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Reviews for Nunc Coniunctis Viribus: All Together Now

By : ButterYasha

From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2008
Ah i love your fics, fun and mush and smutt all in one XD Hanyou Fantasies was on of the best InuxKag fics I've read. You're so good and involving both humour and other things in the right proportions according to the plot etc. Very good. Must have taken you friggin ages to get the silly html coding right ne? I dont even try to do that with my fics as i dont really understand it and would probably just make it worse XD Neways 10/10 on this one - Sheer brilliance ^_^

Shigure-san
x chuu x
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From ANON - Bookreader9999 on January 10, 2007
That was great!!! I think I smiled through the whole story!!!
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From ANON - darkgodess64 on January 04, 2007
Very good fanfic !!!!!! MORE PLEASES!!!!!
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From ANON - Pretty Brown Eyes on December 23, 2006
I loved it!! The whole say that "love" thing scene was hilarious. Thanks for the laugh.I'll be looking out for your other fics.
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From ANON - szaugglaughs on December 05, 2006
Here I was just going to leave a review for this hysterical fic and then I read the last A/N and all I could think was...what the F***?

Yeah, it's me, the szaugglaughs you got accused of plagarizing. All I can say is...Fred, dude, whoever you are, think a bit more before your accuse someone of that! Crap! Frankly, I can't think of ANYTHING that could inspire something as freakin' funny as the Muffquimcunt Call (Muffcuntquim? whatever) except someone's brain. I'll admit, though, I had a moment when I read that and I thought...DID I read your fic and forget and then start writing? Which would just suck completely and be totally mortifying..but no, I checked...I orignially published this on FF net in March, and then it started to get more hentai so I started publishing it over here as well come September. (phew!)

Hmmmm, I guess it just so happens that more than one human being actually had the idea for inner dialogue! Woah, how did that happen? Oh, and hmmm, add on Facets.... ( which I just read a couple days ago and is awesome and this was such a great parody of it I almost peed my pants!) and that means 3 whole people thought of the concept! What a miracle! Because, as we know, inner dialogue NEVER happens in Inuyasha fanfictions. And then to accuse you of plagarism when it's a FREAKIN' PARODY and is using the inner dialogue of someone else's story entirely, anyway! Well, except for the dick, of course, which is about the funniest damn thing in the world. I remember reading the epilogue he got all to himself in your other story and I laughed my ass off. Actually, I think I even reviewed the other story because I thought it was awesome! Okay, sorry, I should get back to the review and stop ranting.

I thought Kagome's Call was a riot, I thought as a parody it did a fantastic job, especially with the 'penis latin.' The mocking of the human aspect cracked me up as well. Anyway, sorry someone pissed on your efforts that way. Totally sucks. Wish I'd known about it before and I would have verbally brought the smack down earlier!!
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From ANON - Anon on December 02, 2006
Excellent work, but it pains me to offer some correction. First of all, "All together now" in Latin is "Nunc omnes uniter" (or a number of other constructions, such as "Nunc omnes copulati" or "Nunc simul omnem"), but the form you used simply doesn't work ("Nunc coniunctis viribus" translates more to "Concerning now the men together"). "I am large, not small" translates as "Magnus sumque non parvus" ("brevis" means "short" in the sense of insufficient or brief), and one would be more likely to say "Sum immensus" to express tremendous size. "Magister Mundi" doesn't quite translate to "Master of the Universe," but it's certainly close enough. "Magnus penis te spectat" means "A great/big penis is watching you." "I am a spectacularly huge penis" is more along the lines of "Sum penis colossicus incredibiliter"

All that aside, this was a magnificent piece of work. It manages to capture Inuyasha's personality brilliantly (something at which you've become quite adept), as well as managing to convey an admittedly hentai continuation of the series's authentic mix of comedy, romance, and (of course) action. Your description of the sex itself is extremely erotic and beautiful, particularly in the way you managing to unobtrusively blend touching metaphysical love with touching physical love -- quite simply, you've managed to write a story that's touching in both senses of the word. To be blunt, you've conveyed true, innocent, pure love at the same time as hot, rough, dirty fucking. Both are incredible.

