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Reviews for Violation of Honor

By : Rinseternalsoul

From ness2g5 on April 22, 2007
Yay i swear i was going through violation of honor withdrawal... where ya been.... oh well great chapter as usual... will kags ever get her sight back... see ya at the next update... later
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From JLucPitard on April 07, 2007
I don't groove on the torture or D/s sex, but the building of the relationship between the characters is wonderful and I hope you're leading us up to a righteous payoff for the bad guys!
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From JenLazar on April 05, 2007
HELLO Rin!!!!I surely am sitting on the edge with this fic. You have such a flare for the torturous angst and drama. All I can say is your talent at this totally astounds me. I feel so sorry for the poor monkey prince. If Kagome could see she'd just go insane. I know I would. Knowing where she's at and being able to hear is bad enough but to "see" all this would just tear her to pieces. Oh, please don't let anyone but Sesshoumaru touch Kagome. And on that note, what of the little water girl? They'll all live to get out together I hope. I also hope Sesshoumaru gets to cut that Iku's privates off and stuff them down his throat. Things like Iku just shouldn't be allowed to live. Maybe Sesshoumaru should burn it off with his poison, slow and torturous. Yeah that guy has really just brought out the worst in me and believe me, for one that has endured emmense pain and discomfort, I don't wish pain on anyone but that thing just makes the thought justifiable. Love you lots, Rin. Don't be gone too long!!! Jen
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From DragonZero on April 03, 2007
Great STORY PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!!

Also about the tunnel part no matter how long you are stuck in the darkness or the tasks you may face there is aways light at the end.
Never give up the hope to reach it!

THough this might be somthing Kagome would think of because of her sunney disposition.
Well tell next chapter I will wait.
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From karlaslusher on April 03, 2007
*twirls around and falls on the floor!* i'm so happy you updated i'm acting a damn fool!! lol! hmm it took me a good thirty minutes to remember my username and password! lol! well, what can i say? i loved it! i definately liked how sesshoumaru soothed kagome with the whole purring? thing. it was very sweet! awwe! poor uchuu! i feel bad for him! i hope he doesn't get raped by iku! i hope he dies first! that would be a better fate than what lies ahaead for him if they are not rescued and he survives the night! ..poor uchuu! :-( ah, well... anyways! enought pity! lol, nah maybe not? i dunno, anyways, i wonder how shippou will manage to save them? and hmm what will kagome do when she finds out she's sharing the cel with a certain battered demon lord? haha, it would be seriously funny on sesshoumaru's part if he can't hold out to her incessant talking and ends up speaking to her.... or hmm maybe she gets her sight back before they are rescued? or damn... it would be big trouble for the kitsune if he reveals who kagome's cellmate is! i hope they find a way to defeat asuza! she's one evil biatch! well, enough rambling! i need some kind of sleep tonight! lol! please update soon! i absolutely adore this story! its very original and hmm... darkly-erotic? i think that fits well! haha, ah, well... as i was saying :-D please update this obsession of mine soon... because i don't think it's very healthy to check this story everyday and then get mad at it for not being updated! lmao.. yes i have no life aside from work and hmm i guess my husband counts? eh... sometimes i've been with him so long it's like he's melded in with me! lmao! well, anyways! thanks for mentioning me! and update soon!! *wink*
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From Demonlordlover on April 02, 2007
Finally. I have not yet found a story of yours I have not enjoyed. However, I am completely unable to disassociate myself from a good story, and unless I wanted to spend the last few months in depression, I waited for the 'turning point' in this story.

I loved Tortured Love, but, just like this one, I had waited to read it until AFTER they were out of the prison. Every chapter, I diligently checked to see where they were. I realize there's still some to go, but I can at least breath easier that at least they're together. Phew. I know, I am such a nut ball.

Anyway, in lieu of having waited so damn long: this is a great story.

Tearing Sesshoumaru down is both painful and necessary. I skimmed the rape scene with him as I think him 'getting off' on it, unwillingly at that, was probably the most horrible experience for one like him to experience. That, as you had it, was the breaking point for him. AS plot devises go, it was magnificently agonizing for me.

Kagome's introduction as a traveling miko displayed her strengths and set up a wonderful background. I know where she's coming from, where Sesshoumaru is, and now that they are together the story has no holes waiting to be filled in. Nothing but forward motion, baby!!

I appreicate your oc's, too many to describe and applaud seperately. I love it when 'real' characters are taken from Japanese history and used in a story. In the anime/manga, Takahashi does that as well, which makes this story all that much more realistic and canon to me.

