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By : Rinseternalsoul

From ANON - cocoke5 on August 12, 2007
i love the story and the chapter was real good and it keep me on my seat and read it made me hot lol . up date soon . i hope that kagome get her eyesite back . and see who she make love to. and love him. like he loves her. up date soon. your fan.
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From ANON - fortunesque on August 12, 2007
That was seriously one of the most beautiful lemons I have read. The details, adjectives and concepts used were extraordinary. I especially liked how you made the sex realistic; it fucking hurts the first time. I can't wait for her to find out who her lover is!
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From ANON - gryphonwills on August 12, 2007
Another GREAT chapter!
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From ANON - The Mad Dragon on August 06, 2007
Ooooh, so very lovely. The characters, the descriptions, the language, the details, oh my. I've continually switching between chewing on my nails in worry, wishing for a few cruesome (and, contrary to my normal choice of fic, preferrably graphic) deaths of a few specific characters, nearly falling off my chair in laughter, and melting into a gooshy pool from the tender fluff. I began reading the story, dreading the worst, yet now find myself 5 hours later and well into the night, madly clicking the Update button in the hopes of seeing a new chapter magically appear.

The cruelty of Azusa and Iku have succesfully made me gag - a first, I admit, for a work of fiction. The vivid descriptions so harsh that I have shuddered and continually forcing myself to chant 'there will be a happy ending, there will be a happy ending' before being able to continue. Poor Sesshoumaru... He's going to need some serious therapeutic help, as I doubt even youkai can pass through such events entirely unscarred.

Needless to say, of course, I am utterly enthralled by your vivid characterisations, and despite a lack of detailed descriptions, I find all of them appear before my mind's eye, as if they were real. I openly admit to be particular fond of Uchuu, though I doubt I am the first. Yet even the lesser characters; the old hag, the soldiers, the rebels - all have a surprising amount of life and depth to them that I am outmost pleased to encounter.

Yet, what I find that you have accomplished the very best, is the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome within the dungeon. The bonding of two desperate souls in a desperate time is so utterly realistic, not to mention the physical interaction between them. Although some may claim that it seems to be moving quite fast, you have managed to pull it off flawlessly for the situation, and for that alone, you recieve a standing applaud from all those who have attempted to capture these very emotions and thoughts within two characters, as I have never before seen the attempt being so perfect and successful. I am, as so many others, greatly anticipating the next chapter, and I pray that you will not leave us hanging for that happy ending for too long - not to mention Kagome's reaction to finding out that her mysterious, mute youkai is none other than Sesshoumaru...

The only thing I find just a mild bit disturbing is the interaction between Shippou and Rin, but, as with other readers, it is solely because I still picture them both as young children within my mind. Yet, keeping in mind that they are both teens, I find the whole 'glancing-and-blushing' scenes so very fitting for their current ages. Although I find it humourous how Shippou finds himself threatened by Shin, I can't help but hope that our little dragon companion will find some happyness of his own.

Indeed, it would appear that, with this story, you have successfully managed to actually chalk up the setting for what I can only hope to be one of the more perfect happy endings of all times. I will, with great joy, look forward to the next installment, as I have already stated before, and will again. Next chapter is greatly anticipated, yet, again a first, I wish to rather wait months on end than to see a rushed update. For this is such a work of art that I feel it would be a disgrace against all Gods of inspiration to rush it.
And with the promise of a happy ending in mind, I shall scour the web for any and all versions of this story to gingerly keep an eye out for an update, and rejoice like a child on Christmas' eve for when I shall see another chapter added to this most wonderful of tales.

Oh, and we WILL get to see Azusa's bloody death at some point, right? *evil grin*
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From thefoxylady630 on August 01, 2007
Ok, if you don't update this story soon I might just go insane. Please for the love of all things white and fluffy, update soon. By the way the last chapter was excellent as usual and I am glad to see our captives have finally achieved a measure of freedom, for now at least. I can't wait to get to the steamy stuff with Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Please, please I start fall semester soon, I need my fix.
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From ANON - serasvictoria666 on July 30, 2007
They escaped! I'm so happy! But I wonder how much longer it will be until he tells her the truth of who he really is. I can't wait to see how she reacts!
What a wonderful story. I probably said this before, but I really LOVE your fic. Definitely one of my favorites. Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter!
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From ANON - LovyDovy on July 30, 2007
Sorry my bad wrong story review window. Can't mutitask worth a damn. Just delete my pred review Nalani and Dhmni.

