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Reviews for Undercover Cases

By : kimisan
  • From loretta537 on August 31, 2008
    this is a goood story, please update it soon
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  • From KagomeMinamino on December 02, 2007
    This is so amazingly written...I do hope that you update soon! its been a year!
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  • From Animefreak242 on July 24, 2007
    Again (as I've reread the story and also left a review on Ryukotsusei's version), this seems like a geeat story. I like the flow and plot. Looks like it'll be very entertaining. You should always have a comedy with your action/drama. ^^ The only suggestion I have here is to take your time and to proof read. I'd hate to hear that a story with such potential was ruined because of a few stupid mistakes.

    Other than that... *gives you a cookie* Great first chappy. Here'a looking forward to the rest! ^^
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  • From ANON - star on February 21, 2007
    Love this two part thing
    Hope u update soon
    Plz
    :)
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  • From ANON - Cactusflower on December 17, 2006
    I can't wait to see what is going to happen next. Please, please pretty please update soon. Because I happen to like what you have written so far And I would like to see how it ends and what happens after.
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  • From ANON - Beggar on December 07, 2006
    WHERE'S THE OTHER HALF WHERE!!!?!!!
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  • From ANON - Tiffinie on November 30, 2006
    Damn, smut in the 1st chapter. Thank u. Thank u. Thank u. No wonder I love your stories. Now I have to go and take a cold shower. Later.
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  • From ANON - Neo-Crystal on November 30, 2006
    OH! I'm loving this story so far! Especially because its my fav couple!!! KUR/KAG ALL THE WAY!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - 5124 on November 29, 2006
    Where's the other half? I loved it! So hot!
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  • From ANON - Katie on November 28, 2006
    That was HOT! H.O.T. HOT! I'm looking forward to reading what they're going to do next.
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  • From ANON - Saharah on November 28, 2006
    Awesome story - I love the plot; very well thought out. Not to mention your writing style - you're excellent in switching perspectives and iterating character's thoughts and emotions. Love it so far, and I hope it's not a one-shot story!! :D
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  • From ANON - Animefreak242 on November 28, 2006
    *throws confetti* A new story. ^o^ I completely forgot about AFF until a few days ago. I'm really glad you've come back and posting some new pieces. ^o^ Interesting idea you and Ryukotsusei have, making this a joint-tish effort; each focusing on a couple. Twice as much story to read! Yay~!! Well, this chapter was great. Very uh... steamy. You get an E for effort! *gives you both a cookie*

    I thought Hiei would have problems with Botan (given her disguise profession), but it looks like Kurama'll have just as hard a time with Kagome. I hope Kurama won't be tired in the fights tommorrow. Speaking of which, are they picked at random or are there drawings (like the Dark Tournament)? Because if it's 'random' I think Kuarama would be one of the first to be picked since the bosses don't like his "attachment" to Kagome.

    Can't wait to see the other twists you'll throw into the story as well as what happens when the bad guys start connecting the dots concerning Botan, Kagome, Kurama and Hiei. But that won't be for a while, yes? A two-day competition, plus the aftermath has to be at least 3 chapters. Until then, I'll be waiting for your updates and connecting some dots of my own. *wavies*

    ~Animefreak242
    aka
    Kawaii Girl
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  • From ANON - Shiva on November 27, 2006
    Yes this is so fuckin great!! Don't Ryokotsi got one too,but on Botan/Hiei?
    But I'm just happy I got the Kur/Kag version. Update soon
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  • From ANON - Hillary (Ryokomaru) on November 27, 2006
    YAAAAAAAAAAAA I WANT MORE PLEASE ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on November 27, 2006
    Hee I'm glad you finally had Kagome tweak his ears, they really are too cute. This is a great colabration of stories and I'm really enjoing this. Vampmistress76 did a similar story but the girls were the slaves, I like seeing this twist, too yummy.
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