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Reviews for On the Wild Side: Smutletts

By : ButterYasha
  • From Reymond on March 20, 2009
    Absolutely delicious hot little story, with tasting details...
    Thank you very much !

    A french mother and reader,
    Bonjour de la France !

    Merely Truth
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  • From ANON - InuYoukai on January 13, 2007
    More good Smut. Great Story.
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  • From ANON - madmiko on January 13, 2007
    E-R-O-T-I-C! Hot, fun, tense, and still beautiful on many levels. You are the master, and I am your grateful and appreciative fan. This one was incredibly satifying to the romantic heart that beats within us all as well as the hentai that controls the rest of us. Kudos!
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  • From ANON - Shiroikaji on January 09, 2007
    OMFG. I, Shiroikaji, am actually writing a review. The world has ended.
    Seriously though, I need to review this . Your stuff is really well written, I've been reading it since the first chapter of "Hanyou Fantasies". Heck, I even got my roomie into it (well, two of them, actually, but we don't have concrete evidence on the second...)! I used to check AFF.net almost religiously to see if you've updated. And yet, I have never written a review for you. It's not because I don't like your stuff, I'm just not the review-writing type.

    These past several fics of yours have been a little.....Off color. I'm by no means flaming you, but I'll be honest, I think you're making a big mistake heading into all that goth shit. It's just plain wrong, and I feel that you are disgracing the characters by putting them in those kinds of situations. I can see how you want to experiment, but what do you think this kind of stuff is doing to your mind? I've seen it before, a man (or woman) starts to fantasize about this kind of crap, and the next thing you know, it's the only kind of thing he can get off on. It's mentally degrading. One of my best friends used to be into FemDom, she finally saw how sick it was and came to her senses, and I hope you will too.
    It's also way, way, waaaaaaayyyy out of character for Inuyasha and Kagome. I mean, throughout the series, Takahashi has stressed Inuyasha's strong desire to protect Kagome. Do you honestly think, given his personality, that he would intentionally try to frighten her? No. And would one as gentle and sweet as Kagome like that kind of thing? I highly doubt it. Your style is as good as ever, but now the characterazation is so bad that I'm wondering what happened. Did something happen that really upset you? Is that why you've suddenly started writing such sick things? I'm writing this, not to flame you, but because you are such a good author, and I'm a little worried about you.
    I think it was a very smart decision to split the stories. There are many people (including myself) that don't want to read this kind of thing. And now you're probably asking "So then why are you reading it, and flaming me?!". As I said before, I'm not flaming you. I'm just trying to tell you that I think this is a risky way to go, and hopefully get you to come back to your senses.
    I will keep checking up on what you've written. I still like SGS. But I must say, everything since Redux (save for Kagome's To Do List) has turned me off to your work. But I'm certainly hoping that this last piece of comedy means that you are coming out of this dark phase, and turning back into the author I like so much.
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  • From ANON - szaugglaughs on December 31, 2006
    Read it and enjoyed it, as has so far happened with everything I've read of yours. I like the division of the edgier stuff from the more light hearted, and I always enjoy the interesting male perspective to all the scenes, which is really not so common, no? Anyway, thanks for mentioning you'd updated!!
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  • From ANON - wudelfin on December 30, 2006
    you diffently have talent my freind.
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  • From ANON - Kiyoko on December 30, 2006
    Hum. Well. That was......Okay, I'll be honest, it was squick-a-licious. But for some odd reason, it was also hot. I mean, I'm not really aroused after reading that (like I usually am after reading your stuff), but I might could be if I could just get my head wrapped around it. (I'm reviewing "Full Moon--Payback" BTW) I mean, it was VERY well written (what else coming from the master of smut?), but it's just a little hard for my poor little brain to imagine _Inuyasha_ and _Kagome_ doing that. Kindof a case of 0.o , you know? But still, well done I say. I like how you wrote Inuyasha-almost-demon. Very close to how I would have done it. (though I think he was playing with some serious fire that time, especially when he let go of Tessaiga...but it's not like you'll tell him I said that, and even if you did, I doubt he'd listen) Oddly enough, Kagome didn't seem to OOC. I mean, her having sex at all is rather OOC, but once you get past that (and I did a loooooooooong time ago), her reactions to Inuyasha were spot on. She trusts him, and that is obvious in both the Manga and your fics. You weren't kidding about the whole knife edge thing, this could easily have become rape. I'm glad though, that it didn't. I know too many authors who would have gotten carried away writing this, you did not. Kudos to you. For some odd reason, I really liked the whole blood thing. It fit. I mean, it was one of the worst parts in terms of squick, but you pulled it off, made it seem right. I am in awe of your talent as an author. Really. I'm trying to get a point across here, but I don't think it translates into English, so I'll end my babbling and hope you catch my drift.
    On to the prologue...
    Very nice. Very nice indeed. I am now battling over which "first time" I like better, and will think of as my "fannon". It's a tie between this, and "Through the Window". They're neck and neck, no idea which one'll win, photo finish I'd reckon. But anyway, I really liked this version. I liked how she was a little afraid of him, it seemed quite IC. The phrasing you used was perfect. I really, have nothing negetive to say about this one. Good work.

    About this whole "On the Wild Side" thing in general,
    A good idea I think. Both that you are exploring new things, and that you split the fics. There are some people who just won't want to read this kind of thing, to tell you the truth, there are days when I'd love to read "Some Good Shit", but wouldn't touch "On the Wild Side". And though I am a little weirded out by these new 'wilder' fics, I will continue reading them, because I want to see what you play with next. I want to see where your edge is. And don't worry, you'll never get a flame from me, though I may state that it is not something I would usually care to read, you are too good at writing for me to flame you. (flames are reserved for idiots who can't write readable English, the mary-sues who keep running off with Sesshomaru/Inuyasha/Miroku/Kouga/Jaken, or constantly pair Shippo and Kagome in NC-17 situations together) If I don't find the fic to be in my tastes, I will leave a constructive, detached review, or none at all. Though I want you to know that I like this new branch of smut, if only because it is interesting to see where these sorts of things can go.


    Kiyoko -|----

    P.S. When I was reading Full Moon--Payback just now, my roomie looked over at the comp and shouted "HE LIIIIIVES!!!!". She was sure you had up and died on us it would seem. *smirk* I'm glad you didn't. We are both looking forward to more of your work.
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