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Reviews for Violation of Honor

By : Rinseternalsoul
  • From RyokoBlue on June 24, 2007
    I hope you plan on updating this! Before I finished this the other night, I was tired and had to sleep, but I had skipped down to see your author's note, saying that you weren't going to update anymore and that was such a disapointment. But I no longer see that author's note. Does this mean you're gonna give us more chapters?

    If you want people to point out the places that need improvement, I could do that. I know that family can be a little too nice to each other when it comes to that sorta thing. But I was reading this and enjoying it, even if there are some places that need a beta reader, someone to check grammar like comma's and periods and stuff. Let me know if you would like my assistance, even though I'm not perfect as I still have mistakes in my own fictions. I can spot things that really stand out. You can just click on my name and find my email addy.

    You really must updated this. I have to know what happens. Do they escape, does Asuza take a liking to our currently blind miko and want to abuse her or something? There's a million ideas going on in my head, you need to put them to rest! Update, update, update!!

    Ryoko Blue
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  • From sendosha on June 21, 2007
    Well, what can one say to such a great story? I canīt wait for the next chapter? When will Sesshoumaru get free and get his revenge? Itīs nice to see that you donīt bash Inuyasha? That and what a talented authoress you are!
    The only disturbing part for me is the one about Rin and Shippou. They are both kids for me and I canīt handle it when you describe Rin as sexy and males want to jump her, thatīs just disgusting. Itīs not that I enjoy that Sesshoumaru (or Kagome) was raped but I can cope with it better because he/she is an adult. What can I say, Iīm a mother and children are sacred to me. Thatīs why I decided just to skip the parts containing Rin and Shippou because I really canīt stop reading the story due to my view. I hope you donīt see this as a flame, that was not my intention at all.
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  • From JenLazar on June 21, 2007
    Way to go Rin Girl!!! I would have reviewed sooner but my laptop got sick and was at the doctor for the longest time.[brand new dang thing too] I've had to share my daughter's desktop comp in the living room and sitting in that blasted chair is such an annoyance to my back that I was barely able to read anything. But I'm back on my laptop happy as a clam with smut sitting blissfully before my eyes and who do I find has updated miraculously not once but twice within a month and with a double header to boot!!! Ohhhh Yeah!!! You're doing great Rin. I was so happy to get ANYTHING from you that if you gave your worst I would have lapped it up in a minute. I soooo miss you when you're gone. I'm glad our Snow monkey is doing better and enjoyed Sesshoumaru's torment of Kagome's monthly. Although I do have sympathy for him too and poor Uchuu. Kagome can see her hands, yay. But now the Bitch is back [and I'm not one to swear but there is no fitting nice word I can think of] and though I see too, it fitting to torture and abuse Iku, now Sesshoumaru has to go through with her...EEEEWWWW...sexual desires being forced upon him again. I can't wait until he gets his revenge. How sweet that will be. Take your time doing that particular chapter, my friend. I'd like explicit details of how he disembowels her and Iku and melts their remains to assure that no one can ever revive their bodies. You know, I bet he now understands Kagome and InuYasha's quest to regain the Jewel of Four Souls and see to it's distruction what with the insane power Azuza has with the amulet that is in her possession. Anyway, Rin, it's always a delight to see you update. It gives my perversion for smut a whole other meaning and well...hmmm...I guess it's just the way you write it, it just keeps saying "you must find out the rest"!!! Hugs and kisses...hope you and the family are enjoying the outside! Jen
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  • From cocoke5 on June 21, 2007
    oh i think that this story is real good and i love it and i cry when shippo listen to rin story about her with the wolfs. and i love the story and can not wait for more of the story and up date soon. good luck on it.
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  • From pammy on June 21, 2007
    Rin, you are soooo perverse. Back in Chapter 10, you said you estimated a couple of more "dungeon scenes". This is Chapter 14, and we're still in the dungeon....

    I think I speak for everybody in saying that Asuza and her crew need their collective asses kicked, and SOON.

    Seriously, though, this story is fantastic--you are an uber-talented author. I am totally hooked on this story. Please, update ASAP, because the wait is absolutely excruciating.
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  • From kmplease on June 20, 2007
    cant wait till you update, is it going to be a long story where thing wont get resolve till cahpters 25, not that im complaining but just want to know, please
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  • From hasu86 on June 20, 2007
    my heart goes out to sesshoumaru so bad, i almost wanna cry! what i wouldn't give to kill asuza and iku!! wonderful chaps though, and rin and shippou, too cute, too cute! wonderful work on the chapters! and man, i need some kagome and sesshoumaru lov'in right now, can't wait for that! continue soon!
    -hasu86
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  • From Demonlordlover on June 20, 2007
    *sigh* I knew I was going to be left anguishing over the poor Taiyoukai's fate. I like how he used Kagome to 'survive' the experience, but I am seriously looking forward to a possible escape and healing. No one delivers romance like you do, but I think, in this case, it will be all the more precious for the terrible experience they had to go through. AND...they might not even be done yet! Lovely job, as always.
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  • From bluemoonvixen on June 20, 2007
    Love it! As always, the new chapters were beautifully written, and the characters you want to hate are well described in their actions. I can't wait for the nect chapter, and I hope Sesshomaru can get Kagome and the poor monkey free.
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  • From unlikelygoddess on June 19, 2007
    I just wanted to tell you that you are my most absolute favorite Sesshomaru/Kagome author, and I have read stories by many differnt authors. I can't wait for you to finish your current stories and wonder if there was any way that I could be alterted when you update?

    Thank you so much for what you do.
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  • From Risa on June 14, 2007
    Outstanding! I thoroughly enjoyed this installment!
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  • From Airy on June 14, 2007
    I love the chapter. It shows the continued interest of Sessh in Kagome, I hope there is more action in the next chapter. I know you never disappoint me. I hope Iku dosen't rape Sessh again I don't think Sessh could handle it. Maybe Asuza could find out about Kagome and use her against him, but I do want Sessh to take Kagome's innocence, he is the only one who deserves that particular right. Until next time!
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  • From Vyncent on June 13, 2007
    You have just so gotta update soon. The suspense is incredible.
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  • From kmplease on June 12, 2007
    omg that was so good i know you use a beta but please update soon, and when is sees going to kagome its him
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  • From fortunesque on June 12, 2007
    When I saw that you had updated this fic, I was so totally excited. I can't wait to see what happens next. This is one of the most well written fics I've seen in a long time.
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