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Reviews for Violation of Honor

By : Rinseternalsoul
  • From ANON - mrs sesshy on March 11, 2008
    fantabulous!!! you weave this battle scene so well, it's giving me a 3d visual of the amazing death of Azusa and her just rewards! (i just finish watching yuyu hakusho so it came in handy with the imagination)... i can see a change in power coming for Kags and Miroku? perhaps? and can't wait for the next update!!! i love you rin and risa for this heart-stopping chapppie.
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  • From TheWeimarClassicist on March 11, 2008
    Another WONDERFUL chapter. I feel justice had most certainly been served when it comes to Azusa!!! I LOVE the use of Aztec mythology, very well done and well incorporated into the grand scope. I loved the touching declaration Sesshomaru made, it's so nice to see the lovers re-united again. I hope it lasts, though the looming danger with regards to Nobunaga and Iku promise more twists and I look forward to them as well!! YOU AND RISA ARE THE BEST!!!! I will be crossing my fingers ever time the adultfanfiction site loads, heart pounding, sweating slightly in anticipation of an update... LOVE!!

    ~TWC
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  • From ANON - Marlet on March 11, 2008
    oh my.. how did you come up with the idea of using aztec gods and goddesses??.. that's really original!! and I have to say I kind of feel proud of reading something about Mexico in a place that I would have never imagined hopefully your readers will get interested in the aztec culture and learn about them... and maybe they'll get to know our others cultures as well (Mayas, Olmecs, Toltecs, etc)

    anyway... i've never read a fanfic like yours, I absolutely love it!!
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  • From Panchat on March 11, 2008
    whoa! Asuza really gets it lol. very well done!
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  • From MourningRaven on March 11, 2008
    This story is so epic! I love it!!! Thank you for updating with such a wonderful chapter! I hope it can be done again soon!
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on March 11, 2008
    As always, I admire and adore the level of detail and the lengths you take to produce this exquisite piece of work. I love reading about gods and goddesses, and it was wonderful of you to point out a different set other than the Greek/Roman or Egyptian gods.

    I absolutely adore mythology and have been trying to work it into my class for when we finish our frameworks for this year because it is great exposure.

    Well, I look forward (somewhat impatiently... LOL) for your next chapter.
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  • From Patty530 on March 11, 2008
    Thank you. That battle was intense enough to sooth my blood lust. I wanted her to suffer and now all I'm singing, "Ding, dong. The witch is dead!"

    Seriously, great job as always. Now I'm even more anxious for your updates.

    Luv,

    Patty
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  • From ANON - Merely Truth on March 11, 2008
    That's sure ! You made an awefully beautiful description of the battle, good rythm, all were in, AND, in this chapter, for our poor Sesshomaru, it was very difficult, with Kagome in his own claws, horrible ! Then, I wait to see his face : Inuyasha, no other, has undertood the truth !!!! Gaaahhhhhh ......

    I'm also glad to think that I can be sure, knowing you as an author, that the end of your wonderful story will NOT be wasted, not too fastly written, but very enjoyable for us. Ahh, the waiting, how delightful !

    Mille fois merci ! (a thousand of thank you !)

    Your faithful french reader,

    Merely Truth
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  • From jennabean on March 11, 2008
    Woot woot! Ding dong the witch is dead! Great chapter, very entertaining battle scene. And I LOVED Sesshoumaru's proclamation! I can't wait to read what you have in store for the next chapter; that damn bird needs to get his punishment too!
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  • From friskykat on March 11, 2008
    That was great. OMG I love how you gave her what she needed. HAHAHA ding dong the wicked witch is dead. Now we just have to see what happens to the bird brain that was with her. Please tell me that he gets to follow the yellow brick road. I want him to suffer. Maybe bring out some of Marquis de Sade tricks for him. That was wonderful. I can't wait until your next update.

    From the bat cave Nikki
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  • From emmibubbles07 on March 11, 2008
    Oh my gosh.I have never
    read a chapterso...intense.
    I was on the edge of my
    seat the whole chapter.
    And now that Asuza is
    dead, I can't wait until
    Kagome and Sesshoumaru
    get together. I also
    hope that Iku gets
    a harsh punishment
    as well.That I do.


    You guys kick ass.
    Plain and simple.


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  • From sysclp on March 11, 2008
    I have really been enjoying this story and it is sad to see it approaching the end, but it has been a wonderful ride so far. Nice punishment for Asuza, but we still have Iku to worry about! Thanks!
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  • From SesshysJadedSamuri on March 11, 2008
    AIYAAA!

    Dear gods woman... that chapter was fantastic... you had my heart pounding through the entire chapter. Oh the wonderful irony of letting the Aztec gods have at her in the afterlife.... pure brilliance. Such a beautiful ending for such an ugly enemy. I am sure that the next chapter is going to be a good one too, with the return of Iku and hopefullly some yummy gettin back together sex for our favorite couple.... And I can't wait to see what Inu's reaction is oging to be when he gets a look at Saya.

    luv ya hon, even if I hardly ever have the time to review.
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  • From ANON - Rose on March 10, 2008
    A beautiful new chapter! Two of them actually seeing as I did not review for the last update. Poor Saya, I may not like the idea of her and Inuyasha being together, but you still created a wonderfully likable character. I must say that the way you write about Hyuuga's wives is one of my favorite parts of the story! They all sound so beautiful and wonderful that I just can't help but adore them. I'm so relieved that it is finally out, the fact that Sesshoumaru is Kagome's youkai, I can NOT wait to see how you have things work out now that the relationship is known. May I ask how many chapters you plan on making this story? Oh I do hope it's going to continue for a long time. I suppose I'll end this review by saying that you are one of the most wonderful authress' in fanfiction or otherwise and I always look forward to reading your work!
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  • From ANON - serasvictoria666 on March 10, 2008
    Yes! Finally, she's dead! I definitely enjoyed that part. lol
    I'm always beyond happy when you update. Definitely can't wait for the next one!
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