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Reviews for Violation of Honor

By : Rinseternalsoul

From ANON - amy on September 16, 2007
this is really great! now that uchuu reached the monkey clan and sessho heading out to the west there's bound to be some action! i like how this story is going...keeps me waiting with a bated breath for the next chapter.i am soo hooked. i hope iku will get more than burned next time! lol...and i'm waiting for inuyasha and the crew!!till next update!
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From hatsumichan on September 15, 2007
Hooray!!! Very enjoyable indeed. Well worth the wait, but please.....pretty please...don't wait another month for the next one!
I don't know if I can stand it!
:)
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From hasu86 on September 15, 2007
you really make my day with your updates you know. excellent chapter and the lemon was just superb, and asuza's an evil bitch, but dare i say, was that a little feeling i read? i do believe so but still, she's an evil bitch who i dislike immensely. i'm glad uchuu made it home though, go monkeys!! but i can't help but feel that the battle's just beginning. and damn, i really wanted sesshoumaru to tell her who he was, but i can perfectly understand why he couldn't. aiya, makes me wonder how kagome will react once she does discover who he is. i'm practically itching in anticipation for the next chapter so continue soon!!
-hasu86
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From ANON - Trice on September 15, 2007
Man that was a great chapter. I get so invovled reading the story I get so mad when I get to the end of the chapter because I want to read more. The way you set-up this story just draws the reader into it so much so we ust can't get enough. It has all the making of a good movie you watch over and over again. I can't wait to read the next chapter hopefully your schedule won't allow us to wait to long.
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From ANON - Tiffany on September 15, 2007
Irresistible addition to the story; very well rounded plot focus. I think one of the things I really like about your writings style is the in-character persona(s) that make this believable. The, ah, smut was very nice addition too o^_^o.
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From yeiko87 on September 15, 2007
This story is incredible. While the torture scenes are graphic, its not simply gratuitous, which is nice :p Really, wonderful writing, and interesting plotline. Also, as a side note, I like how you handle Sesshoumaru's character (i.e. how you dont make him suddenly go all "POOF! NOW I LOVE EVERYTHING!!") ha ha Seriously though, this story has sucked me in, and I'm eager to see the next chapter ^-^
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From ANON - AnimeKay17 (Kay but not logged because I'm too lazy) on September 12, 2007
WOW I love this Story keep writing please!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - T A Farr on September 11, 2007
please hurry my hold is on this guy leg and his feet still smells and no there be house play before the first date . AAWW Babe said not even a little foot play said a male voice No!!!!! Hurry with the next chapter, before I give in out of boredom .
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From ANON - T A Farr on September 05, 2007
HERE I AM HANGING ON [ you got any fives ] waiting for the next chapter [a male voice said go fish ] dam [male voice you got jacks ]
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From ANON - T A Farr on September 04, 2007
Still Hanging off this Cliff but the good news the guy with smelly feet ask me out. the bad news is we can't get off this Cliff sooooooooooooooooo hurry up !
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From ANON - T A Farr on September 03, 2007
Come on Guys cut us some you got us hanging off a Cliff and the guy I'm hanging off with has smelly feet . Please get us off this dam Cliff hanger . Sniff Sniff dam get something for those feet you ass ! ~~
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From ANON - T A Farr on August 28, 2007
Come on Guys I am on pins and Needles and I m Bleeding to death here ! Get to the next Chapter Please I want to Know if Inuyasha is going find k before he get home or that Warlord .

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From ANON - Nickriz on August 26, 2007
I was totally surprised by the fact that Sesshoumaru and Kagoma would become an official couple in the latest chapter.I had thought that he was gonna get back to her, and once she was up and done eating..they would spend a bit of time together and get ready to leave for their own ways.

In my mind, I was wondering where or when they would finally get their first joining.Cos in the 17th chapter, Sesshoumaru did mention that he didn't want to take her when she couldn't see him.So I thought he'd leave her a momento, or something kagome would definitely know its the same man she shared hell and near death with and was saved by the same man too. I imagined a weird scenario where kagome was back with her friends and later once Sesshoumaru took care of his castle and got back his land, he would find some time to approach her..(by that time, kagome could see).

I thought he'd send her some msg to meet him somewhere,..or near the cave or the well..and then he'd show her who that "mystery man" really is.Kagome probably had a shock or a fit..and tells him off..but after some effort of his convincing..she realizes that its really him..and they probably have their first joining then..

But I did think that she'd have felt stupid and regret that it turned out to be sesshoumaru since she's with inuyasha for a long time. The betrayal of her feelings towards inuyasha would be quite an issue.

Well..that's my own guess at ur story..

