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Reviews for My Place in This World

By : morgainelafay
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 15, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Lissa on December 14, 2006
    I am not entirely sure exactly where you are wanting to take this story. So far I find it very interesting, kind of dark but that is what you are going for. Once I see more, I will have a better formed opinion on this. But, so far it is a really good story.

    (Break down your paragraphs a bit though. Makes it easier to read and understand.)

    Have great and safe holidays.
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  • From ANON - Faerie Demoness on December 13, 2006
    This is definitely a twist. Not to say that I like what Inuyasha has become, but I'm sure you're going to remedy that, yes? I hope you paint Sesshoumaru as the white knight, her savior as he truly is. Also, one little hint...break up your paragraphs and your dialog. It makes for easier reading, and easier to understand. That's all the tips for today! I can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve.

    Ja ne! ~Much Love~

    Faerie Demoness
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