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Reviews for As the next day pases

By : MIAMax
  • From madmiko on February 25, 2007
    Yeah, that chapter WAS cute. Shizuru is wicked to do that to her. Heh heh. I liked the idea that she was living with Shiz and Kazuma. Gee, where's my favorite little psycho in black? I hope you pair her with him in one soon. These are great!
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  • From ANON - madmiko on January 07, 2007
    Great chapter! Loved her friendship and earlier interaction with Kurama almost as much as her LATER interaction with him. Heh heh! Him finding her topless in detention was funny! Gee, did Koenma yell at them for taking so long to get to work? You've got to give Hiei a whirl with her. Lots of setting and short plot possibilities with them -- training at Genkai's, meeting at the wellhouse, the past -- where Inuyasha can blow a gasket, the present, as SD teammates, him sent to investigate her, etc. However, wherever, --just gotta have one!! And I've never seen a Chuu/Kagome piece -- guess they'd have to meet in a bar. All the SDs would die to find a drunken Kagome in bed with Chuu, wouldn't they? Or her partner and friend Kurama could freak out over her and Yomi. I'm looking forward to more of these -- they're great!
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  • From ANON - Babygirl on January 06, 2007
    I like this one. It was the best one yet. well keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Beggar on January 06, 2007
    LOrfl! I LOVE THIS! You should do full fics but I love your oneshots too.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2007
    Lol. That was funny. You know what you could do for the next Kur/Kag? Maybe somthing a little bit more dareing.I had a place in mind, but I forgot...damn.Just a thought. Anyway, My sick and twisted (not really....) mind wants you to write a Kagome/Shinobu Sensui. Would you??? I really have never seen this pairing but I would like to, because I'm like that. lol
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  • From ANON - Elli Mac on January 06, 2007
    Love your series of oneshots. How about a Yusuke/Kagome/Kurama or Kuronue/kagome /yoko pairing. for an idea, Well good luck love ya!
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  • From swasdiva on January 04, 2007
    Great one-shot. The last line..."approval" was abso-smurf-ly priceless. I mean *ingenious*. Freaking fantastic. Made my entire day.
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  • From ANON - madmiko on January 03, 2007
    Ha! Loved the stamp of approval! I'll give this story MY stamp of approval. More!
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  • From ANON - bluemoon_175 on January 02, 2007
    I must say this was a fantastic ch. I wish more people would write more Kagome/Koenma stories. I have read a few but I must say this one was fantastic I'm only sad that it's a one shot and not a story. Maybe you can think of making a Kagome/Koenma story later on, but do what you want. I just hope you UPDATE ASAP PLEASE.
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  • From magiknight on December 30, 2006
    I want to be mad at you. I really, really do, but I can't. Great story, sad ending but I'm all for angst and personally I can't write fluffy to save my life. It may be bitchy but I didn't think Yusuke deserved a happy ending anyways. I can't wait to read the rest and I'm still watching Behind the Music for updates as well.
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  • From ANON - Snap on December 18, 2006
    Good start, continue soon.
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  • From ANON - madmiko on December 17, 2006
    Okay -- loving it already! Kagome/YYH hunks are usually my favorite one-shots. Even for a 2-shot, you've got a great set-up to take this particular one in a couple of directions. You could continue on to a Yusuke/Kagome story or take it off to Kurama or Hiei. Love that! (Actually, I feel kind of sorry for Kurama if he doesn't get her in this one. Yusuke made a MAJOR mistake -- don't know if he should get the benefit of forgiveness.) But, I can hardly wait for the rest of it -- please post it SOON! And MORE!
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