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Reviews for Battle Cry: Recovering The Scars

By : Rebeldedm
  • From ANON - ASHLEY on January 05, 2007
    That was a nice ending. I liked it. Love ya lil sister.
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on January 05, 2007
    Awwwwwwww, that was beautiful!!!! I LOVE happy endings!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2007
    ????
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  • From ANON - ASHLEY on January 03, 2007
    Seriously I do think I out did myself on this chapter lol. I love it. I find it to be sweet and just beautiful lol. Wow I'm starting to feel vain or something or whatever. Reviewing on a chapter I wrote myself haha. It aint like that people, just so you know. I don't read nothing till I'm done and I didn't read this one till Ms. Thing over here posted it. Love ya sis. I'm glad you liked it. I really don't know where I get this stuff from though. Alright I'm done lol.
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  • From ANON - ASHLEY on January 03, 2007
    Well since you made that other chapter with kissing and hugging and "i love you" shit then you should most likely have a lemon on the next chapter. Why don't you have one with them in a hot spring or something. Like here you go I'll start it out for you and if you like it then you can use it.

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    It was a beautiful cold night. The stars could be seen very clearly as if you were standing right in front of them. The moon looked lovely as it was a bright bluish-white color and full.

    Kagome desided to go to the hot springs to take a dip and think. She decided to do this naked for there was nothing like a dip naked in the middle of the night.

    She stripped till she was bare and jumped into the hot spring. She came up for air and looked up at the stars. She started floating up in the water looking at the moon stuck in her own thoughts.

    *Do I really love Sesshomaru?* she thought.

    Sesshomaru just got back from patroling his lands and looked upon Kagome as he was passing by.

    *She looks like a goddess.* he thought.

    The light from the moon and stars were playing on the waters surface and on Kagome's naked body.

    Sesshomaru smiled and decided to join her. He came into the open where Kagome could see him.

    Kagome gasped as she saw Sesshomaru standing on the side of the hot spring. *What is he doing?* she thought.

    Sesshomaru looked into her eyes as he slowly removed his armor. Kagome followed his hand movements with her eyes.

    When he got finished he put his armor next to where he was standing. He started undoing his outer clothes and they soon followed his armor.

    "Kagome?" he whispered.

    Kagome swollowed. "Yes?" she asked shaking.

    "Do you wish for me to join you the way you are or like this?" he asked gently.

    Kagome's cheeks started to stain red. "As I am... please." she said looking into his beautiful eyes.

    Sesshomaru took the rest of his clothes and shoes off and stood there in all his glory.

    Kagome thought she stopped breathing. *He's perfect.* she thought.

    Sesshomaru stood there and the moon light and star light played on his skin and silver hair. He truly looked as if he was stepped out of a fairytale. He looked like a god standing there.

    He slowly entered the hot spring and started making his way to Kagome.

    Kagome was shaking... not in fear, but in excitement.

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    So... how is that for a beginning? I like it lol. Sounds great. I got another idea of how to do it but this i thought sounded way better. if you want sweetie just talk to me and ill help you out like i did before with this. I hope you use this one cuz I like it lol.
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on December 23, 2006
    Hope you update soon! I hope you plan on telling us what exactly happened with Inuyasha and Kagome, and whatever happened to Inuyasha after that last encounter with Kagome?
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  • From ANON - Pucie on November 20, 2006
    Ok, I'm absolutely lovin the "Jaken-Sama, Jaken-Sama, why are you so green!" Hilarious, when I saw that episode, I was crackin up!!

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  • From ANON - selina on November 19, 2006
    WOW...
    I LOVE IT!!

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  • From ANON - selina on November 19, 2006
    OMG THIS WAS SOOOOO GOOD!!

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  • From ANON - MIKO4EVER on November 19, 2006
    And no i aint no staker!Ur friend just talks about u alot.^-^
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  • From ANON - MIKO4EVER on November 19, 2006
    Like the story.I think i've reviewed all ur new stories.Keep on guessing who i am.A lill birdy keeps tellin me the answers.^-^.Oh yah i'll give u a hint!U know me.Know u have 2 find out if by chat or in person.And i know 1 of ur best friends.
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  • From ANON - selina on November 09, 2006
    hey yea...
    this is really good really really good!
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  • From ANON - ASHLEY on November 08, 2006
    I LIKE IT GIRLY. I HOPE YOU KEEP IT UP. I ACTUALLY WANNA READ THIS STORY SOME MORE SO GET A MOVE ON IT AND UPDATE... LIKE NOW. LOL BYE BYE.
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