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Reviews for The Chronicles of Higeki

By : ChrisScott
  • From ANON - on January 25, 2017

    Abandond


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  • From Gryffin on January 02, 2007
    Interesting story. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - chanda (nsi) on January 01, 2007
    Wow!!! I loved it! I have so many questions, but like you said they will be answered in more chapters. I cannot wait until your next update.

    Happy New Years,
    Chanda
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  • From fallenangel7583 on December 31, 2006
    a very interesting story you have already woven. i like the newcommer (i'm hesitant to call him a bad guy, only because we don't know his motive), but he seems to be an interesting character. i'm impressed when someone can devise their own villian and write an actual personality to the character (you don't see it often) but you have me hooked already. i also like the Miroku that you've written; he parallels the canon one very well. Your story is awesome, out to what seems to be a great start! Keep it going!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2006
    its really good
    please continue
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  • From ChrisScott on November 15, 2006
    Hey guys! Work on the 2nd chapter has been slow but steady. While I'm nervous bout attempting lemons, I'm definetly gonna ty to hook everyone up with some sprite in the next chapter or 2. Thanks for the moves/names definitions. I was really only looking for the Jap names cause I've seen every episode (atleast I think I have) and the movies and such, just I couldn't remember spelling of moves in Jap. Thanks for the nice reviews as well, I try my best to make sure its as error free as possible and very descritptive as well. I might have trouble with the love parts, but I know I'll have some kick ass fighting in there. I'm kind of scared though cause The chpter about Zanshi's past will kill me...not a might...it will lol. Oh and tell me if you guys like my portrayal of the characters? Trying to keep them as close to the real deal as possible. Hope you grow to like Zanshi as well.

    I really enjoy writing stories for this site and I hope that I'll become a respectable author...maybe even win some IYFG awards sometime too...whenever they allow me in lol.

    Oh ya and EQ was the bomb. I'd still take over WoW and stuff nowadays. I was a 66 Bst Lord. Never really ound time to push to 70. Maybe sometime lol...


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  • From ANON - inugirl2003@netscape.net on November 14, 2006
    Wow! An Inuyasha fan and played EQ, that's me! My main character was a lvl 70 wizzie. Cool, nice to meet you.
    Good start, keep going, looking forward to see how it progresses :).
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  • From ANON - Winterzforgotten on November 14, 2006
    Not sure what happened with the - above the vowel thing, but it isn't supposed to look like the roof of a house, rather was supposed to be a flat line above the vowel...maybe they don't have that option here. Sorry bout that.
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  • From ANON - Winterzforgotten on November 14, 2006
    I wasn't sure if you were looking for the Japanese or English versions of moves so I'll include both. These are taken directly from Wikipedia

    Iron Reaver Soul Stealer also known as Exorcising claws of steel: Sankon Tesso(u)
    Blades of Blood: Hijin Kesso(u) the (U) Is used instead of the - above the vowel (ô)

    Weapons:
    Wind Scar: Kaze no Kizu
    Explosive flowing wave, also known as the backlash wave: bakuryûha
    Barrier shatter also known as the red Tessaiga (The usage of Tetsusaiga is a preference either would be correct)
    Diamond spear wave also known now as the Adamant barrage: Kongôsôha here the ô is used instead of the (U)
    Dragon scaled Tessaiga(Tetsusaiga): Ryûrin no (Tessaiga)Tetsusaiga

    Other:
    Beads of Subjugation : Kotodama no Nenju
    Sit: Osuwari

    Inuyasha's clothing in a historical text:
    Kosode: His undershirt
    Hitoe: His jacket or fire rat robe
    Hakamas: Pants
    Fundoshi: Traditional attire for under garments
    Obi: His belt

    A lot of times you will see the use of 'ou' rather than 'ô' or 'û' either can be used as it gives the reader a sense of how the word is pronounced. The usage of tsus for Tessaiga you will find both versions in stories, and both are correct..one I am sure is more "accurate" than the other, however I use Tessaiga as that is how the word is pronounced, where tsus is the way you would form the word on your mouth. I hope this helps you out.

    Good story so far, I look forward to the next chapter
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  • From ANON - XxSangoxX *n.s.i* on November 14, 2006
    you have Sango's weapon right her other is the katana she keeps at her side.. Miroku's is the Kazaana, Inuyasha's Tessaiga.

    There's the ademant barrage... which i know i've spelled wrong in this comment... i'm out of it today forgive me... Windscar, Iron Rever Soul Stealer... Red tessaiga,Backlash wave, Blades of blood... and a few more.. but i'm so tired.. i didn't tell you the jap. names for his because i honestly don't want to spell them wrong.. you can find the information on anime sites i'm sure...

    Nice story so far... I hope inuyasha doesn't stay ignorant for too long. His feelings do mean something to her.
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  • From ChrisScott on November 13, 2006
    Sorry bout that. When I moved this story to Inu/Kagome, I somehow clipped out all of my story LoL. Good thing I kept my work saved huh? Hopefully everythings in order now. If you liked the story holla at me in an e-mail or leave me a review. (I'm basically a Fanfiction Virgin and need all the confidence I can get! ^_^ Will have story updated eventually!
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