Truly, you are a brilliant artist. Bravo!
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From ANON - shaid on November 19, 2006
hehehe That was fun! And I read your "hanyou fantasies" and szaugglaughs' stories about the same time... Totally did NOT occur to me that either of you might be copying the other. I saw it as case of "great ideas evolving in paralell." It happens! I love the tone of the Demon part... Haughty and exsaperated... and really really into Kagome. :-) I enjoyed. It cracked me up!
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From ANON - inugirl2003@netscape.net on November 19, 2006
Yup! Please don't listen to anyone that critisizes you, they must be idiots! I love any work you do, it's really great quality and well written. You're truly original and innovative, and anyone that says different is just plain stupid. Butteryasha, you are one of the few artisits I check up on to see if you have anything new because you such a fantastic writer. Love love love you, so don't listen to anyone else :)! Thanks again for your hard work. Fabulous as always!
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From ANON - pat on November 19, 2006
awsome beatutiful
i loved your last story and i loved this one just as much
great storys dude
keep it up

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From bluezinthos on November 18, 2006
i logged in just to drop you a line, Butter! senseual, tittilating, erotic, and, of course, hilarious. i always complain that guys thought it would be a good idea to stand in line for two heads...poor inuyasha to end up with three voices. i liked the additional 'dick speak', it brought out his demon's more humorous side, especially when talking to the human half. are you and l_poe going to get together and work on other 'facets' lemon parodies?
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From ANON - Inu Hanyou Nikkie on November 18, 2006
**Snorts..** Well... Fred is probably have a No-Caffeine/No-Nooky day when he reviewed. I have read the story in question and most assuredly I don not get the impression of it being Inuyasha's Dick. I only get the sense of the two sides of ones consciencous sitting on his shoulders. The Angel and the Devil. I have also checked the Disclaimer and not seen any claims to "Owning" Inu's Dick. You write so that we know it is Inu's male bits.. (Which I'm still having the occassional pout about.. not getting his award...) Also I checked over the dates... they are most certainly different. Perhaps Fred better research next time before he accuses. (And look up Plagarism) **Snorts**

Enough!! I review!!

Totally awesome!! I loved it!! How perfectly you wrote this story! I love it!! I nearly wee'd when I thought that Kaede was going to be turned on and come onto Inuyasha by the Mate Call! And then I had a bad little image of the Go-shinboku getting turned on by The Call as well. ( dogs and their trees..) lmost had to use the inhaler! I give this two thumbs and two big toes up!! (and if I had male bits.. Errrr Never mind...) It was so beautiful!! And very hot as well!! Inu-ish... and then every part was speaking it!! Priceless!! Mastery, Sheer Mastery!! Love it!! The only un-sexy part was the He-Man reference... shudders.. cringes... whimpers.. Poor Dick.. he gets the brunt of the sits... I loved that you included all of the parts reactions to the sits... Oh gods!! The dickhead comment to Inu's Dick.. was hiliarious!! I have been inspired to do a sketch of all parts of Inuyasha... I've got it on my list! Oh god!! You rhymned!! LOL!! Dickhead.. Thickhead!! Poor Dick.. he was going to be revealed last.. sniffles dramatically...Took his Human side long enough to pop up into the action! Too Awesome!! Kagome's female bits were calling back!! I wonder where she learned this littel secret talent!! Oh my GOD!! That is a first!! Inu's Dick feeling slight at having to break the barrier!! You Totally Rock!! Squeals and scampers!! Whoot!! Woot!! Whoot!! Woot!! Bravo!! Bravo!! Kudos!! Kudos!! Bravissimo!! Bravissimo!!! Please keep up the most Awesome Work!! Thank you and thank you and thank you!! for sharing this with and thank you for having that conservation with L-Poe!!
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From Pucedragon on November 18, 2006
Ok, well forget Fred!! I read the particular fanfic he's talking about, and even though there are similarities, I don't see how he could say you plagiurized(spelling?). I, for one, thoroughly enjoyed this, the whole conversation was at once hilarious, and touching at the same time! Kudos!
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From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2006
Actually, Fred is completely off the wall and wrong. This is NOTHING like or has anything to do with "This is Going to be Fun".
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From ANON - madmiko on November 18, 2006
Good one! Well-written! Very funny and great lemony flavor -- I'll be sure to read your other writings now!
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