Can't wait to read the next chapter. Sesshomaru is my fav character in Inuyasha. Though dark in some parts, I love the connection he has made with Kagome here. Great Work!
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 26, 2007
I've gotta say I love, love, love this story!!!! You're doing such a great job with it. Plz update a.s.a.p. I can't wait to read more :)
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From Animefreak242 on July 24, 2007
Hazzah~ Another update! ^o^ YES! Kagome should have burned his entire face off! The POS bastard. >.> How glad am I that they've finally escaped?! ^o^ Unfortunately, I don't think the same will be true for Chiisumi. Those left behind are usually quickly discovered. And I'm afriad that if Iku can't take his anger out on Kagome, he'll do so to her instead. *sigh* Here's hoping you don't kill Chiisumi. I like her... She's one of the best OC I've seen yet. A little underdeveloped, but the lack of information about her makes her seem like more of a... supporting character.

Well, I'm loving this story more and more. Hopefully things will be a little less depressing from now on. Especially with Uchuu going to warn/help his family. Wait... O_o What about Shippou, Rin, Ginta and Hakakku? They're not going to go to the castle are they?! *cries* You have to have Kagome send some sort of message to them telling Shippou about her escape! STOP THEM! You can't let them be captured! T^T

*nervous* I hope you update soon. And please don't kill, or worse torture, anyone. PLEASE.
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From ANON - SilentDeath on July 24, 2007
my dear, it has been so long from this wonderful world of writing i have so missed finishing. College has been difficult, and time consuming. I have passed well of course, and have one more year to go. But i miss finding good time to sit and write, to add one more chapter to my still unfinished love of In Under Deep. One day, i do plan on starting that story back up. But when i should be studying, i wanted to check up on an old friend and fellow writer. I see so far you have come out with another wild and evil fanfic. And a good one it is! I am not really one to read such over angst and dark fics.....i know, kind of weird comeing from me, but it is true. My own mind is perfectly warped enough for such thoughts, to have to add more from someone else that has found ways of adding new and perverse ways into the word of morbid sexual acts. But you, my dear, you have always been my better half when we used to write against eachother in the House Of Lemons. Yes, we liked to compliment eachother in ways that where similar, yet not. You have always been the best writer out of us, and you talent has stretched far beyand. You my dear, need to get you a good agent, and publish. For you have the mastermind of great wonders. No, i am not saying you have to go and write stories only like this, LOL. But, you need to make a story your own. College has haulted my progress, and will until i am out and have my degree in Network Engineering. I am still very single and still have my two spawns. lol. But i must say dear, this was a nice break in reading this story, stayed up most the night reading it. My god Rin!!!! It was fucking great!! Such darkness, and yet, you brought such fun in the characters at the same time. Oh how i miss writing and i will do my best to pick it back up after college, but you, my dear, i will continue to keep an eye on this story. It has been almost a year from reading and even longer on writing a new chapter. So, reading this story, was a nice and wonderful break. Keep up the wonderful work, my dear friend, and i will definatly continue to read it. You have always been my dark inspiration, where i was the morbid one. Now, i fear you have passed me! LOL Oh....i have forgotten my myspace password.... Sad, i know. But i will make a new one soon, and when i do, i will let you know.

SilentDeath/ BeautifulSilentDeath AKA Jamie
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From ANON - amy on July 19, 2007
woohooo! they escaped! time for sess to kick some azusa and iku butts! i'll be waiting for ur update!
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From ANON - LovyDovy on July 18, 2007
Well written work. Looking forward to reading more of it. Thanks for updating. More please.
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From BeautifulOblivion on July 17, 2007
Yay!!!!! An update. You made my day today. I love this story. Please update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter. Till later, take care.

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From ANON - CherieElizabeth on July 17, 2007
Freedom! At last. Oh my goodness it feels so good. It was like watching an action movie, the classic grand escape scene where there are lots of grunts, groans, spurting blood, clacking metal and my personal favorite, the body count.

Yes yes yes yes yes.

I so can't wait for the next chapter. The anticipation is as bad as waiting for the final Harry Potter book. Seriously, you have a great talent for story telling and I can't wait for more!
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From ANON - LadyR on July 17, 2007
Let me just say this is my favorite story. I never liked the pairing of Sess with Kagome until I started reading this. The only favor I ask is that you don't make Inuyasha out to be an idiot in the end. I like his character as well and wouldn't like to see any alterations to his character to make the pairing of Sess with Kagome much more acceptable. I don't however think you will do that because your pairing seems quite natural the way you have designed it so far.

I love this storyline and hope you write many more like this afterwards. Please keep me posted!

Thanks for all your work on this. I look forward to your updates!
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