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Reviews for Heaven & Earth

By : lyiint
  • From ANON - ennov on December 08, 2006
    Ah... i hate that Mitsukai.... kill her please... man i can't stand her.... sobs... haha sorry that i insult ur OC hehe ... this is a nice piece of work so keep up the work and upload more soon~
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  • From ANON - DemonGoddess061 on December 08, 2006
    This, and a few other stories, such as "Day to Play" and "Torn" by Hanyou Slave are some that I do that with (there are more, but I won't get into that at the moment ^-^). When there is a lack of updating, I go back and reread my especial favorites while I wait for new stories to be updated.

    On to the chapter....one of the things I like about this particular fiction is that you manage to keep Sess pretty much in character, even while battling his emotions, and being a human. Which, as you're showing, has him fairly distraught, even tho he's not necessarily SHOWING that!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2006
    I'm rereading this for probably the fifth time, actually, hehe. It's really a very good story. I enjoyed it the first time I read it, and I have enjoyed it each subsequent time I've read it.
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  • From ANON - DM on December 07, 2006
    Yay! Chapter 5 is my fave (drool) Great job! ^_^


    -DM
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  • From ANON - 84trillion on December 07, 2006
    WOW. This chapter was fabulous. I think your Sesshomaru is as in-character as he can be in this circumstance, and I really admire that. This is such a great story, I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - gen on December 04, 2006
    saw this entire story elsewhere... and found it excellent
    hope you write more...

    I think Sess is slightly weaker, but his character is not too far off
    works for the story, which is the main thing
    i'm not sure i like what you did with his eyes
    because i thought their golden eyes were perfect for them

    when you used tarnished, it made me reflect
    but i'm sure you had your reasons for the physical changes you made
    but ... it brought pictures of gladiator to my mind
    not crowe though...
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  • From ANON - Sara T. on December 04, 2006
    You could use a bit of betaing, otherwise it's good. I'm interested in figuring out where this is going. >D
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  • From ANON - Nikkie23534 on December 03, 2006
    It's a truly AWESOME start! I can't wait for the new chapter!~ B reading U!!
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  • From ANON - ydjessy on December 03, 2006
    I love your fan fictions, but I was wondering are this the exact same ones you have posted on fanfiction.net
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  • From ANON - thedah on December 03, 2006
    aww! You posted this one here too! Great! I have been waiting time when you will post your stories in aff.net. :P
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2006
    sounds interesting
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  • From ANON - DemonGoddess061 on December 03, 2006
    COOL! Had NO idea you hadn't posted this here. It's a wonderful story, and I'm sure readers here who've not had a chance to read it yet, will really enjoy it!
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  • From ANON - Demitria Miriam on December 03, 2006
    WOW! You're FINALLY posting this HERE?!! I'm SO excited for you! This is seriously the BEST Sesshomaru uke fic in the world. I mean seriously, people think ukes are whimpering babies who have no control over sexual situations or anything else; that's not true! They actually have TONS of control and... I'm getting off the topic.

    ANYWAY! I'm SO happy this is here! I get to read it all over again! Hooray for you!


    -DM
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