Hmmm...what else...oh! The draw between Shippo and Rin. I think it is absolutely brillant to pair them. It's been done before, but your insight into their predicament leaves me wanting more of that particular subplot. Sesshoumaru is devoted to Rin in the anime/manga, so in a way, this is an opportunity for them both to move on to depend upon others-realizing that they are not alone, basically, that it's a big world out there, and there are others to turn to in need.

I am so excited now that I can safely read this without needing my effexor. LOL. Strange, that I love a good darkfic, but have to be able to see the light at the end of the tunnel before I can truly appreciate it. I am looking forward to more angsty self-revelations and possible tortures (for whomever you plan it for). ANd, given my undying loyalty to your stories, you'll be hearing from me some more, I can guarantee that!

Thanks for this new gem in my collection!!

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From swtdrm01 on April 02, 2007
I know it sounds crazy but that was both cruel and beautiful. I love your work and every chapter gets better and better. I hope you get to update soon again. I can't get enough from this story.
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From KawaiiKilala on March 20, 2007
Congrates to the beta and to your 2nd place award! I find that winning award at all over losing and not getting any award is way better. At first, i didn't read this story because i couldn't satnd sesshy being violated....but after a while of deep thought i decided to listen to a friend of mine (thanks mike!) and read your story. I found that its very descriptive, and deserves its award very much. The only thing i didn't like much was the Yaoi scean -but i just skipped that- i could never read about sesshy being rapped, but i understand that its either apart of the story and has meaning, or its needed for certain events to happen later. It was a bad turn of events for kags to become blind...but her healing powers seem to be healing her pritty damn well. I think that once the bump is gone, her blindness will be gone as well, and she will know who her silent cell-mate is.....I hope hshe helps him out.....
Can she by any chance take the evil spell off of the chains? and what about the drug? can she heal that out of his body? and did she heal all the wounds on his body? making his body at least scarless?
These are questions id like to be answered please....
UP-DATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!! :D
TTYL;
megan
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From karlaslusher on March 18, 2007
awesome! i have been checking for this story everyday! please update again soon!!
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From swtdrm01 on March 18, 2007
Thank you for updating. That chapter was great and I can't wait to read the next one. I hope it's soon.
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From JenLazar on March 12, 2007
Rin... I am sooo missing you. Please write more stuff. I especially can't wait to find out what happens in this fic. You have got me so keyed up with the need to find out more I keep looking here to see if you're back. I'm sorry...I know you have a real life and all,but you have just gotten me so hooked up in your twisted little world [and I say that with great affection and respect, honestly] You have given me a type of entertainment that no other has seemed to do. Just when I think I would never read such stuff you pulled me in with a really wierd sense of fasination and I can't get enough. More, please Rin, I want some more. Email me if you can to let me know if you've updated. I don't want to miss not one chapter when you first put it up. Ta...Jen
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From brainshake on March 03, 2007
Hi!
I've read many of your stories, and just recently stumbled upon Tortured Love and this one. I think TL was really good, but somehow this one beats it. I know it's still far from finished, but you have made a great work so far. You are really building up character and plot in this one, while TL was much "faster" with everything. Don't get me wrong, I thoroughly enjoyed reading TL. ;) I never knew I had a dark side, lol. XD
Anyway, back to the review of Violation of Honor.... Great characterisations so far! And poor poor Kagome to lose her sight! That happened to my mother once, but she got it back, and I hope Kagome does that too. But no rush, it makes it all so much more exciting. :D
I can't wait to read more of this story, and I really hope you'll update soon! Meanwhile, I'll go and check out your other stories that I haven't read, and perhaps make some more fanart. :D (I don't know if you know it, but I have once tried to draw Anubis, see lazyjenny.deviantart.com)
Keep up the good work! I'll be back soon to see how you've progressed. :)
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From JenLazar on March 02, 2007
For you,Rin, I made an account here. If that's what it takes to review your fics, then so be it. I find myself totally hookedon your writing and that very unique imagination of yours. I know you have a family and a very busy life, but I just couldn't help myself, I just had to write in again and let you know I'm going stir crazy being left up in the air with your last chapter, the meeting of S&K. I'm praying you find alittle more time to write and put up more as this particular story just won't leave my brain alone. Oh yes, I have other favorite writers I'm currently reading, but you know how it is when certain stories just catch your attention and won't let go? That's you...every dang fic you write gets me so engrossed I can't help myself. Really, I'm not a nag, but Rin....PLEASE???
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From karlaslusher on March 01, 2007
i hope you update soon!!
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From Airy on February 23, 2007
I always love your stories. I hope you continue. It will be great to have Sessh protecting Kagome, and Kagome healing him.
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