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Reviews for Lost Innocence

By : Vague
  • From ANON - sasha on January 04, 2007
    this story is the best. i absolutly love the idea of sessy being all submissive. i really hope you will update everyday because i want to read every bit of this story. i'll be waiting on pins and kneedles. your fan sasha
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  • From ANON - Sweetcakes on January 04, 2007
    Another very hot chapter! Looks like poor Sesshy doesn't know what hit him, and it looks like this is only the beggining! And I would never say you suck...well, maybe your spelling at times, but not your writting. ^_^

    I think I'm starting to get an idea of what it is that Kagome lost, but I don't want to say anthing in the event that I'm right and spoil it for your other readers. I'm curious to see if you'll Sesshy be the dominant one (at least once) just to soooth his ego. It's kind of funny watching him taken down a peg or two, or three or four. It makes for one heck of an interesting story.

    This is looking to be another one of your great ones, and I plan to be along for the ride, waving signs of encouragement and keeping the Spank Vauge fan club alive...hee hee.

    Till the next chapter,

    Sweetcakes


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  • From ANON - eddie-KA! on January 03, 2007
    *fans self*

    OH LORDY, LORDY!

    That was great, please update soon!

    ^.^
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  • From ANON - Tori on January 03, 2007
    Game indeed! I like this game I like it much. The chapter was alluring even though short it held me and pulls me along for the next chapter. Can't wait to see.
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  • From ANON - Merely Truth on January 03, 2007
    Wow ! With you, sexual hot passion is displayed for our very great pleasure ! In the Photograph, the first of your stories I read, you put a lot of subtlety (right word ?) that bring your text to be delightful for me to read. I love it. And Kagome is so naïve and immature…
    In Lost Innocence, she has also some immaturity in the way she reacts by discovering sexual passion and mixing it with her temper. Such a wild miko warrior !!! I hope the poor Sesshomaru will be able, one day, to tame her maybee by giving her what she needs to know real love… (Is that your plot ??!). So thank you very much to share your passion to this interesting couple. You write especially HOT ! and I am glad to have another of your story to read yet.

    From a french reader,
    Bonjour de la France,

    Merely Truth

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  • From ANON - Naomi on January 03, 2007
    I usually prefer Kagome to play the innocent and pure role, but seeing her dominance over Sesshoumaru is definitely empowering. Not only that, but an insane turn-on! So is this all about the sex, or will something more come out of it? I'm so excited to see what else happens. This is wonderfully written and you've most certainly got me hooked.
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  • From ANON - Kawaii Kilala on January 03, 2007
    I am, as you may know, very picky on what I read, and what I review. I enjoy reading your stories, ALLOT!
    And I cannot help but notice, you have a rallent...
    This is a great story, and you should continue it if you can...I want to point out though, just to make it better of course, you made a few spelling errors, and I know you'll only listen to me if I show you the errors, but I just sujest that you read her alone time, before Puppy shows up, a little more carfully...
    Again! That is Just for makeing it more understandable to me, others might allready understand it, I know I do, but that one sentance was confusing to me...
    Other than that, it was stupendusly(sp)great! Hopefully You will continue with your own challenge, and I want you to know that I enjoyed the two stories I have read now, the Eyes of a Hunter, and this one, that I have decided to read your other ones...^_^
    Ok, I am rambling, I do that offten...
    SO! lol, continue with this story, and up-date as soon as you can, but I am patient so take your time!
    TTYL;
    megan
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  • From ANON - Hillary (Ryokomaru) on January 03, 2007
    WWWAAAAAAAAA I WANT MORE
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  • From mrskgoodman on January 03, 2007
    You are mkaing me feel like poor Sesshoumaru in this fic. I am waiting like a good little puppy for the next chapter. You know you always do this to me keep me on edge longing for the update. DAGGIT I need to get a life....lol.
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  • From mrskgoodman on January 03, 2007
    OH YEAH!!! I love the naughty Kagome.
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  • From ANON - poohbear on January 03, 2007
    luv ur stories please update soon
    luv
    pooh
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  • From ANON - Lillian9 on January 03, 2007
    Wow. He is going to burst if you don´t let him have her soon :-)! Poor puppy.
    Kagome is an eeevil vixen.

    I understand it very well if you can´t continue reading a story if Kagome or Sesshoumaru sleeps with another. I for exemple HATE it if Kagome turns demon (or IS an half demon/demon whatever, uäärgh!).

    Please update!!!
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  • From ANON - amhor56 on January 03, 2007
    Loved the chapter once again. There's something really special about this story. I can't quite put my finger on it though. Love that Sesshoumaru can't get it his way. In all the other stories, he always does. Nice change, I admit. And in reality, Kagome is stronger than him on some level. She can purify him. But he still is literally stronger than her. Maybe a better example would be, Superman and Kryptonite. Yeah, that's it. Once again, fantastic job in describing their sexual needs; I loved it. I am literally on my knee--because I have a big, painful bruise on it, and I refuse to use it--begging you to update soon.

    Oh and on another note. I love your muse and as you can see, so many readers do too. So please, tell her not to be afraid. The only reason that I could possibly think of that people would flame you, would be if the were completely ignorant. This is your story and nobody should tell you how to write it. And even if they don't like it, then tough, tell them to stick it where the sun don't shine and to stop whinning, just because they didn't get there way. Sorry for the ranting. It makes me mad to know that one of my favorite authors got, or gets, flamed. Anyways, update soon!!! I'll be looking forward to it.
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  • From ANON - Metis on January 02, 2007
    On the other hand, I can come to this story when 'Overly controlling Seshoumaru' starts to get on my nerves in other fics.
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  • From ANON - JadedInu on January 02, 2007
    Snap, I almost fell off the chair this chapter!

    Voyeurism, self-pleasure and domination! Naughty, Naughty, Naughty!

    But me likey! Please continue the Great Job!

    P.S. Sorry to the author of Cereal Box Romance but I agree!
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