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Reviews for In Need of a Title

By : SnowAhriman
  • From kuramasgirl on April 09, 2010
    i have an idea for a title. how about "cresent moon dragon"?
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  • From KimonaYui on August 01, 2007
    I really like your story and hope you write another sequel to this story.
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  • From mistressofrain on April 26, 2007
    KAWAII
    !!!1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2007
    pretty good just fix some spelling errors and it will be great.
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  • From MistressTitania on March 06, 2007
    Intersting! I just watched an episode of Inuyasha on tv and wanted to find some yaoi to read. Great job your doing on this crossover. I look foward to more.
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  • From Reymond on February 19, 2007
    Hello ! I liked your story, cried on the lack of lemon. Understand : we're on AFF, the story is going well, they finally decided to do it and .... nothing ::::: FRUSTATED !!! And you wrote good details just before, arghhh !
    About a tittle, I propose "Unexpected encounter", something like that (I'm french and don't own a very good english, sorry).
    May I say, although being french, I did find you're making too much mistakes in the sentences ? Some aren't very fluent, or often are used the terms "the", "their", "there" not very well (in the first chapters), sometimes words aren't written entirely ("on" for "only", "he" for "the",...), or are false ("amassed", I discovered after a good time, signifies "amazed").
    WHY ? You see, the problem is that it becomes difficult to read the story with such problems to apprehend the text (especially for me, poor french people...) and when it's difficult, I don't feel the envy to continue, OK ?
    But I like Hiei, and with Sesshoumaru, I find it interesting to read. I will continue. Maybee you can find a beta ?

    Thank you for your story,
    Bonjour de la France,

    Merely Truth
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  • From ANON - trabeck on January 11, 2007
    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!!!^-^

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  • From ANON - Mona on January 02, 2007
    This is a great story and I hope you write another chapter.
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  • From ANON - Outlaw Angel on December 30, 2006
    OOOH AND THE STORY WAS GETTING SOOO GOOOD...
    update soon...i wanna know what will happen...
    will Hiei stay with Seshumaru or go back to Earth...
    sooo...keep up the good work..

    ya ne!!!
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