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Reviews for Violation of Honor

By : Rinseternalsoul

From friskykat on February 25, 2008
Wow you had to leave it on a cliff. now we have to wonder what happens to our sesshomaru. LOL well there goes another great chapter. But I can't help but wonder who dies? who is it that the old woman was talking about? Well I hope we find out soon. Sorry I did not get a chance to review the last chapter or so. I started a new job and things have been crazy. I am lucky to have time for reading. I have not touched my own story in weeks. but I also need a new beta. Know any with time to spare for a newbe writer?
Well until next time from the bat cave nikki.
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From ANON - Trice on February 25, 2008
Since you already know you will be getting death threats from your cliffy I won't even bother! ") This was an awesome chapter. You have such a way of writing. When I first started reading this story I didn't think I could continue reading the story due to what it entailed but the way the story flowed I could not do anything but keep on reading. It is like I am there with the characters when I am reading. Your story has the making of a good movie. I really look forward to reading the next chapter. Hopefully you have mercy on us and have it out quickly since you just killed us with the cliffy. Oh the pain and torture! ")
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From ANON - serasvictoria666 on February 24, 2008
And I can't wait 'till next time! I check to see if you update almost everyday. You wouldn't believe how excited I get when I see a new chapter up. lol
I might have said this before, but this is an amazing and wonderful story. I love it completely. So thank you so much! Both you and Risa are my favorite people in the whole world right now. ^-^
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From Poetlover on February 24, 2008
excellent chapter! kagome has realized that sessohmaru is the one. i can't wait for him to finally tell her. i know that i have a ways before that happens though. poor sessohmaru....having to face that evil b*tch and her lacky(? spelling) again. i wait for the next chapter with much anticipation. keep up the excellent work and please update soon.
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From ANON - Tajia on February 24, 2008
This is one of those stories that is so well written the reader can easily visualize each and every aspect of the story. I can visualize Inuyasha with that big ol sword thrown over his shoulder talking crap to Sesshomaru, and I certainly visualized what Iku and Azusa did to Sesshomaru and Uchuu. ( shaking my head) I hope you have something really special in store for those 2. I look forward to Kagome and Sesshomaru's face to face. Wonderful story, just beautiful.....Thanks a lot!
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From ANON - InuPriestss on February 24, 2008
*sighs*... I was starting to create gouges in the computer desk from my nails and getting so entranced in this chapter.
I was at the end and I was like WTF? its at the end of the chapter all ready? But alas...
I cannot wait till the next one! You are utterly amazing. You and SilentDeath are my two faves!
I love you guys! You creat such amazing imagry with your writings...
oh and are you going to add more STUFF to the house of lemons? lol.. *grin*
Can't blame a girl for asking can ya? lol
Happy writings...
InuPriestess

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From ANON - CherieElizabeth on February 24, 2008
I have the great honor of having a nasty case of 'stiff neck' or as we call it in kentucky, "I got me a crick in da'neck," from re-reading your story non-stop yesterday. lol. Ah well, the pain is worth it.

I�m sure glad that I caught the missing wife before Hyuuga did. Me thinks that he would demand a recount so that he could maintain his title of 16. Perhaps he�d merely borrow
Yumiko or Kagome as a body double until he found Lady Hotaro. *giggle*

Another brilliant chapter, of course I'm simply waiting for either Kagome or Sesshoumaru to attack the other and snog them senseless. I'm sure that's in the near future as well.

I am praying that you don't kill of Saya. I like where you�re going with her and InuBaka. Her uncle, however...if the soldiers or Inuyasha don't get to him, I call dibs. If I honor him with a sketch *glare* it will be hard for me not to scribble out his face or draw him with various objects sticking out of every orifice, or perhaps creating a few new orifices.

OH, and Sessy being all grrr-face when it comes to who's around Kagome *Squeal* I wish I had a man who would growl for me. That's just...HOT.

Alright....so ten days. Ten days is about how long I have to wait for the next chapter. *Takes a deep breath* Okay, I think I can do it. In the mean time, I�ll get started on Project: Violation. Thanks to you and Risa both! Keep em coming!

