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Reviews for Lost Innocence

By : Vague
  • From ANON - sweetkijo on January 07, 2007
    Damn, that was really hawt. You write sexual tension really really well....thanks so much for this little desert. Take care and I will review you later.
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  • From OpheliaUndone on January 05, 2007
    Oh. My. Lord. Yes.

    Right now, the little fangirl in me who loves Sesshoumaru and Kagome is smiling like a crazy person while the little hentai in me runs around her going "Squee!".

    And my brain is on fire. On the floor. Well done.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2007
    OMG!!!!!!!!!! your so good at this!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kawaii Kilala on January 05, 2007
    Hmm...well, if you can take a lap top with you, like I do at my colledge and at my work as a secretary for a Vet., you might be able to type up a bit every now and then...like some professors in my classes just ramble on and on and on, but I have found If I just pretened to be reading over my *notes* I can IM my friends who may be in that class or in a different one, or read one of your story, or some one elses, or Review yours or some one elses, Or (I know, allot of 'or's lol) I could continue with my own personal story, which I'm thinking of doing something with, but I'm still not sure it's up to my standards yet...~_^
    Ok, back to your story!
    I was getting really ecsited(sp) and then I read/imaginarily hear 'Kagome!' I imagined it was Puppy cuming, but no, it was only Inu getting all in the way again, and being a party pooper!
    I was almost disapointed, until I heard/imaginly hear Kagome tell Puppy about his treat!
    I was salviating at that point! Just imangining it made me hot! I trully cant get over your story! It's just so great, and realistic, what with all of his arrogent 'I belong to no one' stuff. But you forced him in the end, with his desires working against him as well...he stood to no chance with you and his own desires after him!! ^_^
    I am a patient being, most of the time..., and I can wait because the "real" world is "more important" than ours, apparently...
    Good luck at school/work and I hope you get time soon to up-date, but, quoteing my mother, "Your studies come first! Not fantises and boys!" LOL! :-P She thought she knew me, but she didn't! Obviously!
    But really, finish school so you can write more stories!
    TTYL;
    megan

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  • From ANON - Hillary (Ryokomaru) on January 05, 2007
    WAAAAAA NOT NEARLY ENOUGH!!!!! I WANT MORE MORE I TELL YA MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Naomi on January 05, 2007
    Damnit, my entire review got deleted. Oh well. I'll just do it again. Now chapter 4 was definitely delicious. I'm usually not into games, but the dangerous game that Kagome and Sesshoumaru are playing is something on a different level. You have an amazing way with words. I haven't read a story that makes me tingly like this one does. Not in a long while. You've definitely got the smut down to a "t". I can't wait to see what you have in store.
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  • From ANON - Naomi on January 05, 2007
    Haha, thanks for the compliment. I grown to appreciate how uncommon my name is.
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  • From ANON - Tana-san on January 05, 2007
    hey girl...got back from that shower just in time to read chapter 4. You see by chapter 3 you had me in such a twist that I had to review quick and amend my "problem" that your fic caused me.[only in the best of ways my friend] Now I know what "between a rock and a hard place" means and being as old as I am I would have thought of that one sooner. I sooo very much like how you're putting the "puppy" endearment in this. It just keeps me smiling and just as I knew it would, they were interupted. Dang and things were getting sooo hot. Well, my very talented friend, I must go now as it's nearing time for my own handsome guy to come home and since you made me get a shower and then I came back to read the rest, well, maybe I might get lucky this morning! Oh, and before I leave...DON'T EVER DOUBT YOUR TALENT!!!You, my friend, have a very rare gift to write AND tell a story, BOTH superbly. The little mistakes are not of great importance,that will refine itself with time and experience. So, rock on, Vague!!!If you don't update sooner, have a great weekend!
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  • From ANON - Tana-san on January 05, 2007
    Oh my, my, my!!! Hmmm...Vague, girl you just got what it takes!!! I can't ever seem to tell you enough. This fic is just sooo erotic that I really need either a release or a cold, cold shower. Since my husband is working I guess it's the shower again!!! Dang, that had me feeling needy. I'm just all trippy trying to write this review! I'm waiting for round two, hopefully fulfillment,but it seems just whenever these two try to fully get it together, someone or thing always stops the monkey dance! Is what Kagome is going through with the all naughty girl thing because of the jewel? I got so caught up in the flow that I forgot to ask. Anyway, I like her being the aggressive one. It's is, really, quite a great feeling to have that power and effect over your man. I so love when mine submits. It's really and ego booster, but fun nonetheless.
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  • From ANON - madmiko on January 05, 2007
    Wow! This story is just so hot! I missed seeing the last chapter until just now -- sure wish this site gave alerts! Love Sesshoumaru giving in like that -- see, all he had to do was give in to get what he wants. Great how that works, isn't it? Can't believe Inuyasha interrupted them like that! And telling Kagome that her scent made him grope his wife -- what's up with that? That's just sad on his part. I can't wait for her night with Sesshoumaru! And why not let Inuyasha know? After all she did for him to get what he wanted -- he should be happy for her getting to have wild sex with a demon lord! (Heh heh!) I'd love for him to hear them -- especially when he realizes Kagome is the dominant one. Ha! Then he could really go home to his wife and fantasize, huh? Can't wait for the next chapter! Update when you can!
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  • From ANON - Lillian9 on January 05, 2007
    Of course will I continue to read your story!
    Hmpf. InuYasha is REALLY a jerk... sometimes ;-) Poor, poor Puppy. He is simply not allowed to... come *blush*

    I hope it doesn´t take you long to get used to your new schedule. Can´t wait till your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - SesshomaruCrazy on January 05, 2007
    This is a great story.. I love the way you made Sesshomaru submit to kagome..
    I think it's awesome that she has him under her skin so to speak..
    Cant wait for the next update so plz hurry..
    Hope you holidays were good..
    Take Care and hurry plz.. :)
    Mari
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  • From ANON - amhor56 on January 05, 2007
    My god! Woah! That was hot! Man oh man! My favorite line "This Puppy belongs to you". Woah I would give up my left arm to be with Sesshoumaru. Very nice Lime/Lemon. Can't wait for what happens at night! Now I know you said you probably won't update as soon as you have been doing, but I can't help but bega dn hope you write on before Monday.

    On another note, thanks for answering to my review. I honestly don't think you failed at this story. Because in a way it is Dark Erotic. He needs to be dominated and that is what dominatrix is. I know you know this but, for others who don't, dominatrix is a sort of sado-masochistic relationship where the woman dominates. And that is Dark Erotic. So in my opinion you did acheive it. Congradulations and don't beat yourself up over it. And on another note, yes I do remember that, if you go back to your reviews and check it out, you'll see I thought it was simply funny and I wasn't angered at all. But so what if they got upset that doesn't mean that they should give you angry e-mails saying they will never read your stories again. You know what I bet that they just said that to make you feel bad and they read your stories but don't review them.

    Well thanks for answering to my review. I feel lucky! Bye!
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  • From ANON - angel on January 04, 2007
    wow that was hot i love it .. and now he belong to her ... hehehehe please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From mrskgoodman on January 04, 2007
    DAGGIT!!!! You left me drooling waiting to see what was next.
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