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Reviews for Lost Innocence

By : Vague
  • From ANON - rowdygirl on December 29, 2006
    damn girl! you are one twisted sister! and i'm right there with you! lol.

    this is what i was talking about earlier in my review of 'mending a broken heart.' the writing in 'lost innocence' is tight and cohesive. this first chapter is you writing from your zone, crafting your tale. you write some of the hottest fiction i've every read [and i've read jacqueline suzzane, harold robbins and a lot of winter-warming romance novels], but i would read your fics even if there was NO sex because you are a good writer. you have a great imagination and you tell good stories. now get a good night's sleep and update soon...
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  • From ANON - jestergirl on December 28, 2006
    O_O i like, please update soon, lol
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  • From ANON - Hillary (Ryokomaru) on December 28, 2006
    WOW GOOD
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  • From ANON - shalamonde aka lala on December 28, 2006
    hoy shit!---that was good! more please, more!
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  • From Rebeldedm on December 28, 2006
    GAWH sure stop there update soon lol.
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  • From ANON - madmiko on December 28, 2006
    Very interesting! Like an aggressive Kagome having her way with Sesshoumaru! But I'm not sure I get the idea behind her "giving up her innocence" so Kikyou could live. And is she trapped in the Feudal Era or there by choice or can she go back and forth? I would enjoy at least another chapter of this story -- a "what happens next" kind of thing. Neat idea!
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  • From ANON - Lillian9 on December 28, 2006
    I knew it was you before I looked who was the author :-)
    It´s magnificent, as your stories always are! Interesting... tables turned... I hope our favourite dog demon NEVER gets bored of Kagomes little game!
    Please update soon (ALL of your stories!)!!!
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  • From ANON - Tori on December 28, 2006
    Oh My God! Ya know at first I was like confused cause at one point it looked like Sessy was winning the Kagome, and then at the end it cleard up and wow....I was like the writer pulled it off...I mean she pulled it off. You have the push pull thing going on but you really pulled it off, Bravo!!!*clapps.*

    Now what's next?
    Is sephy going to continue to let this happen?
    Is there going to be 50-50 he rules the kingdom and she rules the bed?
    Or is it going to be equal and he gets even with her?

    Lordy, lordy...you did it again, hey this story is just as good as the last one dear keep it up!!!!
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  • From ANON - Serendith on December 28, 2006
    Well written!
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  • From ANON - Sharr Martelle on December 28, 2006
    I like it so far, good job. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - CrackFiend on December 28, 2006
    you are ingenius to make kagome take control. i love it update asap! =]
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2006
    He ripped her top off of her and took her breasts in his hands squeezing it, pinching her nipples. She began to struggle as he caressed her clothed breasts.

    Slight conflict in that. And several spelling errors and grammar problems. You need a beta. But nice story concept so far.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2006
    Great =)

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  • From Odiee on December 28, 2006
    that was interesting.

    update soon.
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  • From ANON - angel on December 28, 2006
    wow that was awsome i love it .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now ... have a happy new year

    angel
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