After reading the latest chapter..i'm quite happy that they had their first joining. Im not sure how the story will progress..but i think whether its done earlier or later, the intensity of the story doesn't change bcos the ground work has already been laid for the star couple's relationship to progress.

I especially liked the way u portrayed Sesshoumaru as humbled, due to his experiences with Azusa and the bird(sudddenly forgot his name) in terms of being tortured and treated as a slave.It is nice to see that bcos of what happened..he can apreciate it when kagome comforts and assures him as he gets a flashback of Azusa during their pre-mating moments. I like the gentle side of sesshoumaru that is seen here as he thinks of another's comfort and pleasure first b4 himself. Alot of the other stories are quite stereotyped to give him a dominating feel eventhough he's in love with the woman of his life.

It was quite unexpected to see u inserting the part where sesshoumaru gets a flash back of azusa.But i think it was very good of u to do that cos if u didn't, then the whole story would have been faulted with a flaw.If sesshoumaru went thru the mating ceremony smoothly with kagome, then writing all that chapters of torture would have amounted to nothing. The fact that he remembers it at that intimate time, proves that he is indeed scarred, and thus the focal point in his character change..which is the essence of the story..besides getting kagome.

Actually, I had thought that when he suddenly remembered Azusa and the horrors of his experience, both him and kagome would come to a halt in their senses and stall their approach to finally mating.I had thought Kagome would suddenly realize that this is too soon bcos she hasn't even seen the man with her physical sight to know whether he's what she's willing to give up her innocence to.And for sesshoumaru, I had thought he'd be berating himself for encouraging her into sex b4 she can even see or know him more.lol

Well, now that they're officially mated and have come to terms with accepting each other..I'm looking forward to the time where they have to part and how they're gonna identify each other when kagome can finally see again.I think it would prove to be challenging,since she still doesn't know who he is yet..but she's already his woman. To finally be confronted with the truth of his identity would probably shock her and put her into some sort of denial for the sake of inuyasha..but at this point..that is just my opinion after reading so many inuyasha fanfictions from aff.net.

Besides that,..sesshoumaru being faced with the prospect of her rejecting him when she finally knows who he is..is something that i think alot of fans are looking forward too. The inner struggle of sesshoumaru,his fears of making himself known to her before and after she knows his identity will prove to be a good drama.Proving himself to be the man kagome mated with is gonna be quite fun to explore and read abt..since they are already mated. I'm sure there's some sort of connection between them now and in a way, kagome would know..

And whether or not she gets pregnant with just one mating with sesshoumaru,...i think all of us will be eager to know.Im not sure if it'll be nice if she gets pregnant so soon..given the fact that there's still the impending danger of azusa to be dealt with.I'd probably see them defeating her first b4 kagome gets pregnant..

Or..maybe sesshoumaru and kagome met and reconciled with each other, and while fighting azusa and the gang, they had to escape to the future..and sesshoumaru learns of kagome's time and her life in the future. It would turn out to be quite a saga if it went that way huh? I wouldn't mind since it would give the story more depth and points for furthur development.

Maybe the story could shift into the present day tokyo, where azusa chases our couple into the future and nobunaga gets a glimpse into the future of his empire? Probably the star couple uses their powers to stop azusa and nobunaga from finding a way to the future and fails, and the enemy gets to the future. Thus in throwing them back in time, sesshoumaru or kagome has to invoke some spell..thus seperating them..or sealing them in different time zones/or as a non-living statue..only to meet maybe once every full moon? Maybe in their fight, the well back in time got destroyed, and sesshoumaru had to cast a spell where he's bound to the future with kagome, and gives her the ability to visit her eventhough he is locked in the past?

hahaha..i am just rambling with silly ideas that conjures up in my head after reading the story.
I just feel that there's alot to explore with this story..but of course..that is your work in the end.Where u make the story go from here, we'd be delighted to read since it's been a very good story.

I've read alot of your other works and I love them..although it was quite a long..long ..long..long..while back.So when i saw ur name on the story..after i read the summary..i was delighted.hehehe..
I hope the review encourages u and promps you to write more..and give u ideas for the future development of this story or other stories.

please continue to write more quality stories that your fans all love u for.

Nickriz

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From marcia on August 20, 2007
I'm so impatient about Kagome find out that her companion is Sesshoumaru. I hope I don't have to wait too much longer but I have the feeling I will have to. Great work btw.
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From ANON - SilentDeath on August 20, 2007
Hehehehehehe!!! Love the chapters!! I do say, i would be pretty wet and bothered thinking about him throwing me down and fucking the hell out of me! Okay, i am done being socialy unexceptable. Great work dear. enjoyed the hell out of it. and thanks for the great read! Yes, one day, in the near future, i will come back. But as life has it, i have to get shit done. Look forward to the next chapters dear. Keep it up!!!
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