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From jennabean on February 24, 2008
Fantastic! I hope you know, that seeing a new chapter up is like getting a present ^_^ I for one, happen to like the idea of Inuyasha and Saya, I think they would make a great couple! Poor Chisumi, but I know it was all for a good reason, I mean, what else- save for Iku- would get Sesshoumaru so riled up? I can't wait until the next chapter!!! Keep up the fantastic work!
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From LoveIsAMovement on February 24, 2008
Wow Rin!!! You and Risa rock it out hardcore!!!! My friend recommended this fict to me and so I sat down, begun reading and was sucked in instantly, I felt like the kid in the Never Ending Story( complete with giant white sesshy dog to ride on) reading this fict. I sat in my apartment ignoring my fiance ( well not completely, we had a hentai moment while I was reading your fict, between chapters .... I thought you'd be proud! hahahaha) for three days just gasping, ohhin, ahhing and crying. I agree with miss Weimar, Chisumi's death was sad but it goes so well with the plot line, death is part of war and you're awesome for not making it cheesy with a random resurrection with tenseiga. May Chisumi rest in peace and may the poor girl stay dead for the sake of good literature...amen. Anyway, Oh and may I say I LOVED THE MONKEY LEMON!!!! holy hell, that was the best effing lemon this side of fandom!!! and I must concur with miss weimar again when i say that you and RIsa are QUEENS OF THE LEMON!!! OFFICIALLY AND UNDISPUTEDLY!!! QUEENS I SAY !!! RULERS !!! OH I HAIL THEE GREAT SIRES!!!! RULERS OF THE LEMON CLAN!!!!!! ok anyway love it, can't wait for the rest and I thank you from one hentai girl to another for this wicked-rad story!!!!!

~Vanessa AKA LoveIsAMovement
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From moonmelodi on February 24, 2008
Thank you so much for updating so quickly!! You've got the next chapter written already right? You're just adding the finishing touches and then you'll be posting it right? Right?? Oh man, I'm never going to be able to sleep now, especially since this chapter ended in a cliffhanger! Gaa!
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From ANON - unruly2love on February 24, 2008
Just curious, would it be possible to raise the girl from her death. By doing so he would free himself of any guilt and feelings of failure that might have fallen on him, as well as bring an innocent back into this world. On the other hand her death could force Sesshomarus concentration into a unrivaled force, allowing him to overcome his fears so that he may avenge her death, while bringing him and Kagome closer together to sweep away the sorrow that could overcome. Of course you can do all of this and still bring her back. Your choice.
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From moonmelodi on February 24, 2008
Oh my gosh, there's another chapter posted. That was really fast you two! Thanks! I'm going to go make some popcorn and place my "no interuption" sign on my door. I can't wait to read it!!!!
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From TheWeimarClassicist on February 24, 2008
Thanks for the shout out! There is definitely more than one way to use the word pimpocity in reference to the magical piece of art we all know as The Violation of Honor. Another brilliant chapter!!!! You and Risa never cease to make me wiggle in my chair with a range of emotion while I'm reading this story. I think my boyfriend was ready to commit me after I read that last chapter, from all of the noises I was making and the groan when i realized it was a cliffy. Chisumi's death , though sad was a WONDERFUL plot element, it added to the drive of our heros and the madness of the crazy bitch villain Asuza. I love the reference to Vlad the impaler, it was brilliant!! I hate it when characters die particularly in Sesshomaru stories and he just uses tenseiga to bring them back magically and everything is happy and fluffy, that's just not the way the world works and you are a amazing to dare to stray from that stupid cliche. I love this chapter and can't wait for the next one!!!!
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From ANON - Me on February 24, 2008
Evil cliffhanger.... wouldn't it be possible for Sesshoumaru to revive the servant girl using tessaiga?
Please? And I truly hope you have the most horrible death for Azusa and Iku slow and painful
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From ANON - CherieElizabeth on February 23, 2008
Sooooo, I�m addicted to your story and have read it so many times while I wait for the next installments that I�ve decided to do something to not only curb my addiction, but to help with visualization.

I�m starting up a little thing I call �The Violation of Honor Project.� I know, original title�it took me forever to come up with the name. o.O

You have so many original characters that are completely stunning and so well described that it�s impossible for any artist reading this story to not want to render the characters on paper.

Now, while I plan on of course capturing the main characters: Iku, Asuza, Uchuu, Shin and Hyuuga, I fear my biggest undertaking is going to be Hyuuga�s harem of sixteen�.of which I could only find fifteen.

Aki-sama,

Aoi-sama � Eyes: magenta Hair: powder-blue

Lady Arisu-First, Tall, Hair: Dark

Ayako - Sixth

Benika �fourth � Mole on chin, Hair: Emerald, Straight, Long

Beniko � fifth - Hair: Emerald, Straight, Long

Lady Cho � Hair: dark

Lady Eiko - Eldest

Lady Fumiko � Hair: dark

Hitomi � eyes: lilacs speckled with gold

Lady Kameko �eight Hair: Long, Dark Eyes: Big Dark

Lady Kayo -Preggers

Mai-sama � Dancer: Hair: White

Momoko

Yukiko -Youngest

So, who am I missing? Any and all further details about all of your OC�s would be most welcome�if you have free time that is. I would NEVER want to take away from your writing time. *grin*

Also, Congrats on all the nominations and awards, all which were well deserved.

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