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By : sailoreeyore
  • From ANON - on January 25, 2017

    Koga was going to rape keg but shippo and inuyasha saved her and he eventually changed with the end keg tells him she loves inuyasha before she tells inu his wolves killed rin Sesshomaru in his worst could never kill a child that is why he didnt kill inu when he was 5 after his mother died he honored his fathers last wish taking inu and his mom to her family and his grandfather told him that he would let him live their till he could take care of him self he would not have it seid that he abandoned his doubters son he was probably in his teens and was alown in the woods till he was 150 when he met kikyo and was pined for 50years so 200 or so when he met keg he matured a lot over tha 3 years apart


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  • From ANON - forbode on November 20, 2006
    Put some poop play in there. Have someone crap on someones face.
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  • From XxSangoxX on November 20, 2006
    how about NO rape scene? that sounds better.

    i was pretty satisfied with your story despite the spelling until i got to the sex scene. Your words are too vulgar for my liking or tastes. You should work on this.

    this wasn't meant to be a flame sorry if it comes off as one.
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  • From ANON - InuYoukai on November 18, 2006
    Chapter 3 -- Great Story so far.. Love it..
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  • From ANON - forbode on November 16, 2006
    I crapped myself. It feels like soft serve ice cream.
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  • From ANON - leashed on November 15, 2006
    Who's Mark? Just curious is all. Good story so far.
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  • From ANON - pucie on November 14, 2006
    Not bad, I think I like it. . . .
    It should be Kouga, I think. . for your rape scene, I mean. . . .it would be almost in character for him, once he found out that Inuyasha and Kagome had sex, he would be infuriated, past all reasoning, and would lash out and try to make her 'his' once again. . .
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  • From ANON - 6angel9 on November 13, 2006
    oooh you are evil. Making us all wait eh. Well its a story worth wating for keep it up
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  • From ANON - Danny Girl on November 13, 2006
    I really like chapters 1 and 2 I can't wait
    till the next chapter. If it isn't too much
    trouble please email me at badgirl8093@hotmail.com
    and let me know when a updates comming I would
    really like to follow this story.

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