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Reviews for When Two hearts beat as one

By : Kanameko
  • From seriana on May 12, 2014
    continue with your story of Sesshomaru and rin which is on adult fanfiction leverages and puts that story in fanfction net that has this couple love stories varies too much this story continues. kissus
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  • From ANON - Midnight Star on January 08, 2007
    That lemon was hot!
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  • From ANON - Mmoirai on January 06, 2007
    Awwwww!!!! I am sooooo on a diet, and this is just waaaaaayyyyyy too sweet. You've got a nice piece of fluffy-ness here. I have a hard time with Sesshoumaru coming to his decision that he is in love with Rin so easily, but I have to admit, I do like the sweet stuff too. You know...the kind where while you are reading it you blush and smile and squirm because you feel like you're spying on a private moment. One thing I would suggest for your writing though, see if you can break up your paragraphs a bit. Spacing helps the reader foucus a little better and helps with the transitioning through the story....okay, I'll admit it, it's a selfish suggestion...it would help meeee read it more easily. Anyway, keep the fluff coming!
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  • From ANON - Midnight Star on January 04, 2007
    Despite the spelling and grammer errors, this is a good story and look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANGEL2006ASHLEY on January 04, 2007
    Awww that's so sweet. It's sad that they got called demons whores. It's so wrong. I love your story though. Please update soon. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - ASHLEY on January 02, 2007
    Awwww that's so sad and cute at the same time. Please update soon. I would love to know what happens next. Thank you for being such a good writer. Take care.
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  • From ANGEL2006ASHLEY on January 02, 2007
    That's so cute. Update soon. I want to know what happens next. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - ASHLEY on January 01, 2007
    I like this chapter. It's sweet and totally cute. Just so you know you do have some mistakes in this chapter. I just wanted to let you know. I don't mean nothing bad by it. Take care and continue sometime soon please.
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  • From ANON - Mmoirai on December 31, 2006
    This has the potential to be very sweet.
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