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Reviews for Violation of Honor

By : Rinseternalsoul

From shioriimaru on February 22, 2007
Oh my, this chapter was so much fun to read. I'm so curious how long
Sesshoumaru will be able to keep his identity secret, well actually I'm looking
even more forward to the point when Kagome is finding out who the desperate
demon is she is sharing the cell with.

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From PinkPetals on February 15, 2007
omg your story is sad but it is true that many men are raped it's so wrong.ur story is so interesting keep it up.
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From moonlight737 on February 14, 2007
That was soooooooooooooooo sad v.v poor sesshoumaru. I hope kagoemes eyesight comes back and that he gets over his stuck up haughty self and lets her help him.heheheheh please update soon!
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From JenLazar on February 07, 2007
Hello again, Rin. I was beginning to wonder abit if you were going to update this anytime soon. Now I know you have another life and all, but you have got me sooo dang curious as to how this is going to end up that I couldn't help checking every single night I'm on. Congradulations on getting Risa to help with the beta work. Can't believe why you'd get turned down by any award for a few minor mistakes. I find that to be so inconsequential when the writing quality and storyline are so good. Your thought process, delivery, and desciption are phenominal and a few typos and such make no difference when you add up everything. It's not like you can afford to hire people to correct your work and still get it out at a timely rate. Sometimes I think people critize way too much. I really liked the meeting of our couple. I'm sorry Kagome is scared and blind, but I'm also glad she didn't have to see Sesshoumaru in the condition he's in. It would have been just another thing to give Sesshoumaru reason to want to end his life seeing as he contemplating the idea. This way he can watch her natural reactions and know that her kind and loving nature goes out to all, not just those she knows. He'd might think she help him just to use it as blackmail later...he really doesn't know her well enough to think otherwise and the thought of maybe InuYasha finding out would be a real kick in the gut. I'm starting to like the snow monkey too. He seems to be the only one keeping Kagome from falling into fear. Oh and Rin? PLEASE don't let our little Kagome get raped. Sesshoumaru's degradation is so hard on us fangirls out here...let Kagome be HIS Knight in Shining Armour. And I hope Sesshoumaru gets to rip that Iku's privates off...go straight down his throat and unmercifully pull it out...all heck, why not feed it back to him too why he's at it. Hey and I'm really a very kind and gentle person, but that guy's got it coming and as for the witch with a capital B...she's all yours. Hey Rin, is there any way I can get emails to let me know when you're going to update? I missed this one and I really want to read them when you first put them up. My email is: v-lazar@sbcglobal.net. I don't know if they hide them from you or not but I want to always know when you've got a story coming. As I told you before, I'm disabled and your fics keep me from having to live in this world of constant boredom. With your stories especially, I get so thoroughly engrossed that the hours seem like minutes. Oh and I wanted to ask if you write any other stories other than InuYasha. Your talent is so good that I'd like to read anything you write. So, until the next time you update this or Madman...TTFN Jen
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From Chococat on February 04, 2007
What an author you are! You inspire me with the quality, dedication, and imagination of your work. I've rad of your work across several sites and am blown away each time. I love how you portrayed Sesshoumaru. You wrote him beautifully. A straight being forced to live an alternate life. When he slit his throat that was profound. Then the scene with him getting taken from behind was powerful!!! So deep yet so poignant. You have a wonderful gift. His arousal coming so strongly against his feelings of rape. To find sexual satisfaction out his debasement. Shame and release all at once. Wow! You've raised the bar. Thank you.
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From candycrys on February 03, 2007
ahh poor sessy. i just want to take him into my arms and hold him.
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From Risa on February 03, 2007
Moving, riveting and hopeful. A wonderful chapter. Well done!
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From taintedeuphoria on February 01, 2007
*Note - I'm reviewing this after having read all available chapters (1-8).

I have to admit that upon recognizing that you were the author of this story my expectations for it sky-rocketed. I was not disappointed. I've been following your work on Single Spark for a short while, but the quality of your writing astounds me. I'm glad to see that it carries on.

Now to focus on "Violation of Honor"!

To see Sesshoumaru thrown into a position where his power and control have been stripped from him is unusual, though it has been done before. However, I've never seen it done to this caliber, and you play it out magnificantly. I'm not a fan of seeing him in a weak or submissive position, but I'm incredibly intrigued about where the story is going. Seeing him fight his own thoughts, insecurities, and emotions the way he has been...it's been breaking my heart, but I know there is happiness to be found at the end of the rainbow! It'll get there. Until there, please continue with the incredible writing. I'm eager for more!
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From cocoke5 on February 01, 2007
the story is great and can not wait for more of the story and you are doing real great and i love it i have be reading most all the story up here and your is real good . up date soon.
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From ANON - Risa on January 07, 2007
I've reread this story because it IS a compelling, well written, gripping tale. As I reread it, I am once again moved with sympathy, sorrow, anger and left with hope. I wish I could give it a higher rating.
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From ANON - Legilmyth on January 05, 2007
I have to say that this is one of the most interesting twists I have ever seen,I sometimes think that Sesshomaru needs to be seen in a way other then his cold distant self. I am looking forward to you continuing this story. I also like the twist of Kagome's blindness. Kudo's to you for originality. (At least in my experiance.)
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From ANON - paxydog on January 03, 2007
you have brought to me a new respect for all living things and being a
minority my parents taught me about slavery and things like that but it
never really hit home, how bad people really had it, i was always like
it happened to them not me but to think of some of the things slaves
went through and had to endure so i could live the way i do and constantly
complain and some of the things people come up with to put each other through
is unthinkable but you are skilled in your writting so as it's not offensive
and still entertaining plus the web sites for extra info are really
appreciated it's good to educate others and i admire the way you do it
through fanfic. you are doing a wonderful job and have a killer fic i'm
really enjoying readin it and can't wait until you update so i can see how
things turn out for kagome
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From ANON - amy on December 31, 2006
i hate that iku and azusa!!! sooo evil! please save sessho soon! i can only imagine the shame and humiliation that sessho must feel, and such a mammoth of difficulty to overcome, especially with a kagome gone blind? will she be able to see again? update again soon! happy new year
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From ANON - Tana-san on December 30, 2006
Wow, Rin, you are phenomenal at writing this stuff...truly you are the "Queen of Smut" as you have been so dubbed by others. I really thought to go past the yaoi thing, but again, your talent at writing this stuff [however twisted it may be] has me totally hooked on reading every line. Thanks for thinking about me in your reviews. I am truly fascinated at your talent and skill in keeping your readers so engrossed in your stories that all "good morals" are tossed aside! Wow, this last scene with Sesshoumaru being male raped had me so tense my own butt was revolting the intrusion! I've had tests that require that passage to be used and it is definately "a one way street". Can't seem to wrap my mind around how anyone can find pleasure there. I'm just itching to jump into this story with 21st century weaponry and unload my own wrathe against these people. Anyway, keep on writing Rin Girl and I'll keep on reading cause I just can't seem to stop. I'm under your spell for as long as you write. I bow respectfully to you as you are one of the few true masters of this world we call fanfiction!!!
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From ANON - Lissa on December 30, 2006
I just enjoyed reading everything that you have written so far. I hope that Kagome gets her vision back. I can't wait for you to update and will be keeping an eye for it. I gotta find out how those two hook up. Take care and Happy New Year.
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