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Reviews for Lost Innocence

By : Vague
  • From ANON - Sorceress on January 02, 2007
    Wow.... I like it better when a man denies that a women could have control over him and that one that he thinks couldn't does and he would always find it hard to overcome the feeling of having her. Con. Please
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  • From ANON - dream_queen on January 02, 2007
    Ooooh my is certainly a huge twist on the normal kag/sessy pairings. You did a good job at this I think you should write some other stories with sessy as the sub because he always gets to be the top dog. *pouts* >.>
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  • From ANON - angel on January 02, 2007
    man .. that was awsome i love it .. and will he win this time please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Sweetcakes on January 02, 2007
    Uhhhh...I think it's getting hot in here! Go Kagome! I'm gonna have to agree with demonlordlover on the description. Damn, everything I was going to say was going to be way TMI! For once I'm speachless!
    Well almost...I'm wondering what it is that Kagome lost when she made the wish? There seems to be something more going on there that may need elaborated on. What did the jewel take that Kagome gave up?

    Keep up the wonderful and, in my opinion, original work.

    Sweetcakes
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  • From ANON - Demonlordlover on January 02, 2007
    I read the first chapter a few days ago but wanted to wait and get the next chapter before I reviewed. It was interesting, to say the least. I've never read a more sensual description of a male, let alone Sesshomaru, pleasuring himself. The tidbit about him dismissing the idea of using another woman was great. I hate it when he's with someone else. Before her that's okay. Once he's been with Kagome...nope.

    As for the dominant/submission role I can see some people having a problem with it. Sesshomaru is Sesshomaru after all. HOWEVER, I can see it. Most men who go for that role do so for that very reason. They want the release of being in control and find it a huge turn on. So far (as I can't see into the future or your plans for this story) that appears to be the motivating factor in the all powerful Taiyoukai allowing Kagome to dominate him. His pride might object, but his subconsious lusts for it.

    I do wonder if him being inuyoukai could play a part in it. Dogs were tamed to be man's (or woman's) best friend and companion. Maybe what's he's been missing all these years is a strong collar and a stout leash. LOL
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  • From ANON - amhor56 on January 02, 2007
    Love the second chapter. Yea, Sesshoumaru better go begging back. What I wouldn't give to be be Kagome. Ahh...damn, his sexy eyes. Blah! Loved the way you described his need. Made we want to be there and comfort him, if you catch my drift. Hehehe. Anyways, enough of my sexual innuendos. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Tori on January 01, 2007
    Gah I could kiss you....no Wait hug you then kiss you! And all I have to say is this the Giggles continue. The gasp stil come to lips. And the Laughter still bubbles forth from my lips. Truly a chapter worth putting Sessy boy on the spot. Thanks for answering my questions now. This was a perfect highlight on sessy. This is going great indeed. Though the name of the second chapter didn't quite fit right ( Pain is more like it.) It in some ways does fit cause by the end he's going to give in....

    Tori

    P.S So what's next, I can't wait?

    And take your time don't rush it ok, have a good one
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  • From ANON - Kawaii Kilala on January 01, 2007
    Well, that DOES make sense! Although, I am sad he wont be called fluffy...but what can I do? You are the Author! Not me! I have no power over you! Which might be a good thing!
    I wish that I had her powers, I could use them like that some time...;-)
    OH! I almost forgot *snapps fingers*
    I am happy you replied to my review, and am glad that you decided to continue this story!
    I am also happy that you've given your self a challenge! And can't wait for Kagome to realize that she practicaly has the great lord wrapped around her finger!
    What will she do next time they meet...I cant help but wonder about that!
    This is really a great story!
    Hopefully I wont have to wait long for a new chapter!
    AND HAPPY NEW YEAR, although...it is a bit late for that...oh well!:-D
    TTYL;
    megan!
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  • From ANON - Jadedinu on January 01, 2007
    Holy Shit! Poor Kags better watch out, she's got a horny pissed off Taiyoukai after her!

    (Shivers in anticipation!) Please update soon! I love the twist on who the dominant half!

    Jaded Inu ;)
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  • From ANON - Metis on January 01, 2007
    Me again. See review on preview. Happy New Year!
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  • From ANON - shinigami on December 31, 2006
    yay! a girl taking charge for once I love it. i want to read what happens please continue.
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  • From ANON - Diane on December 31, 2006
    I like it so far. You did manage to hit a pet peeve of mine though, there is no thrusted, the past tense of thrust is still thrust. There is also thrusting & I think that's it.
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  • From ANON - amhor56 on December 31, 2006
    Woah! Have I ever told you that you write the hottest lemons ever? Because you do. Love it. I havent read a story like this one. Kagome being dominant? Simply genius. I would love for you to continue this story. But I believe I read in the author's note something about a One shot? Hmmm...
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2006
    You should continue it. I want to see the reactions of the other people when they find out about the two.
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  • From ANON - Pastel on December 29, 2006
    HOT! It was great. Update please.
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