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Reviews for The Choices We Make

By : Dante1444
  • From mamarita on January 16, 2008
    Sano and Naraku in cahoots together, or Sano submissive to Naraku? I don't like this- maybe Naraku is going to try and force Kouga to come with him in lieu of wiping out the wolves. I think it's time for InuYasha to really get the upper hand on Naraku!
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  • From dac720 on January 14, 2008
    I am really enjoying the story so far, having the four guys together at the springs was so hot (no pun intended). I cannot decide which pairing I like more, them or the brothers and their “pet” monk. In ch.13 I couldn’t help but snicker at the phrase “ Now, get in there and breed my grandson!” poor Inuyasha getting uncomfortable advice from the in-laws already. As to my theory about Naraku, I’m guessing that he took Sano as a pet to gain control of his lands like he was planning with Koga.
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  • From mamarita on December 24, 2007
    That was one hot chapter, and not just because of the springs. I am glad that InuYasha came up with that idea to keep Ginta and Hakkaku out of trouble with the rest of the pack. I supposed it is inevitable that InuYasha has to meet the head wolf, and get his approval. If there is going to be any fighting done, it should be at that time. And of course, InuYasha will endear himself to the old one (maybe a surprise attack by some demon and InuYasha saves his life with Tetsauiga.
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  • From ANON - Zak on December 23, 2007
    Aww i feel bad now. They were fake flames so no arguments in your head mmk? Lol the "everyone gets to cum" had me laughing for a while, you definitely lived up to the expectations that it set. Again, it's so unpredictable and awesome, keep it up!
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  • From nm1716 on December 23, 2007
    I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON.
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  • From wolfluv on December 23, 2007
    `WHAT CAN I SAY???? WOW!!! AND DAMN.......... THAT WAS HELLA HOT!!!!! I WAS TOTALLY IMPRESSED WITH THIS UP DATE CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU WRITE OUT NEXT!!! SORRY ABOUT THE WRITERS CRAMPPING GOING ON THOUGH! WISH I COULD HELP! BUT WHAT DO YOU MEAN ONLY TWO MORE CHAPTERS???? CRYS LIKE A BABY.... THIS IS JUST TO DAMN GOOD TO BE ONLY TWO MORE CHAPTERS UNLESS YOU'RE WORKING ON A NEW ONE??? SMILES AND HOPES!!! THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!!!!
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  • From kogaluver on December 23, 2007
    Hot, very hot indeed. Once again thank you for making my night. I'm gonna sleep a lot better now ^_^ I think majic does play a big part with demons, so I think it's totally believable where the wolves live. Hope you're enjoying the holidays.
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  • From ANON - minkuru on December 16, 2007
    ^_^ hi there i just loved your story *cuuueee* lol i could not stop reading it from the moment i read the frist chapter. great work!!!! hope you keep it up.
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  • From mamarita on November 18, 2007
    IT will be interesting to see what happens when InuYasha gives Kouga a chance to be in charge, but apparently uke is uke and he won't get his fantasy. However, it is said that the uke actually can control the seme- if the seme doesn't please the uke, things just never get to where they should be. InuYasha I think knows that this is most difficult for Kouga and will do whatever is necessary to make the transition from alpha to beta as easy as possible, but the rest of the tribe is going to have alittle problem with a InuDemon for a pack leader, I suspect, and Kouga won't be able to fight THAT battle for InuYasha!
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  • From ANON - Zak on November 12, 2007
    *rolls eyes* uh-huh, sure, like Im believing that lol. So i figure that Im becoming repetitive by constantly praising this fic. So Im gonna say that this chappie was horrible -yes, thats a lie, but its the principle that matters lol. Seriously, Id have to say that this is my favorite fic... Even though this chapter was full of tiny teasing sex scenes *evil glare*
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  • From on November 12, 2007
    This was rally interesting, I am looking forward to the next part.
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  • From solitare1 on November 12, 2007
    Well...that was painful. Just leaving everyone "hanging" like that could lead to color problems(lol)(blue in nature). I'll be waiting for an uppy soon I hope.
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  • From wolfluv on November 12, 2007
    I think that maybe kouga can't get it up yet it is because they are newly mated. And some how his instints know that Inuyasha isn't ready for that to happen because he still needs re-afirm that he is now kouga's alpha. I think with some more angst with Kouga and Inuyasha the way you've put it in this chapter. I think that maybe kouga should ask the healer and tell her why he is so depressed and explain what he told Inuyasha on the way home.

    I mean Kouga just gave up some much in such a short amout of time. I also think the healer should tell him that there is a way to reverse the mating mark... but she should tell him first the reason why he's not allowed to get it up when it comes to trying to mount his now alpha.

    I think Inuyasha should over hear just that part while he leaves Kagome should hear how the mating mark can be reversed. But will Inuyasha want it reversed will Kouga for that matter? If it happens will they both be happy? Let's just say the only way it could happen is if Inuyasha allows Kouga to be released from the mating mark in some cerimony that Kagome totally encourages but both seem reluctent to take part in.

    But Inuyasha remembers how depressed and sad Kouga was when talking to the healer. Some thing later on maybe brings them back and they both realise that they never wanted the mating marks taken away and that they truly wanted to be together and that they had acutally fallen in love and did not realize it until it was almost too late...?

    I just love this story!!! Please don't stop and by the way you could look for a beta to help with your story... I wouldn't mind I mean if you were looking. I can't wait till the next chapter I was so affraid you'd given up on this story! I am so releaved you didn't! Nice job on cutting everyones pleasure off by the way! I really liked the chapter I'm not sure what you didn't like but it flowed very well and still kept the story line!

    anyways I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From nm1716 on October 31, 2007
    I love your story and can't wait to see what happens next. OMG, That was HOT. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON.
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  • From ANON - Zak on September 26, 2007
    Uh-huh, sure the pain was from writing, like I'll believe that lol. That was a hot chappie, H-O-T! I agree that unpredictable stories are much more interesting and stuff. Well, 'til next time! Hope things in RL work out.
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