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By : nomdeplume
  • From LadyLaran on January 18, 2007
    Oh my gods, how can you leave us hanging like this? GAHHHHHH!!!!! I hate cliffies!

    *grins* I love this story. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before now, things just get hectic and it's easy to forget. This is a great story and you're doing great. To be honest, it'd be awesome to see if Kagome and InuYasha can get away with the 'mating' if Sessy and Miroku make it. Nice pairing, btw. You don't see it too often.
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  • From szaugg on January 18, 2007
    Eeek, you killin' me here! Nicely written, liked the lemon. Nice scene, woo hoo! I'll just be quietly dying over here while I wait for the next chapter. It's so unfair, 'I' get to write cliff hangers, but no one else gets to, isn't that the rule? ;-)
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  • From szaugg on January 17, 2007
    wheeee, you reviewed my story!! I am so flattered you like that sucker, because I just LOVE this story. So good. I am going crazy here. hmmm, familiar smile, so that means they probably know the demon, but I have no clue who it could be. I'm probably going to be smacking myself in the head for not knowing when we find out!

    Okay, the one neg: Miroku dancing with the guy. I havne't gone back to re-read it (although I'm sure I will!), but on first pass the reasons given for him going out on the dance floor didn't totally work for my brain. I honestly couldn't say exactly why, it just...rang off a little. But every other part of that scene really worked for me. The description was nice, Miroku eating off his plate cracked me up, and of course Sesshoumaru jealous is just cute and hot at the same time.

    Oh, the bet was a great touch, too, especially Shippou's total cluelessness. I cannot wait for more. Literally. Death could happen. Which would be sad, because then I'd never get to finish MY story, which would make you sad so..i guess we better just both keep righting, LOL.

    Oh, and re: the buddhism thing? I ended up using this sucker: http://www.jref.com/forum/archive/index.php/t-4880.html It's a forum where they were discussing this exact question, and a person who has been a monk was answering! It was really interesting, as they mentioned sects that can't marry as well...stuff I figure we could use, eh? Oh, I should say I'm not trying to say anything about the story to put this in or anything, I just love sharing the research stuff, heh. Man, I'm a geek! Geekette, maybe.

    Anyway, again, I just love this story. Can't wait to see where it's goin'.
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  • From ANON - szaugglaughs on January 14, 2007
    ooops, almost forgot something I wanted to say! I love your story so much, I wanted to mention one thing. Half a sentence, somewhere in the middle, when Miroku is giving up his robes. I got the impression from the sentence that he is giving them up because of his own personal convictions as a person AND because he is planning to get married. If I'm right, I figure you might like to know that in Japanese buddhist tradition, monks can actually marry. Someone pointed this out to me in a story of mine, and from what I can tell from the research I did, that seems to be true. Just thought you might like to know!
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  • From szaugg on January 14, 2007
    okay, let's see...

    OMG!!!!! How could I have not read this before! I love this story, woo hooooooo! Miroku is one of my favorites, and with Sessh this way! So sweeet and touching and hot all at the same time And you have an FMA story too! Life is good!

    Ahem, okay, now that that's said, heh...I really, really enjoyed this story. I love the flow and pace of the writing. The dialogue was nicely done. Something i really like is the pace of the emotional changes. The memories, how Sesshoumaru reacts, Miroku's reaction to Sango and Sessh. both, especially when he's so 'scary' at the beginning. Nice.

    I also enjoy the humor. Inuyasha's 'can I tell Jaken,' is one that stands out, but there were a lot of one liners and moments that cracked me up.

    The scene with baby inuyasha with sesshoumaru was very touching and sweet, and I thought it was even more poignant when we found out it's his own baby. I got all choked up. I just...I really, really enjoyed this story, that's all I can say. I look forward to the rest of it. REALLY look forward to it.

    Oh, and nice twist with the Lord Hitomi.
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  • From ANON - vampress on January 08, 2007
    That was an unexpected pairing Sess & Miruko, but it was a pleasant surprise. I read all 16 chappies interesting & fun. but it the fic complete? if mot please email with updates. The story seems to have more to tell. ;)
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  • From ANON - kittykittyyaoigirl on December 31, 2006
    That isen't all is it? Come on that can't be all. I wanna see Sango get her ass kicked by a pissed off Sesshoumaru. Oh and in the last three chapters there are a few spelling and grammatical errors. And why does InuYasha call him Chichi-ue? He should be calling him Oto-San. It's a more familiar term for father. Chihi-ue means 'honorable father' so it is a formal form of address. And I like this. Will you be updateing anytime soon? Arie Date.
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  • From ANON - fuuha on December 28, 2006
    This is a very sweet story! I love it very original. Keep up the good work I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - SilverYaoiHellion on December 23, 2006
    I hope Sesshomaru gets pregnant again in the near future!!! I love the fact that Sess was fighting and almost killing his own son, and now, they're back together! Please hurry with the updates, I want to read more!
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  • From ANON - Yume on December 23, 2006
    Nice fic.
    lol. Keep it up. It really is interesting.
    Perhaps the reason as to why you don't have much reviewers is because many people are lazy, or they are just a bunch of jealous people.
    ^_^!
    Okay, maybe you just don't have much graphic sexual scenes. That's how most people who come on this site are.
    Whatever, just forget them and, by all means, continue telling us your tale.
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  • From ANON - Tenshi Youkai on December 22, 2006
    Oh..Um...AH...HOLY SHIT!!!!

    First that bit with Miroku and Sesshoumaru, Man, talk about HOT!!!! Then the battle, that I had to read twice because you put so many seemingly extra details into it!!! And now, Are you telling us that Sesshoumaru is Inuyasha's Daddy?????!!!!!! U just keep throwing the twists out and keeping us guessing!!! And How come Tensaiga is now fused with the Jewel?!!? Did I read that right?...Yeah that's what you said. Doesn't Kagome have to keep it pure?

    I really just have to say that I am stunned! Pleasantly, of course! But stunned! You have kept me guessing and I can not wait until you update this!!!!!!

    Wow! I still am just floored. Holy shit!!!

    Wow.


    Are you sure this is your first?
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  • From ANON - raeshi on December 21, 2006
    Great story. Poor Sessy! Sesshomaru and Miroku forever!!!

    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Dziva on December 21, 2006
    MORE MORE MORE PLEAAAASE!!!!!!! Must know how this ends!
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  • From ANON - Tenshi Youkai on December 20, 2006
    This is your first Fic? I am very impressed with it so far. I am very glad that you handled the rape scene with as much tact as you have. It could have been a very poorly done scene. You have given us enough detail to know what happened and allowed our own imaginations to fill in the nasty particulars.

    I would not worry about Sesshoumaru being out of character. After all, anything outside of what he did in the original is out of character for him. You have handled him very well and I can not wait to see what happens next. Your insight into the characters reasons for what they do is most impressive and I am so interested in where you take this!!!!!!

    Sesshoumaru was so cute with Inuyasha as a baby! They are so cute together!!! Will we get to see more of them together before Touga took Sesshoumaru's memory? I hope so!!

    Please remember to take your time updating as I would much rather wait a little longer and not see silly typing mistakes near the end. I know how easy it is to get tired of typing and just do it to get in done.

    Keep up the good work!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 15, 2006
    you're doing well for this being your first fic. ^-^ I can see where this would be difficult, writing about what the humans did to Sesshomaru. It'll be interesting to see how you show his father dealing with the cretins next chapter.
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