,and thanks for telling me about how the second chapter starts similary to the first.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 13, 2006
    You used "inu-tachi" incorrectly. It means "Inuyasha gang" not "dog demon" or "inu-youkai" as you probably meant. Don't use the Japanese terms unless you know what they mean.

    Your spelling is problematic and the characters are out-of-character, especially Kagome.
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  • From ANON - Little Jack 2 on November 13, 2006
    Presenting the pyscho bitch Kagome lol great story except you uploaded the same chapter twice.
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  • From ANON - reviewer on November 08, 2006
    nice story write more
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  • From XxSangoxX on November 08, 2006
    ms. kagome is acting like she's pregnant. lol

    that would be a twist.
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  • From kookookitty on November 07, 2006
    a nice beginning... i used to get migranes and i found that chiropractic and homeopathic, work for me... a friend of mine uses the herb 'feverfew' and swears by it.

    looking forward to reading more!

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From ANON - dangersque on November 07, 2006
    Wow, Kagome was a bitch here, but that's understandable. I too suffer from horrible I-just-want-to-curl-up-in-the-dark-and-die migraines (well not so much now that I know enough to avoid the triggers of said migraines). And I too want to kill people for doing evil things like turning on lights and talking and breathing too loudly. But here's the thing, (and I hope this comes up) no matter how bad of a migraine you have, you still have to be able to function on a basic level of civility and interact with other people like a grown human being, because the rest of the world won't stop because your head hurts. Having a migraine is no excuse for acting as horribly as Kagome is in this story, and I hope she gets called on it. Inuyasha's not behaving any differently than he normally would, and he doesn't deserve to be punished for it. If I were him I would have left long ago and said "come find me when you're not a psycho bitch." But then, I'm petty like that.
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  • From ANON - raven28 on November 07, 2006
    i love it! keep it going. i have bad migraine's like you all the time!
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